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6/19/20, 2:36 AM
Wonderful! Love how each of his wishes went wrong. You are quite talented, do more plssss
CLB
6/19/20, 2:03 AM
As someone who has a side that fantasizes about being humiliated / denigrated, i enjoyed the story quite a bit Thanks for sharing it
Seattle Dom4MuscleSub
6/19/20, 2:03 AM
Continue the story. His boyfriend has started wishing, so now he has to end up as a big, muscular, furry bottom. Tiny dick, big muscles, furry, and a belly. just like his top likes.
6/19/20, 1:43 AM
slave abdamelek: I love the statement because it shows the slave mindset, for example, that servitude is liberation. I've known quite a few slaves whose lives were kinda messed up, and their Masters took over and set them on a good path. So in that context, being controlled for one's own protection is a recognition of the slave ethos. So what makes the quote amusing and ironic is that the character challenges that statement - clearly he is going to discover what control is. A great way to foreshadow.
6/19/20, 1:34 AM
What an awesome story!
DomTop4MuscleSub
6/19/20, 1:33 AM
Next up, Thor definitely needs to begin experiencing chastity. He'll get very familiar with his ass after he starts using toys for pleasure, when his only two options are them or Lan's dick.
6/19/20, 1:30 AM
Enjoy the unique deceptive ploys in sending the reader along with the character
Nex Fan
6/19/20, 1:04 AM
my problem with your story is the fact that it feels unoriginal. the idea of the personality change via name change works well but it feels like youve straight up just took it from KNT frat which is disappointing because Nex's story is so good and i just feel like im reading a spin off. try drawing from more originality because it just seems too similar.
Anonymous
6/19/20, 12:13 AM
Seriously... This should be a movie!
Anonymous
6/19/20, 12:11 AM
OK, so... Naughty naughty for submitting an eight year old story... But you're forgiven because it was FUCKING FANTASTIC! Loved it! 💖
6/18/20, 11:39 PM
Love this concept, can't wait to see what comes next
Slave Abdamelek
6/18/20, 10:59 PM
nycboot, why do you love it? :) I know things are a little slow as the stage is set for the next epic battle, but it'll pay off!
6/18/20, 10:29 PM
I would like to see more of the Coin Later, like turning a bunch of guys into gay cowboys
Anonymous
6/18/20, 10:02 PM
awesome work! thanks :)
6/18/20, 9:58 PM
Really fun mechanic you came up with.
6/18/20, 9:32 PM
You write well and I like the pacing and the general wholesome feel. It'll be interesting to see where you're going with this.
Anonymous
6/18/20, 9:26 PM
This is great, it's been one of my favorites for a long time -- but is it fair to submit an old (2012?) story for a new story contest?
Jun 16, 2020
6/18/20, 9:01 PM
Woo MTG content, yeah! Haha the subject matter is not to my taste, (scat, diapers, etc.) but I still think this is awesome!
6/18/20, 8:05 PM
Wow--erotic writing at its best. Thanks for this.
6/18/20, 7:44 PM
nice i hope you make a series out of this
6/18/20, 7:32 PM
I'm excited to read more. i didn't think I'd get so invested in a non sexual story on this site. keep up the good work and i hope things turn out well for these boys
6/18/20, 7:32 PM
Oh wow. The final section brought tears to my eyes. This is the kind of story I like - where the protagonist really struggles with what's going on. It's all the more better because he knows exactly what's going on. Thank you for a wonderful rewarding story! P.S. I wonder, if in the final section, where you say "the mans lover appears" - would it be better to say "the man's husband appears" ?
6/18/20, 7:20 PM
WOW, this story is so hot! I love that they have hairy asses. I can't wait to read the other installments. Great job!
Anonymous
6/18/20, 7:03 PM
I loved this! Please make more
Anonymous
6/18/20, 6:46 PM
Spectacular
Aquarius
6/18/20, 4:47 PM
Wow your writing always amazes me! So happy you’re continuing this story. I can’t wait to see what Roger does with his 2 muscular slaves. I agree with the previous comments please no cross dressing! Hope you add some foot fetish and some pup play. Daddy needs to keep his son satisfied.
6/18/20, 4:00 PM
why the fuck would you shave his body hair?! so disappointed
6/18/20, 3:25 PM
I really like the concept of this story and where its going right now. The arc about Nate getting to know Dave's teammates is a much needed one for Nate's character development. In my opinion, the best romance stories are the ones where BOTH people involved becomes a better person from the relationship. For the past few chapters it felt like Dave was the only one who was going through a journey so its nice to see that Nate is now being affected by this experience too. Keep up the great work!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/18/20, 2:48 PM
Wish somebody would make into a dog like that, no questions or limits.