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5/24/20, 6:01 AM
i have also wondered about mind control processing that uses a variety of techniques in conjunction with one another to create a synergy more powerful than any of the individual techniques on its own. i had not however imagined anything at all like this type of machine! i would really really like to try something like this. Unfortunately for me, one really needs a Dom/Master with long history of experience together and the ensuing trust and respect to make any real use of something like this. Otherwise it's like learning to read without having access to any reading material, or learning a spoken language with no one to talk to. It's technically possible perhaps, but not very rewarding. Still i would really like to have the experience. Maybe it would be like going into space in a simulator, without the possibility of ever going into space, but the experience itself would be rewarding and so interesting. Thanks for your very intriguing first chapter! i'm off to chapter 2.
5/24/20, 5:57 AM
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5/24/20, 4:49 AM
very nice will have dreams about being transformed into a rubber mindless dog tonight thanks. pant pant
Anonymous
5/24/20, 4:36 AM
I like this story and hope that it will be continued.
5/24/20, 4:13 AM
This is some really hardcore stuff; keep it up.
5/24/20, 4:06 AM
Very nice job; looking forward to the next part.
5/24/20, 3:55 AM
M, I have 2 native languages and 3 others I have been learning for some time now. Thanks for the review, I have revised it, thou I don't believe there was too many grammatical errors there were enough so I have edited it. I hope this new version is better.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:14 AM
Great story! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:13 AM
Thoroughly entertaining! Even with all the German.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:12 AM
I like! A lot, too!!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 2:23 AM
Hot!p
5/24/20, 2:08 AM
Oh my. Well it's to be expected from one of the most experienced authors on this site. I love how portray Hugh's confusion by asking all these questions, trying to understand what's happening. When that by itself is incredibly hot.....well, that's an author who's a master at his craft.
5/24/20, 1:21 AM
loved it! wish there was more! i guess that means time for a part 2
5/24/20, 12:38 AM
Nice premise but it feels a tad rushed (a problem i have with my works so don't worry). It might be better to see Seb see the guy's kinks, desires and fears to make his changes more ironic. I'd also like to see why Seb does all this, is there a backstory or is he made of evil? Carry on the good work!
5/24/20, 12:10 AM
Ha ha, EJG speaks very well! I scanned this story and will admit that it is not for me, if only because I know there are people in this world who actually think like the jock students in this tale and believe the garbage they spout. :( But people are free to write what they wish, so I commend you on a story well-written! :D
M
5/23/20, 11:50 PM
this was a fascinating read. it seems like English isnt your only language and I noticed some word mis-uses that made it difficult to read on the first try. giving your work to an editor is something that no one should be ashamed of, and it will encourage a stronger reader response. please dont give up writing, as i said before this was a hot read, i would have liked to see more of the programing that Bryan experienced. like what commands did Thomas program into the white noise?
5/23/20, 11:43 PM
It begins. Liked this better than the last chapter. Positive reinforcement is the way to go. Maybe Hector should think about training Ivan for protection too. Put those muscles to use...aside from the ways he's already planned of course.
5/23/20, 11:39 PM
Sorry, this is late. I was on edge the whole time. Glad he got control back. Can't say I approve of the corporal punishment though. They say positive reinforcement is best for training pets.
EJG
5/23/20, 11:33 PM
Damn. For a submissive older fa**** like me,into dominant jock bullies, this so got me off. Was hoping for the students to gangbang the teacher. If this had those boys growing muscles/cock growth (a slight hint at the class taking up gym),even better. Don't EVER be put off by anyone here getting moody 'coz u said the F word. Made it hotter for me.
5/23/20, 10:43 PM
as always, a well-written and well-plotted story!
5/23/20, 10:09 PM
I've heard it said many, many times that a large number of people in psychology get into it not to figure out what's wrong with others, but to figure out what's wrong with themselves. Peter *definitely* fits that mould, although he turned out to be quite good at figuring others out too, and so it became his career. That much I had in mind all along. What I figured out a bit later was that Peter's actions *do* all fit a certain pattern of behaviour, and since I realized that, I've made it a point for him to be consistent with that behaviour. (And if you're really paying attention, I even tell you what it is at one point.) There's no question that he's extremely self-centered, but as long as he's getting what he wants, he's definitely capable of some kind of feeling/sympathy for others. Although it'll still be the B-story, that'll be playing a bit more of a role in the series in the future, which I've also dropped hints about.
5/23/20, 9:05 PM
This was something different for sure. I like how you experimented with an idea you got and went with it. I really appreciate that.
TW
5/23/20, 8:51 PM
It's always refreshing to see a transformation happen to someone who wants it and seeing the transformation be even more powerful. looking forward to what happens to them and this possessed home!
Thomasz
5/23/20, 7:50 PM
excellent story!!
Sexdroid-013
5/23/20, 7:16 PM
Hey Willie, since when do you write stories for my own weird kink? I like! A lot! 😁
Anonymous
5/23/20, 6:35 PM
Sensational! Love this. I also agree we should get a pup. Maybe one who loves to sniff. . .
May 17, 2020
Zac
5/23/20, 6:34 PM
Three ... four ... be a slutty man-whore!
Zac
5/23/20, 6:19 PM
Fuckin' hot, bruh. Where do I join up...?