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6/24/20, 6:04 AM
A little gem of a story. Only criticism was that the smells needed to be fleshed out more.
6/24/20, 5:52 AM
Hope you're still kickin'~ ❤️
6/24/20, 5:47 AM
A really original idea. Nice going.
6/24/20, 5:27 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Even if it's a filler chapter. It was still nice to read. I hope Nate & Dave have a happy ending. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Relax
6/24/20, 5:21 AM
Really awesome collaboration guys! This was so fan-fucking-tastic. It has me cumming when Rick "motivated" Chris and Alec to use and abuse Steve like the whore that he truly was. Really love the domination stories from you guys. I'm such a huge fan of Re-Educator and Web of Trust that this collaboration was a dream come true for me. I hope Edlam and RobinHood70 will do a collab again in the future! A man can only hope!
6/24/20, 5:20 AM
I wouldn't say either of us helped...it was very much a collaboration throughout. I started the story, Edlam finished it, and then it went back and forth again before publishing, with both of us touching up each other's stuff.
6/24/20, 4:36 AM
I enjoyed this story immensely. Kudos to both of you on this awesome collaboration!
Mmggiioo
6/24/20, 4:04 AM
omg this is gods work,,!!!
Anonymous
6/24/20, 3:58 AM
An American would not use the term "twat" or "arse". They are more English/Australian phrases.
firesix
6/24/20, 3:46 AM
What a fantastic story. Thank you, Edlam, for returning, and thank you Robinhood70 for your continued greatness. You two are the best out there.
6/24/20, 3:17 AM
So I just finished reading the rest of the story and I gotta say I LOVED IT!!!!! This story has a lot of re-educator vibes in it and I really loved it when Steve was knocked down a few pegs and his brother and best friend turned on him and totally degraded him. Thats the sort of thing that I have been missing from Edlam's stories. My favorite part by far was when Rick made Chris and Alec need to have permission to cum. Orgasm denial is one of my biggest kinks, and I love the idea of virile, jock studs not having the freedom to shoot whenever they want. I kinda wish Rick would've pushed it further and totally denied the boys the privilege to cum though. I thought Rick got too merciful there. I hate to admit this but I'm not very familiar with Robinhood70 and his stories. I'm gonna have to do some homework and check his stories out I'm a huge fan of the vampire diaries when it was on so I'm really happy you got the inspiration for the guys there since I think the actors of that show are really good looking I also find it funny that Alaric Saltzman was your inspiration for the hypnotist because Rick ends up being an obese character which is not like him at all, lol. Really awesome installment and an all time new favorite for me. I will defintitely be going back and rereading this for some very awesome wanking material. I know it was kinda close ended but I wouldnt mind seeing an epilogue, or a "where are they now" kind of entry for this series!
6/24/20, 3:17 AM
So hot. Loved it.
Indigo3
6/24/20, 3:09 AM
This may be an unpopular opinion, but I actually hope Jake does get to turn back into a top at the end, but with a more open mind (switch maybe?).
6/24/20, 2:37 AM
Please continue!
Anonymous
6/24/20, 2:27 AM
Very hot, but too short! Very eager now to see how the Chief debases himself, especially given that he sounds like such a masculine bull of a man.
6/24/20, 2:23 AM
As Edlam explained, I had the idea for the beginning of the story back around 2014. I never really found an ending to it, though. I recently gave Edlam access to my stories and he found the start I'd made on this and asked if I had plans to finish it, cuz he really liked the setup. I told him that I didn't know what to do with it. That's when we came up with the idea for him to finish it, and I think he did a brilliant job! For those who like my fantasy castings, this is who I imagined in the roles of the boys (as they would have looked at the time). Back then, I was still watching The Vampire Diaries, and I took a liking to a new actor on the show, so decided to slot him into the fantasy that I was developing. The other two followed from there. One of them will look familiar to those who've read my stories. I don't normally use the same casting across different stories, but at the time I put him in Web of Trust, this story was dead in the water. 😛 * Steve: [image](http://chris-wood.org/photos/displayimage.php?album=26&pid=592#top_display_media) (down atm, but I suspect that's temporary...[here's an alternate](https://youngentertainmentmag.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/9DMuQtXw-630x630.jpg) just in case). * Chris: [image](https://imgix.bustle.com/lovelace/uploads/79/ac44b4a0-7db5-0132-1d85-0a2c89e5f2f5.jpg?q=70) * Alec: [image](https://imgix.bustle.com/rehost/2016/9/13/c4899577-6e3a-4d6e-9d33-d86810a6f34e.jpg?q=70) I don't recall having a specific person in my head for Rick, although there *was* a character on the show named Rick, so maybe at some point I flirted with him as the hypnotist? I honestly don't recall. He doesn't look like the Rick currently in the story, so I'm not sure.
6/24/20, 2:11 AM
I hope to see the chief turned into a lower fool than Humpme :P For a moment I thought you were going to make him suck his feet when he put them on the desk, sadly not, but its fine, I love it non the less.
Anonymous
6/24/20, 1:54 AM
Fuck, yeah, Nakintr! Youre right agood reverse role on the chief would be hot! If he's described as intelligent, disciplined, and "an inspiration", would be fun to see him becoming very stupid, incompetent, messed up and a real laughing stock. A meek muscled moron, a maid or a broken loser... so many options! But I'd like that even if he's lower than Humpme, he still remain as a chief in name, if only to be mocked by the officers that used to respect him.
6/24/20, 1:36 AM
Would love more chapters!
6/24/20, 1:36 AM
it would be amazingly hot if the chief will be taken down to be even lower than officer Humpme. Maybe from station chief to station maid !
6/24/20, 1:17 AM
naughty and psychological Is he being seduced or him others. I can feel and smell the scene. an erotic experience wish more
6/24/20, 12:49 AM
Two of my favourite writers on this site made a story together? Incredible, so excited to read it!
6/24/20, 12:20 AM
Incredibly hot - always happy to see new stories from Edlam
6/23/20, 11:51 PM
Hey, betaman! Just wanted to say I enjoyed this new branch of Ass Assassin Round 1! It should be interesting to see Kyle, Rick and Hayden (well, Hayden not so much) get a new lease of life in your branch. I appreciate the effort you've put in to keep the character descriptions consistent - I know how long this stuff can take to do right! Looking forward to how this continues.
Steve
6/23/20, 11:46 PM
Can't wait for. Any ideas when the next chapter is out?
EJG
6/23/20, 11:26 PM
Hot. Suppose this is the end though? Makes me want more
Anonymous
6/23/20, 11:11 PM
I'll admit I was a bit confused as to what was going on here. Was the business man Jerod triggered in his growth by the mysterious pen? If that's the case, how did it happen that Jerod seemed to have no idea what the pen would do? It seems like the pen just mysteriously appeared as two guys met randomly on a train, and things unfolded from there. It was an intriguing set up, rather than a complete story. The growth descriptions were intriguing and done well. I enjoyed the growth
6/23/20, 10:24 PM
Not gonna lie, I went crazy when I saw Edlam's name when I was checking the latest story posts. So glad that you updated! And as usual, you didn't disappoint. I only got halfway through so far, but I'm really liking Rick!
Anonymous
6/23/20, 10:13 PM
add chastity!