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9/24/20, 7:12 AM
Very hot chapter--especially the gym stuff! I'm a bit confused that Michael's now suddenly incredibly tall, but I'm willing to go with it.
Evan
9/24/20, 7:06 AM
Beautiful pacing, fantastic concept and writing. Bravo! And hot to boot.
hola
9/24/20, 7:02 AM
it was a sweet ending, but felt like a deus ex machina. kinda wouldve loved to see the friend get in on it but even i cant deny that it was cute as fuck. so good job :)
Lusty Stallion
9/24/20, 6:39 AM
Absolutely loved this man! Great building and developing of the story. The description was immense. Looking forward to the next one
9/24/20, 5:59 AM
A good start to an interesting story. One technical note: It's a bit odd the story is written in present tense, considering it's written like a diary which I think is a great way to present the transformation. Since he'd be writing these entries after the fact, I think past tense would fit better.
Anonymous
9/24/20, 3:25 AM
Omg so hot!
9/24/20, 2:14 AM
Above it all, I wanna say, Ronan filled my heart with joy. Thank you for sharing your story, it was a great ride once it got going. Looking forward to your next series.
9/24/20, 1:52 AM
Awesome first chapter! I look forward to what happens next.
9/24/20, 1:27 AM
Your writing is impeccable as always! I'm gonna follow this story now like I do with Casey's Dog Life.
9/24/20, 12:18 AM
wow...thank you. that story is very very hot to me...I enjoyed it thoroughly
9/24/20, 12:11 AM
OMG MORE PLEASE
Anonymous
9/23/20, 11:32 PM
I have to agree with what was already said in previous comments. You have a knack with words that transported me to your protagonists' world which you so vividly described. In this piece of literature, there IS sex but you elevated it to include passion and romance in my opinion. VERY well done. I will be looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Lusty Stallion
9/23/20, 9:50 PM
Great work man. Having grown up in the UK I enjoyed the references. A quick proof read would have smoothed out spelling issues for your non-UK readers, but I knew whst you were saying. Poor Dan, but then the Genie is mean. Great work man!
boy Jason
9/23/20, 9:49 PM
Love the story. Very well written. Was kinda hoping for an ending with Steve having already reprogrammed by the Doctor, and get activated just as he was about to leave with the new Evan.
9/23/20, 8:07 PM
This is one of my fave stories on here, and one I've returned to a few times since you've posted it. I thought it was extremely well-written, and would love to see more in this vein.
9/23/20, 8:01 PM
Super excited to see what develops from here, and thought this chapter was really well-written!
9/23/20, 6:55 PM
will we see more of this one?
9/23/20, 6:34 PM
Please tell me there's more. I'd love to learn more about the white noise machine, Travis, and see how Andy trains Ian.
9/23/20, 6:31 PM
chapter 2 please. that was a great set up
9/23/20, 4:13 PM
I always love a genie and twisted wishes, really like the concept that the Genie isn't some all knowing, god like being but more of a thug that can intimidate wishes!
9/23/20, 4:05 PM
I'm hoping another sequel of smoke and nip grow. That was amazing!
9/23/20, 2:11 PM
Friends and guys, apparently there's A NEW GAY DATING SITE! We definitely can never get enough of those... I'll let the admins know this exciting news is filling up the c. They're gonna be so pumped, bros, you don't even know.
9/23/20, 4:50 AM
Some great "misinterpreted" wishes. Please continue.
9/23/20, 4:38 AM
Somebody needs to do a side story about Beau and Tracy after the ride!
Nutiper
9/23/20, 4:28 AM
Ooh, there's something intriguing about the baroqueness and insularity of Antony's narrative — like, he's almost an unreliable narrator in the way he filters the world through his specific perspective. I bet there are some details he's straining out with his filter, omitting them just because he doesn't find them relevant or worth his attention... and we'll never even know what was omitted. (For example, the party could literally be happening in the past at Warhol's Factory or at Studio 54, and Antony wouldn't really notice, or think it relevant to bring up in his narration, because he's seeing the progress of time + our cultural signposts in a very different way than we would...) This whole thing made me *so* curious what the next chapters would be like! I could see it going one way if it sticks to Antony's voice; this gradual enfolding of Blake into the world and perspective of Antony's voice... And I could see it going another way if it switches to Blake's POV for the next chapter, and gives us this brisk, flipped, contemporary perspective on Antony (what would Antony even look like, seen from Blake's eyes?) and on whatever events are about to happen to Blake... Either way, so many possibilities!
Nutiper
9/23/20, 3:50 AM
Muscle growth... huge leaking cocks... magic blowjob powers... Stuart literally feeling that cock grow and stretch down his throat as he's deep-throating it... And then, both of them obliviously justifying it to themselves, with lines like "There's nothing gay about having to breathe through your nose 'cos you're deep-throating your friend's twelve-inch cock".... *chef kiss*
Nutiper
9/23/20, 3:36 AM
Oh I always adore your worldbuilding. And it inevitably makes me want to read a Chapter 2, *just* to keep seeing more of the world, and the characters you've placed in it... and then a Chapter 3... and 4... and 5... haha! This is a *great* concept for a pandemic, though — and a really nice character dynamic, too. It was great sexy fun to watch it develop between the three of them. :)
9/23/20, 2:04 AM
Loved it!
9/23/20, 1:32 AM
A great twist on straight to gay transformations! Loved it!
Anonymous
9/23/20, 1:26 AM
The way you write makes the scene so incredibly passionate, almost as though you feel a bit intrusive reading about the deep connection they're sharing. One of the most beautifully written stories I've read in a while...quite a talent!