Nice, a singaporean story. Want to chat on Discord about some kinky Singaporean scenarios? sho9860

Enjoying this and the premise. Hope to see more!

I've been checking back for years, I hope it's not in vain. Your stories are the only reason I visit the site. They are the absolute best. If you ever quit here, I guess I'd just want to know so I'm not hoping for nothing.

Hi AvionneX, thank you so much for this chapter! Thank you also for adding very hot complementary images to the series! I have always liked your story about Brad (now I like his pictures too), but I wanna point out that the pictures of Chad you provided in chapter 2 is very hot! All other pictures are great too of course, especially the ones including collar. Thanks again AvionneX!

Ahh, Hero-Slave! I love it(even if it's a little redundant :wink:)! It looks like Henry's on the path to becoming the best version of himself, but that path is still fraught with obstacles and danger. For one thing, I think it's safe to say that the people Sarah works for are probably not much better than Tri-Hard, even if they're nominally the "good guys." And besides, FreeDog has already shown us what being the good guy gets you: a one-way ticket to pup city! Henry's desire to emulate his father is an admirable one, and an important first step, but he has to be *more* than his father -- more than "Duty Boy," or even "Mister Freedom" -- if he wants to prevail. Poor Nick would probably be able to help with that...if he wasn't still so wracked with guilt over "messing everything up." Part of me wonders if there isn't some underlying insecurity there, something that perhaps even predates his relationship with Henry. It'd be awful if someone tried to take advantage of that insecurity to get to him -- y'know, someone really petty, who loves to tear others down...they might use it to convince him he really *is* just some random sick pervert, way out of his depth. Nick would be doomed if that happened. After all, it's not like being degraded and forced to submit for once might actually be a *learning* experience. And it's not like there's someone who might feel duty-bound to heal his psyche and would expend Herculean willpower and ingenuity to do it -- someone who could remind him of the virtues of greed and depravity, of kindness hidden within cruelty. Er...right? So all of that *definitely shouldn't* happen. As for things that definitely *should* happen, I second wanting to see more of the rubberized cops. I also wouldn't say no to more Travis and Hank. The latter in particular is interesting because he seems to be a much better manipulator/"psychologist" than Tri-Hard. Nick could probably learn a thing or two from him. Oh, and more kinky uses of TK! I'm almost embarrassed to admit how blind I was to its potential before seeing you use it so creatively here, but I'm a total convert now! And speaking of TK, I agree Henry will need some sort of boost to match the new threat posed by the "supercharged" FreeDog's abilities. The improved serum is an obvious answer, but I'm skeptical for a couple reasons -- the biggest being that it feels like thematically, Henry and Nick's greatest strength is their unique bond, so leaning too hard on the usual chemicals-and-technology feels a little dissonant.

So much more rubber coming! So many muscle hunks getting a change of wardrobe. Absolutely looking forward to that. Or how these bigger guys respond to Travis being their new boss. Or how Hank trains them. Yet it definitely seems it is being setup for Travis and Henry to become the newest rivals. A kinky villian and a kinky hero, what could go wrong? Henry is going to need his own power up if he is going to get a chance. Though he does seem to have finally reconciled with his two selves to become something more. It feels like that will be both awkward and well...kinky as a hero. Just how much 'professionalism' will he be able to maintain? Yet it still seems that Nick is the linchpin to all this. Henry's weakness and strength. He serves as Henry's anchor and controller. Both his purpose and drive. So how will Nick be protected? Or how will he play a part in the fight to come without being sidelined or a liability? Though I do have one 'criticism'. Tell me if I am wrong but the pup has a 'permanent' rubber tube in his mouth/throat that the squeak toy rests in. How was the pup able to talk even with the toy removed? Though that brief conversation definitely raises some interesting questions in where that goes.

"But then, a horrible car accident occurred killing many hot jocks, as the driver, also hypnotized, had all his attention stolen by his master's words, instead of the road." Jokes aside, great chapter. In fact, as I didn't comment on the last chapter, I must say it was wonderful. If chapter 13 had a good introduction/conversion to Captain Jenkins, here it shows his total decline into a humble slave. These hot macho men look so cute when they are totally submissive and obedient, don't they? Another point that I'm really enjoying is Cody: I was starting to think that Cody was losing prominence after his conversion, as he wasn't as useful as Dexter's other slaves, like the Bauers, Rich (mainly) and now Coach Jenkins, but since the last chapter you highlighted him again and my favorite part of this chapter was the friendship developement between Rich and Cody. It was very sexy and strangely cute at the same time. But now we have Josh and from what I've seen, he's going to suffer at the hands of his master. Now that Dexter has a whole team of hot guys at his disposal, I can't wait to see his profiles. And Josh taking severe punishment from all of them will be delightful to see. PS: What Dexter said about the Chad's "declaration of love" in Chapter 12? Two chapters have passed and I'm still curious to know Dexter's reaction.

:skull: how did Dusk figure out that Jamie was still aroused from last night and directly at that time to send the Grindr Message :skull:

This was super hot! I am a bit sad that Hendrick didnt get gangbanged though lol. Imagine if all the partygoers burst in right as they finished fucking each other and then having their way with the brothers for the rest of the night, would be insanely hot.

I really enjoyed the deep dive into the lore of Fractured and the manufacturing of HIMBOs. I'm super curious to see what happens next. So far it's been almost wholesome, but these two definitely aren't where they're supposed to be!

Catholic priests are not allowed to marry, so he wouldn't have a wife or kids. You're confusing the different religions. Protestant ministers can marry, but they aren't priests and they aren't called 'father,' they're called 'Reverend.'

I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!

Hopefully another chapter soon

fucking hot ideas, please more, great

Glad to see you back at work with this series. No apologies are needed for taking time away from writing and the technological hiccups; we understand completely that life can get in the way. I definitely liked this one and the scout uniform as punishment evolving into the police uniform. I enjoy the way you're able to develop this story and the various attires in different ways. Again, glad to see you back at work and l look forward to the next part of the story.

This start was incredible. Frankly, I've never liked the "religious man being punished for gay revenge" premise as it's usually too dilettante and one-sided, but here it worked well enough. Not to mention that the means used for mind control is simple, and honestly I think it's very good, sometimes that's what I want to see (recently, many writers have been appearing with very complex means of mind control or who narrate their point of view in a very exquisite, which unfortunately I'm not always willing to read). I really liked what I saw so far, looking forward to part 2. PS: "Yes, My son". Please don't take it away. My dick got hard every time I imagined a sexy daddy saying that.

fucking hot story , strip them more of money and their clothes, let them only hold smaller allowance and take more of their cash, so they work more and harder

Love these updates I do have to ask. Can the Djinn not hypnotize other men like he does Sanjay? Or is it cause he rubbed the lamp? Cause Quintin pinging and smiling sounds quiet hot

Sorry this story is a bit of a tease! It was really more me fucking around as a vehicle for discussing a sensitive topic and I wanted to get it out of my head. Maybe next time I'll go through with it. Or write a sequel. We'll see.

Love the chav, socks, trainers vibe. Keep up the good work!

This slow, edging eroticism was perfectly done. Absolutely astoundingly good.

Great story. Love the transformation from Thomas to Tommy to Officer T. :purple_heart: I did get a little confused in the transformation to Officer Freewill between Tommy & Adrian.

Great descriptions!

Please continue this story line.

This story is so well written. I enjoy the build-up. I love the cum. THANK YOU for your excellent writing.

Despite what an anonymous commenter said above, I thought this flowed pretty well. You're obviously hiding some info from the reader to keep the mystery going, and that might be what they're talking about, because it's not immediately clear what Tommy and Kent have binding them together. But hey, I love a good mystery as long as it's resolved, so I liked it a lot :-)

Hot!

hot and cocky, an excellent malskin again, written by the cock

Made me cry with joy, pain, a thousand emotions that cascaded upon me like water being poured onto a flame Thank you for writing this masterpiece

I am so in love with this mutual mind-fuck, you have no idea. So inventive!