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1/2/21, 2:24 AM
Damien's transformation is totally hot!
1/2/21, 2:16 AM
To be physically controlled to this level and disconnected from being able to control one's own body would be an incredible (but frightening!) experience. Would love to try it with a worthy Dom. Just the way you have described the natural progression of the testing and fine-tuning the control also ramps up the erotic tension in the story. Very smooth, and very arousing! Thanks so much!
megachiraz
1/2/21, 2:12 AM
Awesome hot story, loved the details! And thanks!
1/2/21, 1:47 AM
So glad to see you revisit this series. Still one of my favorites of all time, and you kept it fresh and hot.
1/2/21, 1:46 AM
Theodore has been my favorite. I'm glad he got the best transformation. And all the stories in this series have been so well written, but this writing excelled. "The ass fucker bucked hard, spasming and forcing the cocksucker further down the pole to his goal." That, and other sentences like it, were perfect during Theo's transformation. This story had me laughing in one paragraph and squeezing my hardening cock in the next paragraph.
1/2/21, 1:22 AM
haha Yes, probably would be a better Halloween story rather than New Year's, but that's how slow I am.
1/2/21, 12:58 AM
For some reason, I feel like I should've been drinking some wine while reading this. Maybe... oh, I don't know... an amontillado?
1/2/21, 12:56 AM
Very hot transformations. Loved this story!
1/2/21, 12:45 AM
Hands down -- or is that hands off, so I can type? -- the best hypnosis/mind control story I've ever read! The demon theme isn't even one I'm into. However, the way Nutiper depicts the demon's power over these dudes, and the sexual control the demon exerts, are crazy-hot! The humor is brilliant, too. I've never before found myself so close to creaming only to burst out laughing. And to have that happen several times over! Hmmm... did the demon maybe teach Nutiper how to take a guy on a demon-style vacation just by writing? :-) Haha! An awesome, hot, and at the same time feel-good story for pandemic times.
1/2/21, 12:37 AM
The new Ben may know to scream Hail King Rex when he orgasms. Thanks Great Absman
Oddballs
1/1/21, 11:50 PM
@Sam: Soooo... When you say 'deprived shit', could I possibly get some sort of clue about that? I have several ideas written out, but I'd like to hear what you may have in mind, if you please o3o
Sam
1/1/21, 10:56 PM
please make ian do some seriously depraved shit sounds fun to fuck with aaron
Anonymous
1/1/21, 10:40 PM
oye, continua con la historia, estuvo muy buena
1/1/21, 10:39 PM
Thank you for this great (and hot) series! Keep writing, please!
1/1/21, 10:23 PM
I enjoyed the insatiable sexed-up jocks realizing that they are in fact slutty, cock-crazed sex pigs.
DikThik
1/1/21, 9:35 PM
Thanks, Tough. Hope you like its progression and its conclusion. Lemme know either way.
Toughluck
1/1/21, 9:34 PM
Keeping it coming!
Toughluck
1/1/21, 9:23 PM
Exceptional first chapter, and I can't wait to learn more of Charlie's fate!
1/1/21, 8:51 PM
How is that evil? I don't think his LIFE STORE series is here on the GSS, which was why i changed it rather than simply providing a link Great stories tho
1/1/21, 8:15 PM
I particularly enjoyed this story. The willing transformation aspect was hot: the idea of a good looking guy getting improved with an artistic eye was great. Specifically having him gain hair in the most aesthetically pleasing places was pretty brilliant. Going further but not too far, and then ending up with the artist? Totally my jam.
1/1/21, 8:08 PM
AWESOME!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hope it gets naughtier and darker! Hope Ian really gets what he "deserves"!!!!! ;-)
whitechap_e1@talktalk.net
1/1/21, 8:04 PM
I am glad this story about ordinary people doing extraordinary things to each other is finding an audience. Thank you for your kind comments, they do much to bolster my fragile ego! Always happy to hear ideas about how to take things forward.
Martin
1/1/21, 7:49 PM
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1/1/21, 7:12 PM
I look forward to Levi's transformation to utterly content baby, happily pissing himself and being molested by his loving Daddy.
1/1/21, 6:36 PM
@Rock Creek Werewolf & @ Willie Cici- I doubt I'll write a sequel here. @[John Kuir](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/588303) - I've never really gotten into leather. I mean, yeah, I wear a leather jacket, but that's just cuz I look hot in it. @[RainbowMika91](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/916877) - The virus doesn't affect them, but within a year of the transformations starting women across the world get pay equity, and one of them is elected president.
1/1/21, 6:12 PM
This was really well done. I am looking forward to reading the rest.
1/1/21, 5:42 PM
I hope you have more. This was so much fun to read.
1/1/21, 5:02 PM
This is just SO good.
1/1/21, 4:33 PM
@FeedYourHead Glad you liked it! The exciting conclusion of Kurt's adventure will be on it's way shortly. @Anon: I'll say the answer to your question is... sorta. Wouldn't expect them to show up in this room but I've toyed with the idea of making it a series.
1/1/21, 4:04 PM
It is a hot story! I agree with Hypnothrill though, Darren seems to be such an important person in the beginning of the story, but after meeting him once he kinda disappears into the background. I'm very curious about Darren's reasons to go to John, was Darren being initiated in the mean time as well but did he try to resist? It makes a person curious at least ;)