Recent Comments

6/7/20, 2:51 AM
Something you alluded to in the middle of the story with just a simple sentence...I would be interested to see if The Machine was building up slaves loyal to it and only obedient to their masters on the surface. But then again, I'm a robot dude so of course I would love to see these subjects being made to be robotic unaware until it's too late and then embrace the robot.
6/7/20, 2:33 AM
I I cannot wait to read your next chapter although how you ended this one would seem to me a fitting ending
6/7/20, 1:04 AM
O, thats easy. Get fluid Silicon-Rubber with "Addition" Synthesis, not "Kondensing" Synthesis. Painting on our Body, it will fuse with Skin for longer.
6/7/20, 12:18 AM
I hope they can be a couple maybe even an 'out' couple but I worry about Dave being a jerk.
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6/6/20, 9:31 PM
Great story, glad to see you are writing again
6/6/20, 8:58 PM
yes,finally daddy got fucked
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6/6/20, 8:11 PM
I like Kieran in control.. He should get annoyed with Troy & Chad's concerns & make them forget all about that. Let his dark fantasies run wild. The whole apartment building could cater to kink & fetish people - They make the best neighbors-lol.
6/6/20, 7:21 PM
@MuscleSon69 Thanks for all your comments on this chapter and on the others! I'm definitely planning on more -- what kinds of things would you like to see happen next?
Anonymous
6/6/20, 7:14 PM
I wonder if it's possible to modify all the personal records using the access that police have. Would be fun if both officers have their names officially changed for good, along with some funny changes on their personal stories.
MuscleSon69
6/6/20, 5:31 PM
So hot and exciting! Wish I was there in the store for a great deal like that!
MuscleSon69
6/6/20, 5:21 PM
Excellent story since I started cumming to it (big time). Gotta read on....so here I cum!
MuscleSon69
6/6/20, 4:34 PM
Wow!!! Any more forthcoming?
MuscleSon69
6/6/20, 4:30 PM
If you wrote a book, I'd buy it and any others. I am so relaxed now and horny. Thanks!
Anonymous
6/6/20, 4:23 PM
That was fucken hot. Only change I'd make (which is just a preference really) is have the domination take effect just a little earlier.
MuscleSon69
6/6/20, 4:22 PM
Your words are soothing and very descriptive. I can visualize everything and am drawn into the story deeper and deeper. Keep up the good work!
MuscleSon69
6/6/20, 4:11 PM
Great start, I gotta read more! Even though I have never been hypnotized, I was starting to relax the more I read (and aroused at the same time). On to the next chapter.....
6/6/20, 2:18 PM
This is one of my favorites in this collection for sure.
6/6/20, 2:17 PM
Always look forward to reading your stories. Never disappoints!
6/6/20, 2:13 PM
It's an advertisement. Of course it's missing all of the usual elements. I personally don't think the price point is good but I'm a bit of a grognard in that regard and I'd pay it for a book with 20k more words.
6/6/20, 1:43 PM
Fucking great story
6/6/20, 12:21 PM
Great story, I love it 😀
6/6/20, 10:10 AM
Good story .... but slim on mind-control aspects. Seemed to me to be a story of (albeit quick) seduction. If this story was published in a general compendium of man--on-man erotica, I don't think the sequence of events depicted would raise any eyebrows ... although other body parts might be affected differently.
6/6/20, 7:37 AM
I really like how Andrew uses different approaches to enslave the father-son duo
6/6/20, 5:27 AM
it grabbed me right at the start. love where the story has progressed. definitely will be on the look-out for the next chapters.
Anonymous
6/6/20, 5:10 AM
love it!
6/6/20, 4:50 AM
Great story, you need to write more! You kept me hard the whole time while reading. Can't wait to read what the bros will do next!
6/6/20, 2:39 AM
when is chapter 3 coming out?
Anonymous
6/5/20, 11:35 PM
Great story! I would love to read more chapters!
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6/5/20, 11:03 PM
Me encanto......
6/5/20, 10:21 PM
I just want the guys who were couples to remain couples or become couples as before. They can become as beefy/sexy/hot as long as they're into each other. Yeah I know kinda vanilla. Really hot transformations!