YES! Let's go to the station. I'm so hyped for this

Man, his flatmates were totral twats and wankers; they deserve what's coming to them for outing him and his Muslim boyfriend.

Love this, hope this carries on!! i want to see the further decent and the final product of such a man!!!

Hot, though its too bad Colin was the bottom. The two once straights should submit.

Hahah keep readin' and strokin', man! I love getting feedback, so thanks for commenting! It definitely inspires me to write more!

Love it!!

Sorry, I meant to leave a comment, but then I forgot. It's hard to end a story, and that's why many series end up unfinished. I'm happy that's not the case with what you write. It makes me feel safe reading something I know won't leave me hanging. That said, this ending didn't feel rushed to me. Rather than that, it felt more like it was inconsistent with the hype built through the rest of chapters. It's my personal view, of course, but I feel like the story was growing into a bigger finale than the one delivered. To me, this ending lacked some *oomph*. Still it's a nice ending and a pretty enjoyable story. Thanks for the time and effort put on this!

Awesome story. One of my favorites!

¡Genial! Me ha parecido muy interesante la analogía de los libros, cada uno con su propio cambio de personalidad. Muy original y lleno de posibilidades.

oh fuck you plan to make it mpreg? i fucking love you please take my soul and make this reality

Really enjoying the story! Very well written!

I am loving the story and quick uploads so far!

Thank you, glad you all enjoyed it. I am considering turning this into a series, if there is sufficient interest.

HA! I KNEW from the first time the sheriff appeared he'd be chipped but I never figured this would turn into such large-scale agenda...holy cow. I'm thrilled for a season 2 and all the stuff with Aaron, Butch and the chips. This could end badly but we'll get lots of mind control and sexy time

Sorry to report that, over the past two months, I’ve lost momentum and enthusiasm for completing this story. I did have another chapter partially written and the rest of the story sketched out in notes, which I've [posted in the forum](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/reflex-unfinished/1462). If anyone feels like finishing the story, either following my notes or going in their own direction, that's fine with me.

as someone who recently modded his Sims game I can relate to the feeling of power XD I really hope it's daddy's turn in one of the future chapters

I like this chapter. And thanks for updating so quickly!!

will you do more please? also it would be fun to see the father or one of the teachers become a power bottom

I agree with forgottencradle lol But even tho they're short, they are packed with sexy mind control

Can't wait for more

I've been following the chip series religiously, so I'm very excited to see you return to this for a change! as for suggestions, I really don't want Phil made to be more feminine. you're literally the only writer on this site that writes older, big masculine men, falling under the control of guys much younger and smaller than them. there are just not enough stories that will have the sub be this masculine man. I think it should stay that way. I think Phil should be made to fully explore his submissive side, as in, bondage, edging, spanking, verbal, anal play, etc Thank you again for all your work! you're one of the best

I don't drink coffee but the others are right, unless there is a reason like, he is to drink from a baby's bottle. Restricting coffee is a bit too far. With that being said, the story was hot. Perhaps add a second a chapter as this is a great story.

I'm loving this series. Another hot chapter!

I love this! Nice to see a sweet-natured dom, and the enchanted poetry is fun, too. :)

****This pushes allll my buttons !!! Love to see a new one from you!!!

this really needs a sequel,good Sir

Awesome story - roll on the next chapter pleeeease!

I'm still not sure if Leo is actually dangerous or just stupid trouble, but I suppose we'll find out

the only criticism I have is that the chapters feel waaaaay too short and I have to wait for a new one XD this has fastly become one of my favorite series

Love reading the series here, and glad that you're returning to give Phil and Roger some more fun under the sun. As for some fun ideas, I have some suggestions here; Roger having Phil make a sex tape/video for when the ladies come back to the house and things will have to finally end. Could involve things like Phil complementing Roger, begging for Roger's cock and how desperate he is to be filled. Could also have Phil make some creative uses out of various objects as sex toys (or Roger could go to town to get something), as well as cumming without using his hands or touching his cock. Some mileage out of the pup play idea, having Phil be unable to speak and to use his mouth to denote what he wants. Could get some play out of him rimming Roger some, or using a dildo as a "tail". Relatedly, Roger allowing himself to ride Phil's cock. Being a dom doesn't mean you have to solely fuck someone, after all - it's more about being in control of and dictating the situation. Roger already has experimented with sucking Phil's cock down (which was very fun). It's also implied Roger hasn't had much experience with other guys before, so this kind of behavior could be him simply exploring that aspect of his life. Another could be playing up the amnesia aspect from before, making Phil forget aspects of his life for a time. Stuff like the concept of clothes, or that Phil ever lived anywhere but the lakehouse. Maybe even make him think he's a completely different person, like a European nudist model who poses for pictures at every opportunity (great opportunity for a full body tan too) or that he's Roger's butler. Yet another is Roger using the seclusion to make a more permanent, if hidden groove in Phil's life, something like an email address or coded series of messages that Roger could send to Phil to activate or implant behaviors. Something like "A friend of a friend said you like to wear a necktie as a collar and leash. It's true, right?" Perhaps Phil makes a joint account to siphon off a few funds from each paycheck so that he can make "business trips" every so often to get out of the house and spend it with Roger even when the family is home again. Hope that these give you some ideas dude. Thanks for the fun writing.