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11/27/23, 1:45 PM
awesome story

11/27/23, 2:10 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks :smiley:
11/27/23, 2:10 PM
Great climax for Jayson and his Harem. I cant wait to read more, especially the other men from this story-verse.
11/25/23, 7:21 PM
Is it wrong that I'm hoping for Tri-Hard will win. The whole rubber army is such a turn on for me

Anonymous
11/25/23, 11:29 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) I don't think "Tri-Hard loses" and "the rubber supersoldier army remains operational" are mutually-exclusive outcomes. I mean, depending on how extensively the brain draining toilets are used, a LOT of these guys are going to be impractical to reintegrate into civilian society, even after Tri-Hard is defeated. And besides, who would *want* to go back to an ordinary life after experiencing the blissful submission and certainty of purpose the soldiers have? At this point I think it's less a question of *whether* there'll be an army of superdrones, and more a question of *who* will be in control of it.

11/25/23, 11:36 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) **Tri-Hard** is definitely on the up. Maybe he will win in the end,... Either way, he'll be bringing more drones soon!

11/25/23, 11:44 PM
@Anonymous Those are some very interesting thoughts and I'm so sorry that I cannot comment on them further. Thank you! Now, get back in your box!:speak_no_evil:

Anonymous
11/27/23, 9:20 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Never! *You* unleashed this kinky beast by creating such an engaging scenario -- now you have to deal with it! And I'm still waiting for Henry to get some proper clothing! He can't just run around without slick, form-fitting rubber coating every inch of his body! It's indecent! Nick has some serious balls to just leave his slave exposed like that. I'm surprised no one's called the cops on them yet!

11/27/23, 10:16 AM
@Anonymous The cops are busy getting the foam off of the remaining members of the squad that ran foul of Travis and **FreeDog** :p
11/27/23, 5:38 AM
Great story and perfect ending !
11/25/23, 2:38 PM
I love, love, LOVE this alternate ending! Thank you for writing this. Hope we can see more of Jesus corrupting other angels in the sequel.

11/27/23, 3:59 AM
@[fgdbar](/user/show/10001414) You'll just have to wait and see what I have in store for the next part! :laughing:
Ben
11/27/23, 3:58 AM
This is amazingly well written and hot 🔥
11/26/23, 11:51 PM
Great ending. Chris and Alex are happy and Robert's plan backfired. Another fun series.
11/26/23, 11:43 PM
wow! That was a hot tale! Jack, I loved the buildup to a fuck would transform him! I see so many new experiences Daniel is going to go through and each one erasing his old self. Hoping there's more to come! Great writing!
11/26/23, 7:04 PM
I am so sorry if this any how hurts any one's sentiments and I respect everyone's feelings and thoughts. But, to me this story is just getting out of hand. Like I guess the mind control part of it is fine and even the bullying one, but it's just sounds so evil to me that instead of turning me on, it's making my heart ache. I feel so bad for Jake and JJ and then Vickie too. I don't know what happens in the next episodes cus I haven't read them yet and still am struggling to think if I should read them, but I would really appreciate if this story takes a turn back in the right direction. Again, I am no one to influence or harm someone's feelings. The hard work put here can be easily seen, but this is just a small personal opinion and maybe, just maybe such stories might not be for me. Evilness might turn quite some people on, but for sensitive people like me, it's just very disturbing. It would give me a big relief to know that the story rejoined the right track instead of the evil one.
11/12/23, 7:05 AM
It's the smooth, vernacular writing - no speedbumps hit in reading it - and the delightfully smartass style that hooked me. Looking forward to more of this tale.

11/12/23, 10:09 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Heya, thanks! I'm enjoying writing part two up - can't wait to share!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 8:02 PM
Zombies are not my favorite monsters and I am still looking forward to the second chapter!

11/2/23, 8:48 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Y'know, I agree - I wrote the story prompted by the challenge. And so I worked my... brain... to try to think of a monster less commonly seen in an erotic setting, so no witches, werewolves, vampires, ghosts. Couldn't quite manage to make my MC actually "undead," lol - so, voila, my quasi-zombies!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 4:14 AM
I love this. There's some really engaging world building here and you present the main characters needs and thoughts' in a really clear way.

11/2/23, 2:02 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thanks! Love me some worldbuilding, lol...

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Added part 2!
10/31/23, 4:03 PM
This was really well done. Can't wait to read more.

11/2/23, 2:02 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Cool, thanks! I'm enjoying writing the second part - look forward to posting when the Challenge ends!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Added part 2!
10/30/23, 1:55 PM
Goddamn, the scene with the cumshot and the condoms was smoking. Well done, and a great job on the worldbuilding.

10/30/23, 2:21 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks - appreciate it! Stay tuned for Part Two!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Added part 2!
Jun 12, 2022
Anonymous
11/26/23, 4:58 PM
Loved this! The idea of it needing cum each time to expand was original. Hope you keep writing more!
11/26/23, 4:18 PM
I do wonder about other people in this world with nifty powers. Gotta be another gay guy who makes straight guys into good boys. Like a professor. Hehe Sexy stuff!
11/26/23, 4:17 PM
This was very hot and sexy. Love the various povs leading to our main one being in charge. Super sexy stuff.
Jun 4, 2021
Anonymous
11/26/23, 3:37 PM
This was so hot… will there be more?
11/26/23, 1:13 PM
Wow - this is great writing. Or at least, it's what I want to see. The pacing is so nice, slow, and deliberate - excellent writing. And all along Maxwell keeps asking himself "wny me?" - These elements add so much to the story to make it real. Will love to see where you're going to go with this!
11/26/23, 9:47 AM
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

11/26/23, 11:37 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) :green_heart::purple_heart::heart::yellow_heart::blue_heart:
10/3/23, 6:46 AM
Againstmywill where are you?!? :( I love your stories!!!

11/13/23, 9:36 PM
@[Ew.Sinclair](/user/show/910236) Seems like he’s finished here.

11/25/23, 5:57 AM
Yeah, I'm sorry - I had a strong decade or so of this, and then tapered off a bit. Truth be told, I basically met my soulmate - wasn't dom when we met, but as I opened up to him he really got into it and is now pretty much the in-the-flesh ideal of the kinds of doms I write about. So I'm busy being his hapless property and worshipping him, but also, having the real thing doesn't leave me with much more energy to write and publish fantasies. I might be back every so often when I have some time, or who knows, I've already shown him some of my erotica, maybe I'll show him more and he'll have me write more at his command? Stranger things have certainly happened. I'm flattered, though, by your interest. I'm glad if my stories have been a positive force in your life!!

Martin
11/26/23, 10:33 AM
@[AgainstMyWill](/user/show/773611) That's amazing to hear! I congratulate and envy you :)
11/26/23, 7:04 AM
Super histoire, Comme toujours

11/26/23, 8:30 AM
@[Gasp](/user/show/10006939) Merci !
11/23/23, 2:21 PM
Another great chapter. I really hope this story gets updated. I wanna know how is Johns incorporated to the group especially its mostly his sons.

11/25/23, 3:35 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) The next chapter is coming soon-ish, I finished writing the last 3 chapters coming up a while back but I've been stuck proofreading it and I'm very picky when it comes to that, but expect updates, and even the conclusion of this story to come out soon!

11/26/23, 8:06 AM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Thats great to hear. But take your time. Cant rush a great story. Looking forward to more conversions. Especially the sex scenes from the family
11/25/23, 6:38 PM
You have a style that manages to be so wholesome and hot at the same time.:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

11/26/23, 6:32 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I really appreciate it, thanks! That's what I'm aiming for!
11/25/23, 4:51 AM
Im really lovinng this series! The focus on more wholesome types of hypnosis is a nice change of pace, and theyre suprisingly feel good reads!

11/26/23, 6:31 AM
@[klaraklao](/user/show/10000318) That's really kind, thank you! It was important for me to show how hypno play could stay inside the lines and still be fun. Glad you're enjoying them!
Tom
11/26/23, 4:02 AM
Damn hot story, would love to see you continue with it!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
11/25/23, 9:57 PM
What a great story! So seldom does one read such an honest portrayal of racial domination and submission. As a white boy, I have always found the black male body to be so erotically enticing. It is truly beautiful! I have had the privilege of submitting to strong dominant black men and also of having submitted along with submissive black boys in serving both white and black Dominants. These are among the hottest experiences I have had and would jump at the chance to interact anytime with a black Man or black boy.

11/26/23, 1:42 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story for what it is. The eroticism of racial domination is very real yet the expression of fantasies and actual experience with it has been widely suppressed. It is liberating for all concerned that this form of eroticism be given a voice.
11/26/23, 12:23 AM
So I like the set up and the nature of the new office and stuff. The training and such is great. The sexy times are fun. I wouldn't really do the overeating part, but the general males being fun part is great.