Recent Comments

5/17/20, 4:16 AM
I hope you'll continue this story/series. It's good.
Anonymous
5/17/20, 3:49 AM
So hot!! I remember that episode. Hot!!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 2:36 AM
Interesting story!! Enjoyed reading it!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 2:35 AM
I liked it!! Ironic ending, but I still liked it.
5/17/20, 2:09 AM
Hello its a great pleasure to see you back! with this amazing story i wait all this time for this thanks you so much i have to read this in detail and as soon as i can connect again i post a comment related to this chapter (i have to read it in home) i have no frequent access to the net but of course i am glad to talk with you if you wanna about this setting of fantasy. Cheers up and continue like that! :D
Anonymous
5/17/20, 1:27 AM
Happy to see an update! This series is great.
Anonymous
5/17/20, 12:12 AM
This whole series is amazing! Keep going! Agree with others there doesn't seem to be a corner. You have all the fun at the station! And maybe some fun with their uniforms? The sillier the better!
5/16/20, 11:50 PM
Great new addition!
giveintothemusk
5/16/20, 10:44 PM
One of the best in a while.
NzDom
5/16/20, 8:47 PM
My favourite part here is when Humpme sees the punk as a beautiful lady. Damn that got me hot straight away. But everything else is just as hot ! Police station please with Mikey next chapter lol
5/16/20, 8:29 PM
Funny and hot as always! what do you mean when you say "written myself into a corner"? it goes very well, the story does not seems to be stuck not going slowly. The way back to the station will be a show! and I love the golden condom badge. I should try that with my boyfriend in our leather uniforms, once we're able to go out (his name is Michael, so I have some expectation to see if you twist officer Mickey's name into something kinky). By the way, I respectfully disagree with the comments about the size of the chapters. They are long enough to me, and I love that you're giving us updates so fast. Longer chapters would take more time to work on them, so I'm very grateful for your efforts to write this long chapters so quickly.
Drake Nightstrom
5/16/20, 8:15 PM
Off to a good start. Looks promising.
Anonymous
5/16/20, 7:40 PM
the next chapter can't come soon enough! really hot story
5/16/20, 6:59 PM
YES! Let's go to the station. I'm so hyped for this
5/16/20, 6:47 PM
Man, his flatmates were totral twats and wankers; they deserve what's coming to them for outing him and his Muslim boyfriend.
An Avid Reader
5/16/20, 6:02 PM
Love this, hope this carries on!! i want to see the further decent and the final product of such a man!!!
5/16/20, 5:53 PM
Hot, though its too bad Colin was the bottom. The two once straights should submit.
5/16/20, 4:52 PM
Hahah keep readin' and strokin', man! I love getting feedback, so thanks for commenting! It definitely inspires me to write more!
Anonymous
5/16/20, 4:46 PM
Love it!!
5/16/20, 4:23 PM
Sorry, I meant to leave a comment, but then I forgot. It's hard to end a story, and that's why many series end up unfinished. I'm happy that's not the case with what you write. It makes me feel safe reading something I know won't leave me hanging. That said, this ending didn't feel rushed to me. Rather than that, it felt more like it was inconsistent with the hype built through the rest of chapters. It's my personal view, of course, but I feel like the story was growing into a bigger finale than the one delivered. To me, this ending lacked some *oomph*. Still it's a nice ending and a pretty enjoyable story. Thanks for the time and effort put on this!
5/16/20, 4:18 PM
Awesome story. One of my favorites!
5/16/20, 4:09 PM
¡Genial! Me ha parecido muy interesante la analogía de los libros, cada uno con su propio cambio de personalidad. Muy original y lleno de posibilidades.
5/16/20, 4:04 PM
oh fuck you plan to make it mpreg? i fucking love you please take my soul and make this reality
Anonymous
5/16/20, 3:40 PM
Really enjoying the story! Very well written!
5/16/20, 2:27 PM
I am loving the story and quick uploads so far!
OpenYourMind
5/16/20, 2:18 PM
Thank you, glad you all enjoyed it. I am considering turning this into a series, if there is sufficient interest.
5/16/20, 1:35 PM
HA! I KNEW from the first time the sheriff appeared he'd be chipped but I never figured this would turn into such large-scale agenda...holy cow. I'm thrilled for a season 2 and all the stuff with Aaron, Butch and the chips. This could end badly but we'll get lots of mind control and sexy time
5/16/20, 1:07 PM
Sorry to report that, over the past two months, I’ve lost momentum and enthusiasm for completing this story. I did have another chapter partially written and the rest of the story sketched out in notes, which I've [posted in the forum](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/reflex-unfinished/1462). If anyone feels like finishing the story, either following my notes or going in their own direction, that's fine with me.
5/16/20, 12:58 PM
as someone who recently modded his Sims game I can relate to the feeling of power XD I really hope it's daddy's turn in one of the future chapters
5/16/20, 12:53 PM
I like this chapter. And thanks for updating so quickly!!