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6/28/20, 7:00 AM
HOT. I love a symbiote story. Hope to see more chapters soon.
Jun 28, 2020
Martin
6/28/20, 6:48 AM
Short, to the point, and fucking hot! A small gem, really! I love this! This is the kind of mind fuck that gets me going. Thank you very much!
Nico
6/28/20, 6:26 AM
Loveee the romantic parts of this story! I'm also a big fan of mind controlled dad's, there needs to be more stories like this! It's so hot seeing this masculine daddy following every single command given to him by his young master. As for the final chapters, I agree with the previous comment. It would be nice to see Michael become a muscle pup that walks on all fours. Phil going further into submission and forgetting about his past life. Also please make them go out in public as a couple!! If they run into anyone they know have Phil introduce Roger as his boyfriend. I really want Phil to be a gentleman on their date! Open the door, pull his chair, buy flowers, give his son/master the ROYAL treatment like the king he is.
6/28/20, 5:39 AM
I came to check this story out after reading "Motivational Speaker" since a I read a lot of comments hyping up this story. It's a pretty decent story, but I must say, its feels kinda tame and quite honestly, I don't like Jake so far. A revenge story sounds so fun in theory, but even he sucks at that since he doesn't really plan to use the Re-Educator for something worthwhile. It might not be fair to judge "Re-Educator" based on one chapter so I'm gonna give it another chance, just purely because the comments hype it up as one of an all time read masterpiece or something, so I will give it a fair shake. So far i give this like a 2.7/5
Anonymous
6/28/20, 5:22 AM
I want to see what Dace has in mind. There's stuff going on here I wouldn't presume to play with until it's revealed what it is. I'm eager to see just what is happening inside these men. I'd want to know what those machines are building. I have ideas, but I want Dace to introduce that before I play with it.
Papa Werebear
6/28/20, 5:12 AM
I would love to see more of this story! WóÓÔÒòF! 🐻 Thanks!
6/28/20, 5:02 AM
LOL! I agree with both above. Having seen flat bottomed girls (who apparently DON'T make the rockin' world go 'round), there must be assless chaps... 😉
Anonymous
6/28/20, 4:29 AM
please keep fucking going
6/28/20, 3:28 AM
i feel like he is going to need revenge in alden as well...
Boston Satyr
6/28/20, 3:12 AM
I'm a huge fan of Bill Drake's work, especially his Cornell, TX series. glad to see you pick up the thread here! definitely encourage you & others to add to the cannon! There's just something so wonderful & fucking hot about good natured men being warped into breeders & bearers, overwhelmed by their hormones & lust to breed, but still trying to be good to one another & build news lives. More, please!! and bravo! I'm not familiar with Xavier Hicks' 'Carriers & Donors.' tried looking for it, but came up with nothing. Link?
6/28/20, 2:25 AM
Great start! Looking forward to the next chapter.
MBBLOVER
6/28/20, 1:02 AM
HOT HOT HOT! hopefully more chapters in this storyline? how about a beyond straight ladie's man drop dead breathtakingly gorgeous monumental huge musclebound in spray painted on uniform superhero captured, conquered and converted in the next chapter/chapters or a whole new storyline?..
6/28/20, 12:44 AM
Do not know why didn't feel this as much. probably because it felt more expositional and specific, spelling things out, with little perspective on the outside in ignorance to infer and tease OR from the victim to feel the change in his head and how developed. Nice to hear the character talk it out and figure how it works for them. Just not, personally, engaged as much with this one moreso than the chapter where the only sex was rodents in cages if only because stuff was happening and developing and enriching when already seen and great with set up and goofy enjoyable characters.
6/28/20, 12:13 AM
This was sexy. Especially the way you wrote the pov from both men. Yeah, this was very very sexy.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 11:55 PM
We ALL love the look of a guy in chaps. It's a hot leather look, but - The phrase 'assless chaps' is redundant. By definition, chaps have no seat and they have no crotch. If they had a seat, and not a crotch, they'd be crotchless leather trousers. If they had a crotch, and not a seat, they'd be assless leather trousers. If they have both, they're leather trousers. Chaps are an outer garment originally designed for protection, which is why they were made of leather, and were worn over cloth trousers while riding a horse. Bikers wear them to prevent 'road rash'. Whomever invented the phrase 'assless chaps' was both ignorant of the garment's origins and an idiot. Please, please, PLEASE stop using this phrase. Just call them chaps. Other than that, I like your story, thank you for writing.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/27/20, 11:40 PM
Where can I get some of this beverage please?
Astral
6/27/20, 11:05 PM
Interesting premise, can't wait for more!
6/27/20, 10:44 PM
Really glad to see more work from the Cornell, TX series! I was hyped to see new stories in that universe on Nifty and now there's a way we can have more here, too! Thanks for making it a community series!
6/27/20, 9:58 PM
It's always nice and rare to see black males enslaved and on top of that, a bottom. Thank you <3
CallMeCrazy
6/27/20, 9:27 PM
god i love Eddie. Muscle Mary tfs are few and far between.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 8:36 PM
I've liked this series from the start, but you seem to have reached an extreme point here. I found it much more erotic when things were not quite so over the top. When the story was working things up to the humiliation and reluctant sexual exposure, it was at its more erotic (imho). So when new "victims" were brought into the story, I was hopeful (Cam, Jet), but there, too, you went from 0 to 100 immediately, and there was nowhere left to go. I hope you can figure out some way to sort of dial it back and write about some of the more "innocent"/gradual/humiliating elements without quite so much pain, stretching, and half-drowning in body fluids. Sorry if this sounds negative, but I loved the story so much at the beginning that I'm sorry it's moved past that early sexiness. Still a fan.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 8:30 PM
I only have mad love for Edlam and RobinHood70. You are truly the best and the site is lucky to have you both in it. I will always support y'all no matter what. This story was also pure fire and a great source of masturbatory fuel. A truly spectacular job.
Anonymous
6/27/20, 8:06 PM
this is so hot.
6/27/20, 7:56 PM
Very hot, especially the cigar element!
Corazón
6/27/20, 7:35 PM
Thank you for listening to your reader’s feedback! I would like for you to re-write the final chapters. Some of these suggestions sound super hot!! Like making Michael a dog. Phil becoming an obedient slave who serves and worships every part of his master, his feet, his ass, his dick, etc. Just please don’t make him dress like a girl! Roger should keep both of his slaves as masculine as possible.
6/27/20, 7:24 PM
If people can love GRRM for having trouble finishing his stories, then we can certainly forgive you, Edlam! I also liked what you said about about not wanting to put out half-assed follow ups. I appreciate how much you care about your fans to give them quality content. And I'm quite excited to see all the other work that you have lined up in the future! As always, stay awesome Edlam!
6/27/20, 7:13 PM
It's fair to call me out for not finishing series, haha. I'm really bad at it. I just get very interested in other ideas and also go through phases where I step away from hypno for a time. I do plan on hitting back at Re-Educator and Cockslut for sure. My focus now is mostly on a new story I'm working on with a hypno friend, a short story for the Supernatural theme, and the next chapter in Retirement. But I will get back to Alex and his corruption of that town. I just don't want to put out half-ass follow ups. Gotta do it when I can fully focus on it so all of you waiting feel as though the wait was worth it! And, my goodness, do I know it's been quite a wait. Thank you all for your patience with me! I appreciate you all more than you know. And every time I get a notification about a new comment on any of my stories, I feel so proud to have helped so many of you masturbate :)
6/27/20, 6:52 PM
it is a great story so far. love the concept for it. But I still wonder how Sid will react when the friend he has is mostly gone in terms of emotion. I hope Reggie could still play games and be the emotional support still but i'm eager to where ever you take the duo!
RGM
6/27/20, 6:46 PM
The HOTTEST story I've read in a while ... great storyline, definately would love to have it continue.