Recent Comments

11/3/20, 7:13 AM
Just read the whole series.....I hope you are going to continue it.
Martin
11/3/20, 6:51 AM
Could you please rename your series to "One of Us"? You can use the "administration" button in the Series view to rename the series. "OoU" is not a good name for a series! Contact me if you have questions (martin@gayspiralstories.com)
Lusty Stallion
11/3/20, 6:46 AM
Great new addition. Thanks man. Great work
MakeMeAPigToo
11/3/20, 6:14 AM
So hot and nasty! Love your dirty mind major! 🐷 🐷
11/3/20, 5:07 AM
"peer pressure, I'm far too sensitive" -Stu
11/3/20, 4:54 AM
gotta love a good fantasy read :)
Aug 20, 2019
11/3/20, 4:21 AM
i need some of these undies
xxhotguy13
11/3/20, 1:53 AM
so hot love these
Anonymous
11/3/20, 12:49 AM
so so hot and very well written but its too short and incomplete hopefully we get to see more.
11/2/20, 11:59 PM
Awesome ending! I loved the romance between Koby and Mortimer. The demon's explanation to the reader was very creative. Thanks for writing.
11/2/20, 11:37 PM
I've been hanging on every word in many ways, but getting to the "HAIL GREAT ONE" and the way the plot moved there really got me going. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you for doing this.
11/2/20, 11:17 PM
the conservative political party, the family value thing, its not an issue for me if they are not harassing the LGBT community
Lusty Stallion
11/2/20, 11:07 PM
Thanks @darkblade2814. just for clarification when you say a conservative gathering, are you talking about conservative in the right wing sense of family values, traditional beliefs or the UK conservative political party currently in power? it makes quite a difference ti the story
Anonymous
11/2/20, 11:04 PM
I love that this is happening in the Dads bedroom.... Maybe the Dad can give Paul some protein too
11/2/20, 10:34 PM
that was a very fun ride, thank you
11/2/20, 10:12 PM
I would love a prequel!
11/2/20, 7:56 PM
plz continue
Drake Nightstrom
11/2/20, 7:53 PM
Chapter 5 is in, which I hope you all enjoy.
Jonanator
11/2/20, 7:18 PM
I so can't wait for more. I love stories that involve brothers, and this is soooo hot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
11/2/20, 7:04 PM
can't wait to see how this will turn out!
11/2/20, 7:00 PM
Thanks for all your wonderful comments, folks! I'm looking forward to hearing what you think about the other parts, and of course the whole thing once it's all been released! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Jonanator
11/2/20, 6:49 PM
I so loved this. Hope there will be another chapter.
11/2/20, 6:19 PM
Same with the comment above. another longer chapter would be nice
11/2/20, 6:08 PM
Loving this story! It's very well written and a delight to read.
11/2/20, 4:34 PM
Interesting premise and love hairy transformation. Thank you for posting.
11/2/20, 3:47 PM
Damn this is hot, too short though ;) would loove another chapter :3
11/2/20, 3:39 PM
Please add some more to this
11/2/20, 3:18 PM
Definitely enjoyed this