Be fun to see another part where the second missionary is broken in!

strong premise and exciting continuation - please continue the series!

Thanks. What would you like to see next?

Thank you! I'm working hard on making Thor's experience not only hot as fuck, but relatable.

Loved this story!

Great story I enjoy missionary and pup stories It was nice to have them together in the same story

oof,this was amazing. I like the thought of the guy hypnotizing the unsuspecting prey to be a hypno slut too

WOW, now that was a hot chapter! Loving the submission, the mental dialog, all of it!

this is great! cant wait to read more.

the picture you linked for Eli is unavailable :(

Just love this story so much I like to get the feeling that you really care for their relationship and I love reading something with a deeper meaning and effort. Really good writing. Keep up the good work!!!

Amazing! I'd love a follow up to this one about the further Zoom meetings as well as what the one guy or gal said what happens when the pandemic lifts. Or even a prequel to show how it all started.

thank you

I am enjoying the setup you are going for, kinda like cooking a really tasty meal and knowing it will take some time to prepare to perfection. The technology snare of the TVs in the bathroom was genius and I look forward to seeing how this develops. The writing is clear and the breaks are good for going back and forth with POV. I too enjoy tech-based control, as per my own series on the matter.

This is by far my favorite story on here! I come back to it so often and every time it's just as good as the first.

Hope you continue, but if you would rather start a new series or something, I don't mind

I really like the plot, and the twist was great. I hope you continue the story, and maybe put forward some superhero stuff, your profile pix looks like that’s your interest too.

The idea of this story could be really hot, but it’s broken by the grammar and spelling. Men with no hair on their heads area bald, they can be bold, while bald headed.

I love this chapter even more than the last one, I thought it was insanely hot too! You're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more.

Awesome! I hope there is more!

excellent writing 👍

more! :)

@Darkblade: > what is you FA user name? I want to see more He linked his FA page in his profile. Simply click or touch his avatar picture which opens his profile and you'll see the FA link there!

I can not stop smiling while reading this, love them both

Very well done. Loved it.

super hot, cant wait for more

Interesting and fun set up. Honestly a part of me was like "hmm, I wonder if there is someone else controlling things" but then when it didn't seem that way I let it go, till you revealed the 'twist'. Oh to be that master, with his fun stable of boys. That said, honestly, where was the rimming? I mean I didn't really see it.

Very hoooot... I love this kind of humiliation, especially when the doc was later aware of it.

Hi everyone! I know I normally write my responses as notes during my updates, but I thought I might get in touch through here for once I'm very appreciative of your continued interest in this story! I never expected it to go on for this long, and I definitely have your comments, ratings and continued enthusiasm to thank. This is the first story I've ever written so unfortunately my pace isn't particularly consistent! @Evelded - I'm glad the tickling / laughter is to your liking. I actually remember an earlier comment from you that prompted the inclusion of that in this chapter, so thank you! @Plymouth58 - thanks for being so understanding and for your continued comments! I love how specific you get with the praise, and it's really helpful with developing plot points. @NZDom - love that you're enjoying the story still! And thanks for noticing my profile picture - I thought it was fitting for where this story is going @ForgottenCradle - for sure! I remember one of your earlier comments about enslaving the whole police force. Hopefully the pacing isn't too disappointing, but we're definitely getting there. I'm trying to think of a way to get the chief involved sooner rather than later @MuscleFlex - yay I'm glad you enjoyed that! I see that element pop up a lot in hypnosis videos, so I thought I would incorporate a bit of that - but I'm not sure if I'm being descriptive enough. The bottom bodybuilder cop scene was pretty fun to write! @Anons - obliviousness is one of my favourite elements of hypnosis, and I love getting comments where people bring it up (especially if they reference specific scenes or thought patterns) so I'm grateful that you guys wrote in! Also, Tkhon's story is one of my favourites on this site! I'm definitely nowhere near that level though, but it's something to aspire to for sure! Also also, wow, I've got to say, I never thought of going that far with the names... I wonder if there's someone the punk can rope in with advanced clearance to change any official records ;) And to the last anon before this comment - I appreciate your lovely message for sure, and to be honest, it spurred me to write a bit more to the story (and also made me write this reply in the process haha). You're not being pushy at all and I love how you refer to this as Humpme's misadventures! I'll probably get something out by the end of the week if I'm lucky, but no promises :)

more pls! and add picssss