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4/26/20, 5:48 PM
I love how they started referring to themselves in 3rd person after being taken over. 😈
4/26/20, 5:19 PM
wow thats a really good story.
Anonymous
4/26/20, 3:33 PM
It's so satisfying to see an ethical dilemma resolved as I would have resolved it. I can think of several directions this could go including Greg receiving an implant to synch with Curtis.
4/26/20, 3:29 PM
Meddlerlincs, Thank you!
4/26/20, 2:33 PM
next part?
JRL
4/26/20, 11:49 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!
4/26/20, 11:12 AM
A simple story, but oh so hot!!
Cooper14
4/26/20, 9:25 AM
oh.. raised our flag!!
4/26/20, 8:46 AM
love all of your chapters , so hot , all of your transformations , can't wait for your next chapter!
4/26/20, 7:14 AM
love the whole mental change going on. then the we find out that the other two know about the pendant. really hot story.
Anonymous
4/26/20, 6:30 AM
Incredible story.
4/26/20, 5:31 AM
that was a nice chapter. cant wait for the next
4/26/20, 4:41 AM
This is so great! Keep it up! I love it so much.
4/26/20, 4:11 AM
This was great. I really loved that you explored the darker side of the neuromate as a piece of technology. It scratched a kinky aspect of mind control that really worked for me but in addition to that the contrast it showed between Brodie and Greg and their treatment of their sponsors also textured and made the Greg and Curtis relationship more meaningful. The emphasis that Greg places on consent and 'really' getting to know Curtis is deepened and made more interesting and complicated by seeing just how easily Brodie, or even Greg if he was minded to, can disregard those concerns completely. Hope that some of the darker and more exploitative aspects kept being explored in addition to Greg's more wary and gentle attitude (plus they're super hot). And I'd love to get more insight somehow into what Curtis was like before the procedure and how that guy might have felt about things, it would be interested to see exactly how far the neuromate is smoothing things over and how far it isn't. Especially since Greg had such a romantic ideal built on this young guy - a projection - without ever really knowing him. In my own mind Curtis must have been in pretty desperate straits, or dumber, or be more of a risk taker or self destructive than Greg realized to turn to this as a solution.
4/26/20, 3:37 AM
Sorry your story seems polarizing in regards to your readers' reactions depending on the inclusion of the whole 'diaper' aspect. Just wanted to let you know I love the story no matter where you take it!
4/26/20, 12:11 AM
Congrats on making this both funny and incredibly sexy. I think this is your best work on this site.
4/25/20, 11:40 PM
I too am picking up a secret lurking beneath the surface. I hope there is. And if so, well done with the subtlety. One thing I don't like. I don't like when Josh addresses the readers. You're doing a great first person narration, but addressing the readers comes out of nowhere and disturbs the flow of the story. I react each time with a confused, "oh, he's talking to me."
Jonanator
4/25/20, 11:26 PM
the story was awesome, you should continue it.
Apr 8, 2014
4/25/20, 11:01 PM
Very good! I sense a lot of potential here. Keep up the good work!
4/25/20, 10:38 PM
This chapter felt a bit like a tease; I mean we do get to see Colin under right control and the beginning of his transformation, but it's just a slight glimpse. Right when we start to get somewhere, the chapter ends. It's the frustration of having to wait for the next chapter to learn more, which is a good thing in general. But please don't make us wait too long to see how Hawk changes Collin and how Collin changes.
Bimarguy
4/25/20, 8:51 PM
yes it is devilish , and short and sweet
4/25/20, 7:32 PM
nice. i wanna see the teacher make him into his own personal stud who lives to pleasure his ass, tongue and cock
Martin
4/25/20, 7:27 PM
Probably just a misunderstanding. There are many parts in this series, but this is the last one, Willie has published so far. I don't think there's any bug, you should see all the previous 8 chapters just fine!
M
4/25/20, 5:52 PM
The best thing about writing on the internet for no money is that you can write whatever. Sure, we as your readers can say, "well, this didn't work for me really." or "I'm not that into that..." and it should NEVER interfere with your writing choices. We read your content for free because YOU are generous. If you write something that sparks for YOU, then please continue to write the way YOU please. The diaper loving sect of the site will praise you, the diaper accepting for the sake of story device will dip our toes into a foreign body of water, and the unworthy will flee. I am personally sorry if a comment I left in the previous chapter contributed to dropping the diaper theme of the first work. PLEASE don't abandon that aspect of this story, it made a significant difference in the intensity and hotness of the subverting quality of the brainwashing, even if diapers are not, and will probably remain, not my thing. DON'T STOP ON OUR ACCOUNT! Never! When you let your freak flag fly highest, I get the most intense brainwashing scenes from your writing. So DO it. Scare the normals, trouble the narrow minded, and push the bounds of taste, because your following is just as into it as you are, and they will revel in it.
jemsea13
4/25/20, 5:19 PM
Love this! I sure hope there is more to come!
4/25/20, 5:13 PM
maybe a bug in the website?
4/25/20, 4:58 PM
love it, very nice
swngbthways
4/25/20, 4:50 PM
I ALWAYS love your imagination and where you take your audience via your characters. I'm looking forward to the NEXT chapter. I wanted to see via a picture, how the three guys look before they were transported to the valley. 😁
swngbthways
4/25/20, 4:32 PM
I would LOVE to see what follows next. I have some theories and hope of what would follow but I don't want to influence you either way and just see where you as the artist is taking this. I love the humanity of your characters, especially Greg. You definitely put me in his shoes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/25/20, 4:23 PM
**Well, well, well... ...another STANDOUT story from the incredibly talented EdIam!!!!** Truly, this is one of the best I've read in quite some time. I've found myself returning to it on multiple occasions. With no disrespect meant towards the rest of the series (and no judgement towards the different topics in those chapters, which simply aren't to my liking), I must say I was thrilled by the chapter "His Last Hypnosis Show". It's brilliant even as a standalone story. Highlights: It deals with the sexy jock Grant, who is seemingly a good guy, but benefits greatly from a slight attitude adjustment regarding his views on experimenting with other men. Much to his surprise, and dick-inflating delight, he soon learns his good buddy Jon has, like himself, recently taken up an interest in hypnosis. Fun, fun, fun! For me to be able to really embrace a story, the induction methods, and the pacing of the induction scenes have to be of the highest quality -- and (as usual) EdIam scores a perfect 5/5 in this area! BEST PARTS: The subjects are wholly unaware of the situation. That is gold, in my opinion. This, plus the fantastic trigger phrase "I'm your personal hypnotist" are wonderful nods to "Web of Trust", as you noted in your intro. The "Web of Trust" series is, without dispute, an absolute masterwork! In fifteen years of reading hundreds of tales of gay hypno erotica, I can say "Web of Trust" is in my top five favorite stories/series of all time. So it was very cool to see yourself and RobinHood70 get to comment on and enjoy each other's work. Thanks for this story, EdIam. I hope you are well, and I'm very excited to see what you dream up next! -- Alex