Recent Comments

2/6/20, 10:43 PM
Wonderful read; looking forward to the next part of the story!!
2/6/20, 10:42 PM
It think it's a great chapter; it really centers around Pine and Mike's friendship. The friendship has been changing over the stories; it started out with Pine being harassed by the football team and Mike feeling guilty about treating his best friend so badly; then it moved to Pine having control over Mike. They've worked through that and now are trying to rebuild the friendship they once had; here Mike tries to bring in a sexual dimension, but Pine ends up refusing it. I enjoy that part of the series; Pine and Mike are characters with dimensions to them and are changing as the story goes. It, along with the ways in which Pine brings the football team under his control, makes the story something I look forward to reading. So I say please keep doing what you're doing; I continue to wait to see the chapter of your story and where both Pine and Mikey go in it.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:22 PM
Since his son is the man of the house, I think it is reasonable to make his dad change to be his house wife. Like remains strong appearance but do every feminine stuff that house wife should really do. Would be really hot !
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:00 PM
I loved this ! Please make more
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:52 PM
dad as a bottom servant slave pls.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:37 PM
I loved this! Please make more
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/6/20, 9:01 PM
Talk about reading your fine print.
2/6/20, 8:53 PM
Super excited to stumble across this story after all these years! This was one of the first MC stories I ever read -- it turned me on so much, I printed a copy of it so I'd always have it. That's gotta be twenty years ago now... Still gets me. Great job.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/6/20, 8:03 PM
I like the idea of the step dad, maybe the mayor,
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:41 PM
Mmm daddy being the bottom bitch is gonna be so hot. Love how they are so into the orders.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:39 PM
i think it'd be much sexier if you added more members to the "family" using the watch's other functions........
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:34 PM
I am into more sissification and feminization ... also sex in ballet clothes ... just my preferences.
greg.michaelson.7@gmail.com
2/6/20, 7:26 PM
Very hot twist at the end regarding what "24 hours" means!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:11 PM
Will this story ever be continued?
Elm
2/6/20, 6:41 PM
This story is turning out great! As I said in the first chapter (Of hopefully many to come!) I would love to see the father as more of a bottom/servant. As for bisexual themes... do what you want :) I will love it either way.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 6:29 PM
A lot of people are asking for really specific and kinky stuff. I think that you should stick to a baseline. And if you choose to include some of the more intense items they can be chapter specific. Or perhaps not to the exact and extreme degree some are asking for. As for the question on bisexual scenes I would vote against that. If they happened before a guy was turned then ok, but that's it for me. I'm all for transformations, especially muscle/penis growth, but I draw a hard line at gender/genitalia swapping. The choice is yours of course, and it will be nice to see what you write.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 6:25 PM
fuck it would be so hot if you began adding like a sexy jock step dad or boyfriends for the brothers in the mix to make it a full orgy.......
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/6/20, 5:56 PM
Any chance of getting a 100 percent pet dog into that blend please? Being hooded & wearing paws at all times, eating dog food, whole package.
2/6/20, 5:53 PM
Weird and wonderful! I love how you have such a deadpan narration in describing everything. Lots of fun!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 5:51 PM
Very well written. Hadn't read a story like this before. Would love too see Chuck & the other chickens get some additional coverings to look more like chickens.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 5:41 PM
Very good start! Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 4:30 PM
The continuation of this story will be welcome IF the story doesn't become predictable. This is where the creative mind needs to go off the rails. Let's see what we end up with.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 4:26 PM
short but oh so hot!!!
2/6/20, 3:16 PM
Thanks again for the wonderful comments, everyone! I'm glad that the readers enjoyed this story well. Thank you also to the anonymous commenter who gave awesome ideas, you really helped me out. I will try to write more chapters to close of this series. I'm considering to write three more in total. I will have to see. It will take some time, though, since I want these chapters to have a fair amount of cont and satisfying action. Also, anyone who is willing to do some proofreading for me would be appreciated. just send me a message
Anonymous
2/6/20, 1:51 PM
Hot story!! Would love to see the daddy become his obedient slave and wait on his master hand and foot
Anonymous
2/6/20, 1:25 PM
I hope you do continue, Kyle – this story is *hot!* Given the focus on rugby players, I'd love to read a sequel focusing on the locker room or showers, where the slut musk is liberally sprayed, either on uniforms or jocks so that it releases slowly over the course of a day's practice, with the players becoming more and more horny and slutty as they sweat, run, grapple, and tackle each other. Would some lose control right there on the field? Or it could spray out of the shower heads, drenching the team in slut musk. Steam in the steam-room or sauna? Vaporizers in the locker room? There are so many possibilities, leading up to a full team slutty orgy! Of course, if Derek wants to take the whole team, you might want to do a chapter first where his three slut-cubs help him take down the hunky coach and assistant coach first...
Bart
2/6/20, 12:39 PM
great turn. keep on going with extreme transformations and hairstyles.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 12:07 PM
An amazing concept and your writing is superb! Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 11:22 AM
this is amazing ! please continue
Anonymous
2/6/20, 11:09 AM
Make their cocks leaky and their source of everyday food! Cumming gallons everyday.. mm daddy