Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/7/20, 12:53 PM
Pink Haze Sounds like fun. I want to read Jeffrey graduel decline till He eagerly succumbs to the Haze :-) Please continue writing. Or maybe there will be a lot of friendly fire ;-)
Feb 3, 2020
olaf.fab24@libero.it
2/7/20, 12:31 PM
I hope that you continue very soon 🤤🤤🤤🙏🙏🙏
Anonymous
2/7/20, 12:30 PM
very good , love it when friends bring a bud in to be turned out to something more useful
Anonymous
2/7/20, 12:23 PM
more
Anonymous
2/7/20, 11:03 AM
Please never stop writing Tkhon ! Your stories make me nut so Good!
Anonymous
2/7/20, 10:59 AM
next chapter please
2/7/20, 6:40 AM
i hope to see feet and bottom dad in the future <3
2/7/20, 6:16 AM
The idea is quite simple but the development is fascinating, I really liked it. I wish you worked on more chapters
hypnohoosier
2/7/20, 4:28 AM
I love the idea but as the previous comments said, it needs some serious proofreading/edits
Jake
2/7/20, 4:08 AM
Perhaps there could be a farm with other animals to join the chickens.
Anonymous
2/7/20, 2:54 AM
I really like that you're developing Pine's friendship with Stacy instead of burying the women! Glad to see some female representation with nuance behind it!
Anonymous
2/7/20, 2:30 AM
I think for diversity sake their should be a balance . I would make the father more dominant and dirty . Muscular bear type dominant using roids and have his cock shrink making him an very open power bottom. More on the dirty side. The elder son I would go for the jock hunk look. Massive while manageable dick and more on the exhibitionist side. Clearly in porn and escort service. Someone who is experience and over confidant in his sexual prowess and collect different toy, porn and is an explorer sexually . Also clearly dumb. The younger should be more of a twink I think closer to a shy nerd. Giving him glasses maybe a studder and beautiful innocent traits . Still smart but constantly push and tease by his older sibling with a hole that never feel right when empty.
Anonymous
2/7/20, 1:02 AM
Agree with above, gender plumbing swap are turn offs along with femmie
Anonymous
2/7/20, 12:44 AM
genitalia/gender swaps turn me off, so much. but this isn't my story, of course
2/7/20, 12:41 AM
Great start!
2/6/20, 10:43 PM
Wonderful read; looking forward to the next part of the story!!
2/6/20, 10:42 PM
It think it's a great chapter; it really centers around Pine and Mike's friendship. The friendship has been changing over the stories; it started out with Pine being harassed by the football team and Mike feeling guilty about treating his best friend so badly; then it moved to Pine having control over Mike. They've worked through that and now are trying to rebuild the friendship they once had; here Mike tries to bring in a sexual dimension, but Pine ends up refusing it. I enjoy that part of the series; Pine and Mike are characters with dimensions to them and are changing as the story goes. It, along with the ways in which Pine brings the football team under his control, makes the story something I look forward to reading. So I say please keep doing what you're doing; I continue to wait to see the chapter of your story and where both Pine and Mikey go in it.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:22 PM
Since his son is the man of the house, I think it is reasonable to make his dad change to be his house wife. Like remains strong appearance but do every feminine stuff that house wife should really do. Would be really hot !
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:00 PM
I loved this ! Please make more
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:52 PM
dad as a bottom servant slave pls.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:37 PM
I loved this! Please make more
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/6/20, 9:01 PM
Talk about reading your fine print.
2/6/20, 8:53 PM
Super excited to stumble across this story after all these years! This was one of the first MC stories I ever read -- it turned me on so much, I printed a copy of it so I'd always have it. That's gotta be twenty years ago now... Still gets me. Great job.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/6/20, 8:03 PM
I like the idea of the step dad, maybe the mayor,
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:41 PM
Mmm daddy being the bottom bitch is gonna be so hot. Love how they are so into the orders.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:39 PM
i think it'd be much sexier if you added more members to the "family" using the watch's other functions........
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:34 PM
I am into more sissification and feminization ... also sex in ballet clothes ... just my preferences.
greg.michaelson.7@gmail.com
2/6/20, 7:26 PM
Very hot twist at the end regarding what "24 hours" means!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:11 PM
Will this story ever be continued?
Elm
2/6/20, 6:41 PM
This story is turning out great! As I said in the first chapter (Of hopefully many to come!) I would love to see the father as more of a bottom/servant. As for bisexual themes... do what you want :) I will love it either way.