Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/1/20, 2:36 AM
Excellent. Your work gets me off every time.
2/1/20, 1:44 AM
Wow! I loved this story, love the concept. Keep it up.
2/1/20, 1:24 AM
It's a hard read because there are so many grammatical errors such as sentence fragments, etc. within the sentences. I'm happy that you continued the story, but you need to edit the work before you submit so readers can make it through your work without so much effort.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 11:01 PM
I really hope there's a backup of his mind stored somewhere. alternatively, having Alec find a note explaining everything when it's too late would make this feel like a kinky episode of the Twilight Zone or possibly Black Mirror.
firesix
1/31/20, 10:49 PM
Fuuuuuck. This is incredible. Your writing style and word choice is absolutely perfect. I couldn't write this well if I wrote for the next million years, and I'm a native speaker, so that's saying something. I really really hope for more, and I love this concept, this idea, and am so excited to see it continue. You're the best.
1/31/20, 10:28 PM
Martin, I really enjoyed this! Great job! That people feel something at the end is a credit to you as a writer. Can't wait to see where this goes.
1/31/20, 9:39 PM
really good story. Id love to collaborate with you on a story blufman1 on here email blufdude@aol.com
Anonymous
1/31/20, 9:14 PM
dude this is some of the hottest shit I've seen on here. the allure of nature. we're all animals
Martin
1/31/20, 8:44 PM
> As one who just found out they have colon cancer, a story like this becomes personal to me. I'm sorry to hear that. I really hope your cancer can be cured and you get well again! Writing about a terminal illness is always troublesome because there's always somebody who's affected somehow. But it was a pivotal point of the story I want to tell. --- > Unexpectedly sad conclusion :( I'm happy that this came across. It's a bit of a hard thing to do, to convey emotion, if the protagonist from which perspective you tell the story from, is just a himbo. But there are going to be more chapters and I hope you'll find the actual conclusion a bit more satisfying! --- Thank you all for commenting! Keep 'em coming please!
Anonymous
1/31/20, 8:37 PM
Unexpectedly sad conclusion :(
Anonymous
1/31/20, 8:19 PM
wish this was continued
Chicago Gay
1/31/20, 7:18 PM
Omg “Personal Toy” is coming back?! I love that story! I miss the obedient coach, and you were just getting started with the sexy officer. I’m so hyped for both series!!
Anonymous
1/31/20, 6:45 PM
As one who just found out they have colon cancer, a story like this becomes personal to me.
1/31/20, 6:10 PM
Good job man. A super hot and interesting start. Looking forward to the rest.
Jul 23, 2019
Anonymous
1/31/20, 4:53 PM
This was hot! continuous please!
lloyd311@aol.com
1/31/20, 3:47 PM
This, is an all-time favorite. I hope Monstermash finds some time for writing again soon. I need a fix : ) Thanks, man... LLOYD
lloyd311@aol.com
1/31/20, 3:44 PM
Just rereading this series, which is one of my favorites on the site. This, is my favorite installment. I hope you pick this up again. Thanks... LLOYD
lloyd311@aol.com
1/31/20, 3:38 PM
Nice one, Willie! Loved Sean's transformation into what he had disrespected, so that he has to now endure being disrespected and abused by men just like him. Right down my alley : ) Thanks... LLOYD
Anonymous
1/31/20, 3:30 PM
i enjoyed this one like all your others of this series. Please continue.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 12:42 PM
I hope theres more
Martin
1/31/20, 9:22 AM
> its ok, but all the links with all the bad pictures are really annoying. just let people use their imaginations Willie made the conscious decision NOT to embed the pictures in his stories, so the reader gets to choose whether he wants to see them or not. Just don't click them, if you don't want to be distracted from the actual story! (Pictures are absolutely subjective anyway)
malskin
1/31/20, 8:50 AM
I enjoyed the new chapter, for me it would have been better if Tim was more involved, with Alex seeing him totally covered in leather standing or kneeling besides His Leather Master, before the conditioning started to kick in - Tim with his slutty evil grin
Anonymous
1/31/20, 8:26 AM
keep writing this... it is fun to read
Anonymous
1/31/20, 5:06 AM
This was great. Can't wait to see how this develops.
Jamkh
1/31/20, 5:06 AM
yes, more please!
Willie Cici
1/31/20, 5:05 AM
Thoughts on sequel are welcome. I was thinking of something happening at the bar. Suggestions?
Mercy Main
1/31/20, 4:59 AM
its ok, but all the links with all the bad pictures are really annoying. just let people use their imaginations
1/31/20, 3:57 AM
i love the combination of leather, mind control, domination, and erotic enslavement. For me this set of story elements is hot beyond words. My problem with the story so far is that without magic as an element, the conversation during which Tim lost all control and apparently his memory is way too short and has almost no real elements of hypnosis or any other mind control technique. There is clear indication that the Dominant's voice is mesmerizing and somehow causing Tim to feel a strong sense of pleasure. Granted Tim is apparently not happy with his having to work, or the work he is doing, which takes up so much of his time and energy. That might provide some rationale for Tim wanting to make a major change in his life. But for those readers (certainly including me) who enjoy the process of seduction, an insidiously increasing degree of mind control, a slow shift in power from the submissive to the Dominant, this part of the story is way too short. It was kind of a wham bam, thank you Ma'am kind of experience. What you did write was fine; it was what wasn't there that made the story less interesting for me than it could have been. I will say that I do have a strong pre-existing bias towards stories that provide context and character for what comes next. Others who read erotic stories just want to get to the sex without a lot of preamble. Neither preference is wrong.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 3:28 AM
Luv male musk. Hopefully this story can continue
LongtimeFan
1/31/20, 3:01 AM
Well helllOOOOOO. Amazing story, amazing mental transformation (I love it when they get stupid!), and best of all, amazing photos. That hunk in the orange...hoooooo boy. Always a pleasure!