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11/16/23, 9:57 AM
I like how it's styled like a historical account. It's original.
11/16/23, 9:25 AM
So hot!! Welcome back!
11/16/23, 9:01 AM
Very hot and well written story! Please consider coming back to continue with Justin, Mikey, and the werewolf after you get some of your other portal ideas out of the way! Big fan!
11/16/23, 7:33 AM
Hey! Thanks for a great start to a really hot story. I love hypnosis, mind control, brainwashing, power exchange, D/s, M/s and all the kinks that go into training and maintaining a happy relationship. Probably the hottest part is the seduction that happens early after the initial connection. The loss of control at the point where the submissive still has a little concern, a little trepidation, and maybe even a little fight left. This chapter was just starting into that stage at the end; so far then it has just a hint of seduction, a teaser! [ An extra note: i _hate_ teasers when i get to the end of the chapter and... ]
11/16/23, 6:49 AM
Great story! Thanks for sharing with us all. You really knocked it out of the park!
11/16/23, 6:41 AM
I find diverse exotic locations, ethnicity, and cultures interesting and exciting. In a D/s context it can be really hot. This story hit all those buttons for me! I am hoping there will be more chapters still to come. Thanks.
11/15/23, 11:40 AM
All of these were great! Hope you end up diing more hypnovember prompts! Can't wait to see what you have in store

11/16/23, 5:29 AM
@[Idecidedtoplay](/user/show/10001101) Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! I've got a bunch more lined up, I can't believe I've kept up with it so far this month!
11/16/23, 5:03 AM
Another great chapter. And nice that we have a variety for his collection, a big lad. Hope his collection get bigger, maybe Siobhan's friend or maybe lets add a family dynamic and add her father.
11/16/23, 3:04 AM
Werewolf is such a natural choice. But, to mix things up maybe a minotaur or satyr or demon.
11/16/23, 12:22 AM
Great story! I was unsure what the bag was until the end. Sneaky werewolf. It was sad that Justin hurt Mikey's feeling after the fun they had, but I'm glad Justin came around. Literally. They're going to have a really fun week.

11/16/23, 2:58 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks so much! Glad you like it. What kind of creature would you want to find on the other side of a portal?
11/16/23, 2:25 AM
So sexy. What a gift to be given at such a young age. Pure bliss for eternity. I'm sure he will pass it on in the next chapters? I can hardly wait. :wink:
11/16/23, 1:51 AM
John may belong to others at camp, but deep inside, he knows Sammy owns him. So hot. Thanks Jack. You never disappoing
11/16/23, 12:39 AM
You're style is so sexually descriptive that I can imagine EVERYTHING so perfectly. the push and pull of teasing and edging in the story is just like real life. Love anything to do with cum inflation and living condom fleshlight stuff. Thank you for your amazing talent!
11/16/23, 12:13 AM
Every chapter is a gem.
Nov 11, 2023
Anonymous
11/16/23, 12:07 AM
I love premises like this and I loved the description of mixed feelings after realising he wasn't gay before. Great story!
11/15/23, 8:20 PM
Another great chapter our Johnny has found his place.
11/15/23, 5:58 PM
The next chapter sounds like its going top be a very interesting read. To see the roles reversed between drones and everyone else. Are the drones allowed some sort semblance of personality to take fuller advantage of this? And is Master Jake going to place suggestions into anyone to make them into more of the advanced drones? Definitely going to be interesting.
11/15/23, 4:16 PM
I love that you're continuing this story, which is one of my faves! I'm just not sure about telling it from Rocco's perspective. Part of what made the story so effective is the way we get inside the transforming subject's mind as he becomes Stepfordized.
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 2:12 AM
Insanely hot. Just one question: are they really father & son? I wasn’t sure from the way it started.

11/15/23, 4:15 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) They begin as step-dad/step-son, but as the bond grows, they become father and son.
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 1:49 AM
This is great. I love the progression and writing style. Hopeful for another chapter.

11/15/23, 4:14 PM
@[JVill](/user/show/10030603) Thanks for the vote of confidence! I think I know exactly where I want to take this. It involves his son's friend.
Oct 29, 2023
EntrancedGay92
11/5/23, 7:36 PM
Beautiful and intimate, a perfect father/son relationship.

11/15/23, 4:13 PM
@[EntrancedGay92](/user/show/171924) Thank you! The style is kind of a departure for me, but I really enjoyed writing it.
11/12/23, 6:32 AM
Great premise! I love the idea of a gym where the buddies help each other out like that. Always love cumming out resistance too. Nice touch! Thanks for posting your story!

Anonymous
11/15/23, 12:55 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks. I love the the idea of climax as an event horizon, a point of no return.
11/15/23, 8:43 AM
Very hot! I totally enjoy how Aladin mind get twisted. Loved it! More Aladdin & Jafar please! Would love to see how Alladdin gets little by little more trained and enslaved by every meeting with Jafar.
Anonymous
11/15/23, 8:17 AM
Another Great Chapter! Also i just noticed that aside from Chad and Cody, Dexter hasn’t fucked any of his other slaves yet? any specific reason for that? Also, really curious to see the angle of renting/whoring out Dexter is going to do to Coach Jenkins and am really curious to see what is going on between Brad and Jimmy with Dexter’s parents…..
Jun 7, 2008
Anonymous
11/15/23, 5:23 AM
More, more, more !!!
11/15/23, 4:19 AM
my god. my heart. i- oh this was such a blessing to experience. thank you for sharing your gift and your craft with us.
11/15/23, 4:12 AM
A delightful hypnosis story combined with a porn spy film. Looking forward to Part 2.
11/15/23, 3:17 AM
Not enough guys write gainer fiction. Awesome job
11/15/23, 2:01 AM
Still just as amazing all these years later, as when I first read it.
Anonymous
11/15/23, 12:56 AM
More, more,more !