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Anonymous
1/1/21, 3:32 AM
So Graham changed Aaron's morality. We know that everything else is in reference to the morality of the person. Aaron's morality was changed to I take what I want. But that idea runs counter to the concept of obedience. Why would Aaron listen or do what Colin wants if Aaron wants to beat Colin, have Graham for himself, and and save the other boys? Aaron takes what he wants and to take what he wants he must do what Colin doesn't want him to do. So the new pillar should allow him to resist the new bead of obedience. So what if Aaron is playing 4-D chess, he pretends that he has been beaten and conquered, so when Colin challenges him to a game of pool, so Colin can warp Aaron just like everyone, he flips the table on Colin. Colin thinks he already owns Aaron so he doesn't sink any of the balls that would cost Aaron the game, giving Aaron the chance to sink his version of the balls instead. He sinks the balls, changes Colin so Colin can't win, and then changes Colin again to make sure that not only does he stop messing with people, but he also undoes everything else that he does.
1/1/21, 3:08 AM
"Blowjobs had seemed easier when it had been his girlfriend doing it to him." This line ALONE makes the whole story! Fucking BRILLIANT. Blake's perspective is awesome. The way he transitions from a bi-curious essentially straight-boy into an ass-whore -- fucking HOT! The prospect of full cum-control -- Blake getting *caged* -- started to seep into my rhyme-addled brain at some stage. It didn't happen in *this* story, but you've opened the door... You asked which song we liked? All of them!! It's fucking HOT when Pup in Heat makes Blake go down to the floor and his back arches. The image is fucking HOT! It's near the start of Blake's being MindVoided, so a big step into his drone conversion. The mental image is really strong. But the workout song takes first prize for me. It's is like a CrossFit WOD cross-bred with a wet dream. I really, really like that song.
1/1/21, 3:03 AM
You need to do the Rock or John Cena
Dec 31, 2020
1/1/21, 3:00 AM
*This story is so damn cute...* Your characters are lovable as *hell,* Dace, and the setting felt so vivid and cozy and festive! Adorable and deeply, *achingly* merry and jolly, as a holiday story should be. The sex scene was also just... *ugh.* Very good... I'm a sucker for size in erotica and you really pulled it off amazingly.
Dec 31, 2020
1/1/21, 2:57 AM
Ahhhhh I love this story... once again you just have such a knack for worldbuilding in subtle little ways, like all the allusions to Vulcan/Hephaestus peppered throughout and the way the protag felt like he had a whole history building up to this point in his character. The sex was hot, you interpreted the prompt in a super fascinating way, and the characters were lovable and had such a fun dynamic. Great read!
1/1/21, 2:53 AM
I adore this story, it falls into that category of "perfect cocktail of hot and almost silly/tongue in cheek" which you do so well... the cyclical aspect just kept getting hotter but was also kind of hilarious. The characters were also really well done, especially for such a short story! You did a *lovely* job with this prompt, as always.
1/1/21, 2:12 AM
Hey, abracadabra923! This is awesome. Among a bunch of incredibly hot things you did here, Camden's diminishing self-possession is my personal favorite. His obliviousness to what the MindVoiderz are doing to him, and his emergence at the end as a brain-drained Voider-boy is incredibly hot, too. Personally, I've never gotten even a bit of enjoyment out of clubbing or concert-going of the sort the scene in your story is fashioned after. Yet -- and this further demonstrates what a command you have over this concept and art form -- I couldn't stop reading and couldn't stop getting into how cool it would be to be there with Camden and his fellow drones-in-the making. Thank you for this amazing story!
1/1/21, 1:22 AM
Especially liked the idea of U47 figuring things out, and the fact that the toys had a sort of a life of their own for four out of twenty-four hours.
1/1/21, 12:34 AM
Sure wish there were more chapters of game night fun 😏
12/31/20, 11:32 PM
This series ended up chock full of sexy transformations...not sure which is my favorite! Well done.
12/31/20, 11:28 PM
One man's cult is another man's religion: that's the heart of this story. For the only thing that is non-normative is that the religion is centered around men and their sexual nature. But the change that occurs over the story is positive and enjoyable. And when it closes with Detective John bringing others in the brotherhood it feels good to see it. You've written a very enjoyable and positive story. I look forward to seeing what else you produce.
Anonymous
12/31/20, 11:24 PM
can we get logan and scott in here too?
12/31/20, 10:43 PM
Great story, nicely written and well-paced. Enjoyed the moment when John realises he has been tricked and then decides to go along with things anyway. Is there going to be another chapter perhaps involving the fellow officer from the gym, wealthy investor and lawyer?
12/31/20, 10:34 PM
Awesome story! :D I love Mojo and his twisted parody of reality television. :p You do a great job capturing the tone of the character, too! Can't wait to see what happens when Nightcrawler eats the other sweets...
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 10:33 PM
Now that was an original story and told so perfectly through the eyes of a seasoned barkeep! Wonderful!
12/31/20, 9:54 PM
Very hot story! But I wanted to know more about what happened to Darren. We get such a tight focus on the relationship between John and the Leader that we don't get to see the rest of the cult very much.
4luvofurbottom
12/31/20, 9:21 PM
Yes! I'm do happy this series is continuing. i love your writing, love the descriptions and inner focus of changes. But i especially love that you focus on changing a guy into a hot thicc otter. Can't wait til the narrator realizes his dick is useless.
12/31/20, 8:18 PM
is Gearfetish.com still a thing?
Dec 31, 2020
Anonymous
12/31/20, 7:36 PM
excellent work!!
Anonymous
12/31/20, 7:35 PM
[@Hypnothrill](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/37386) - If I wrote a sequel, I don't think that's the direction I'd take it. Thought I'll admit, I did almost have the story end with another knock on the door and a giftwrapped gumball machine waiting for the himbos. So far as Ben goes, I thought he'd end up differently too, but he jumped right off the page while I was writing him, so this is who he is. [@Plymouth58](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1353762) - Thanks man! To be honest, I don't really like Ben as a person either, but I think it's a better story with him there. He's the foil to Mark and Kenny. I meant to write him as more of a fun daddy type, but sometimes a character tells me who they are and I just have to go with it. [@Island Jock](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/918465) - That'd be totally sick, right? But, so far as I know, nobody has invented it yet. You'll just have to do the same thing I do - listen to your cock and do whatever it wants. @Wow - Thanks bro! I've been doing a lot of more experimental stuff this year, and I decided to end it off by returning to my roots and writing a good ol' himbo story. [@welan](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/114561) - Super glad to hear that. I was trying to keep it shorter, but the sex scenes just kept coming. Stoked to hear it wasn't too long. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Thanks man. I dunno about his IQ, but there's definitely something that happens to cement the personality change when a new himbo swallows the gum. A good himbo loves to swallow after all. @anon - Thanks bro! :)
12/31/20, 7:10 PM
can I suggest a prompt? what about a conservative party gathering that is turned into a gay pride rally and orgy after the sound equipment I hijacked?
Anonymous
12/31/20, 5:31 PM
The worldbuilding in this story is so succinct and sharp, and I love the religious swear expressions. My favourite part is the trial, it's so surreal and delightful. The sexy parts are also so well-written, and the little details in the scenes are really well-chosen. So good!
12/31/20, 4:58 PM
Damn! Okay I see how his goes now. Def have someone in mine to Dibbs. *evil smirk*
12/31/20, 4:56 PM
Love this. So hot!
12/31/20, 4:16 PM
Hope they 69 in the next chapter! 🤤
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 4:14 PM
What a fun concept - the Restaurant at the End of the Multiverse, as it were. Had me thirsting for graphic details, particularly of what went down on the dance floor. Also, what a chill, competent waiter. 10/10 would tip big.
12/31/20, 4:05 PM
I *loved* this! Thanks so much for writing it, Noam!
12/31/20, 4:03 PM
Hot!!!
Anonymous
12/31/20, 3:52 PM
excellent work thanks