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11/7/20, 11:15 AM
> It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds... would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. > That particular episode is ingrained in my head -- it was the first time I realized mind-control got my little tween penis hard. Or maybe it was Burt Ward's acting skills.
11/7/20, 9:55 AM
Love your story. We NEED the next chapters. please ❤️
11/7/20, 8:35 AM
@Feed Your Head, I found those scenes more amusing (and arousing) than horrific. It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds or (more appropriately) Poison Ivy would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. Maybe I'm just not a romantic, but that's been the hottest part of the story for me so far, watching these love relationships (or father-son relationships) diminish in importance as one of the men gets controlled by a Great One.
Guy
11/7/20, 7:53 AM
Would be hot if Jesse had some action with Colin as well in the game
El observador
11/7/20, 7:42 AM
your way to write the relationship between father and son I love it, continue with this please. option three interests me
Anonymous
11/7/20, 4:29 AM
Good story but I would like you to continuous "Big Topped" story most.
11/7/20, 3:52 AM
What a terrific chapter. Honestly, I never liked Sheriff Lane--even all the way back in the first part of the series, he was an arrogant, cocky jerk. Seeing him get his just deserts is indeed delicious! :p Less tasty for me, though--and definitely playing into the horror element, which you do beautifully--are the scenes where the more powerful Symbionts use their abilities to make their victims fall utterly, hopelessly in love with them. That complete erasure of personhood and the destruction of genuine emotional connection (be it between parents and children or true lovers) like it is nothing is *horrific.* Imagine loving someone all your life, swearing up and down that you were meant to be...and with a single gesture, all of that love is destroyed. That makes me shiver and even cry a bit...you truly are an amazing author! :)
11/7/20, 2:17 AM
Great story. Now how about a follow up where the Minstrel follows the bandits back to their camp, double-crosses them, and enslaves /everybody/. Also (just a personal preferences), some scenes where the enslaved men are aware of their humiliation but unable to do anything about it would be nice. :
11/7/20, 12:56 AM
Beyond that, yeah, this is a super sexy story. Super sexy. I like all three men and hope that at the end of this little adventure there is a foursome with Jese and the three. hehe By the way the idea of him sitting on say a lap in a darkened performance center as the show goes on is now in my head, and its wonderful. Its an idea just as great as him laying on his belly, sucking a man's cock, as the man fingers and then maybe rims his ass while working to make it so others don't see them. (The game can make it so its impossible for them to be caught while putting on moments that make it seem like they will be caught.)
11/7/20, 12:43 AM
Good premise and excellent writing. The transformation was visceral and still pretty hot. These are quickly becoming my favorite series.
11/7/20, 12:36 AM
Im sorry but the presence of Christine ruined things. If she wasn't here it would have been great.
11/6/20, 11:09 PM
Well played, sir, well played!! A very enjoyable story; I enjoyed the surprise of Sygg to learn that the bard hadn't been vetted. That set the stage for everything to come.
Lusty Stallion
11/6/20, 10:59 PM
Well I didnt see Koby becoming a bottom or the demons explanation coming. Thanks man for a great story
11/6/20, 7:55 PM
I wish him luck in resolving his issues and hope he is able to join us soon!
11/6/20, 6:59 PM
Very hot and original story! Though I thought till the end that the bard would turn against the bandits and play some more. Hope the story continues! The few paragraphs describing Sygg's induction were especially well-written, hope there's more like that if you give this a follow-up!
11/6/20, 6:47 PM
What a sweet romance! I look forward to the next chapter.
11/6/20, 6:31 PM
> I’m a Rubbrsome fan, Absman. The more twisted and trippy, the better! > Funny you should mention Rubbrsome! I'm happy to say I got an email from him this morning, because he'd heard we were talking about him in the Forum. He's healthy and well, though he's dealing with some life stuff, and he'll come back to us when he can. I'm even happier to say he's reading this series -- and he likes it!
11/6/20, 6:20 PM
> Believe me when I say the next three chapters are a roller-coaster ride and none of it – I hope – what you expect. Personally, I'm satisfied that I managed to guess the big twists regarding the Deputy, Lane and Snake, and Rugby Boy based on your foreshadowing and some very generous hints from you. I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop with my theory about Rugby Boy, but I'm confident that will play out at least mostly as predicted- though of course, I welcome an unforeseen twist. Balancing the twin needs to satisfy an audience by meeting their expectations to create enjoyment and satisfaction while also subverting their expectations to create interest and emotional investment is difficult, even for people who tell stories for a living. > Everything we know and have been comfortable with has been thrown for a loop and we’re off in a different direction than we’d been set up for. I'm a Rubbrsome fan, Absman. The more twisted and trippy, the better!
11/6/20, 6:02 PM
Such a hot story! I loved the image of a tavern full of enslaved men with dripping hard cocks!
11/6/20, 5:55 PM
> someone with a mind control kink would probably be perfectly fine with an alien invasion story ending in the symbiosis and mental enslavement of humanity > This series -- all the way back to the Original Tale -- has always been a Horror Story. An erotic horror story -- however weird that seems -- but horror nonetheless. We are at the moment of divergence with this chapter. Everything we know and have been comfortable with has been thrown for a loop and we're off in a different direction than we'd been set up for. Believe me when I say the next three chapters are a roller-coaster ride and none of it -- I hope -- what you expect.
11/6/20, 5:55 PM
This story is great. I agree with the previous comment, I like how Sygg began to take the story as his own and asume he's a donkey. I like his name, Sygg sounds good (and being renamed Ass is good too, I love renames). The only thing is that I would have loved to see more of those about "trying to accomplish what he thought were noble quests while ultimately making an ass of himself to everyone around him." Would had been fun to explore how he see some humiliating things as part of his quests, and mess more with his former self. But anyway, it is pretty cool, as all your stories
11/6/20, 5:40 PM
> We know the old man was transformed into the Great One but with only a few indications. Here you provide the whole thing > Lots of people have been hoping for a POV-character transformation, which I haven't done since Book One. As something this series is sort of known for, I felt it was important to include this scene. Don't worry -- this is not the last transformation in this story.
Anonymous
11/6/20, 5:25 PM
There is one gay Among Us
11/6/20, 5:22 PM
> I’ve worked VERY HARD to get everybody hoping for a happy ending in a story where we’re rooting for the villains. Depends on your definition of "happy ending," I suppose. As I've said in the past, someone with a mind control kink would probably be perfectly fine with an alien invasion story ending in the symbiosis and mental enslavement of humanity. Regardless of who loses, we, the readers, will win. But yes, kudos Absman for putting us in this position as an audience!
Anonymous
11/6/20, 5:15 PM
So hot. The way you described how the knight began to think of himself as a donkey. I would like to read more like this. Like with apes, dogs, pigs, chickens :D I am very excited :)
11/6/20, 5:12 PM
Wow, chapter 68 is amazing. We know the old man was transformed into the Great One but with only a few indications. Here you provide the whole thing and it could make anyone shoot as much cum as if they were taken over by the plants. Great sequence of chapters!!!
11/6/20, 5:05 PM
> I guess good things really do come to those who wait. > No words could make me happier!
11/6/20, 5:03 PM
Back on Oct 13, on the Forum Discussion Thread, I wrote: > So… I just wrote a scene in chapter 18 that’s been marinating in my head for over fifteen years! Some of this story has just stored itself away as a series of images – I “saw” this or that happening, I just hadn’t worked out the details.Then there are those scenes – like the one I just finished – that I knew everything about! I knew the dialogue and the camera angles and the images I wanted. It’s almost surrealistic that I’m actually writing it. > I've been sitting on this chapter for weeks now, dying for you to all get here. I'm still not completely free to talk about EVERYTHING, but I will say that I've worked VERY HARD to get everybody hoping for a happy ending in a story where we're rooting for the villains. Just think, this is 9 (of 12), and we're STILL building toward a denouement. That's something that POLLINATION: The Series, Book One, has NEVER been able to say!
11/6/20, 4:42 PM
Rereading the chapter (and blowing another load over the description of Lane and Snake's enthrallment, that was Grade A writing), the terror and hopelessness of Tully at the sight of the enhanced/erased Murdock sticks out as a haunting image, a narrative warning that there's not going to be a clean, simple, happy ending, at least for Part 2. Whether it be humanity or the symbionts and their Hosts, someone is screwed. I remember you mentioning that you kept Tully around because of a particular tableau that you wanted to use her in. I have a feeling this is it.
11/6/20, 4:03 PM
Nice one, good plot ! Thanks for this story !