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Anonymous
3/13/20, 9:11 PM
excellent work thank you
Anonymous
3/13/20, 7:02 PM
terrific
3/13/20, 6:37 PM
That was fucking hilarious. Thanks for writing it! I laughed out loud several times.
Waldgeist
3/13/20, 4:49 PM
Great Story! The last part was not 100% my favorite, but it's your story and you do very well! Only it had a little rush, maybe you can do some tune-up-stories and let us know, how Daniel fits into his new identities. :)
3/13/20, 3:34 PM
Really hot, hope you continue with more chapters!
3/13/20, 3:28 PM
I wish you would have completed
Anonymous
3/13/20, 3:05 PM
I fucking love muscle guts. This is so fucking sexy.
Anonymous
3/13/20, 1:35 PM
This is fantastic: well written, plenty of natural, sexy dialogue with each character sounding unique and funny in their own way, a perfect line between reality and fantasy that makes suspension of disbelief easy - my brain and meatstick are in agreement: so pleasurable to read, not a smutty word wasted
3/13/20, 1:02 PM
If in doubt, the original story (and Derek's comments there) make it clear what is going on here. See: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/327466
Sieg
3/13/20, 11:16 AM
I think the point was he'd still be himself regardless of sexuality, so it didn't really affect him? That or the fact that his lack of stereotyping gay men made him impossible to change? idk im just spitballing, the author can better explain :) great story though!
3/13/20, 9:53 AM
I don't get it, did the narrator turn gay as well?
3/13/20, 7:37 AM
Love the race change with the intelligence loss...looking forward to more!
Anonymous
3/13/20, 7:03 AM
Absolutely fantastic! I would totally buy the machine in a heartbeat. Wouldn't even care if it changes the whole me to be honest lol
Mar 6, 2020
3/13/20, 5:29 AM
Man that's a great story. You really need to write the next chapter, I can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks so much for sharing your hot hot hot fantasy with us all.
Drake Nightstrom
3/13/20, 3:24 AM
ah Zuul. I think your right about Samuel. as for the bottom thing, I think what might be confusing is the way it's written. I am doing some edits.
3/13/20, 2:41 AM
I like the story so far, but I'm not too keen on this transformation. Don't really understand why Thomas had to make a stereotypical nerd; he could've put his own spin on it. Thomas has so much control over Daniel he could've done something different. But I'm willing to see where you go with this transformation and beyond because you've created something unique.
M
3/13/20, 2:32 AM
Wow. I did not expect this route! holy shit that got extreme, but it makes sense because you alluded to it in the previous chapter. I wonder where you might take this to in another chapter? tell of the trials of having a cock for a boyfriend? or would you Jump to 19 years from now when Ben is changed back to something more like his old self? would Mid Life Crisis Darren even keep to his original notion? On the other hand, I kind of would like to see an alternate ending where Ben makes the additional change that Darren reciprocates his feelings, but he does it badly, like under self 'Obsessed with Ben', or where he takes out all the scholastic boring aspects of Darren when Darren starts to ignore him again. Suddenly Darren doesn't know what to do with this mess of wires in his room, and does Ben wanna play Call of Duty? Ben realizes that he just erased Darren's career, so he makes a few more changes to make Darren as carefree and bro as Ben is. While liking to suck his cock of course. which brings me to a point of clarification, Ben went in and changed Darren's perceptions about his throat, lips, and asshole, but doesn't that mean that he still considers his face a face pussy? I kind of like it, even if the idea of that is a little off putting just because i never thought of a face like that before. it'd be funny to me if he just, never remembered that he did that and Darren forever more thinks of his face that way.
transformheaven
3/13/20, 12:01 AM
curious to see what's coming!
3/12/20, 11:56 PM
maleware links... nice
Baala
3/12/20, 11:50 PM
Poor Kat!
3/12/20, 11:41 PM
ok, absolutely love where you took it and delightfully surprised at how hot it is!
Jmz
3/12/20, 10:10 PM
Be hot if he became a chav, with a chavy haircut and wearing chav gear!
Feb 9, 2020
Anonymous
3/12/20, 7:40 PM
Thom, you are welcome. I have enjoyed your stories for a long time.
3/12/20, 7:38 PM
Was not expecting that, but I'm not mad. I'm hoping there will be another chapter cause this has been a great story and I hope that the professor comes around and "fixes" everything.
3/12/20, 7:01 PM
A nice start but it feels a bit rushed and there's not much character to Derek so we can't really appreciate—and he can't react to—whats been done to him. Keep it up and we'll see what happens.
johnlee88888888@yahoo.com
3/12/20, 6:20 PM
you got talent!
Beardfull1
3/12/20, 5:31 PM
Give us more on the bearish bearded guy!!!
3/12/20, 5:07 PM
oh man...this has been one of my faves for a while....is Wishbone still around? Hoping that he will return to this
3/12/20, 4:45 PM
Super hot story, Willie. Thanks!
3/12/20, 3:39 PM
OKAY! it turned wierd. positively wierd. akd I'm excited to see more