Recent Comments

2/22/21, 6:27 AM
hope he gets his dick back
giveintothemusk
2/22/21, 4:51 AM
Good lord this was hot. One of my fave pieces in a while.
2/22/21, 4:24 AM
Great first chapter! I look forward to where you take the story next.
Elm
2/22/21, 2:48 AM
What an excellent story! thank you for writing it!
IvorySilk
2/21/21, 11:47 PM
@ControlMe Oh, it's cause I read that the contest was for one shots, and I very much needed this story be neatly oragnized in chapters, cause that's how I conceived it. And I didn't want to ask for an exception cause that wouldn't be fair. XD
Anonymous
2/21/21, 11:43 PM
love the new Levi character! Cant wait to see all the hijincks that he and his magic ass, cock, and pussy get up to.
Lusty Stallion
2/21/21, 10:57 PM
Just my sort of story man. A guy granted power and he selfishly uses it on unsuspecting, undeserving men. Love it. Looking forward to more
2/21/21, 10:53 PM
The story was excellent. Well conceived, well constructed, well told, and definitely wanking material for anyone into gay erotic mind control. My only question is: why haven't you entered it into the Fallen Hero writing contest? I think it already won.
2/21/21, 9:55 PM
Great set-up! I look forward to the stories of the patients.
2/21/21, 9:19 PM
Great one. Love to be at that show. Yes like to see another part. Re minded me of a show i was at. I was at a "R" rated hypnosis show. I was arozed in the stow and thought i get up and wake, On stage or in this car, on the way to his house. talking about this next show, I be in. Thank you.
Anonymous
2/21/21, 8:19 PM
looking forward to wherever this is going!
Feb 19, 2021
Anonymous
2/21/21, 8:11 PM
really hot! would love to see this continued
Conversion Enthusiast
2/21/21, 8:00 PM
Like Hypnothrill, I definitely had to leverage what little history of Megaman to make things make sense but I liked this idea a lot. I love seeing the conversion and corruption of supposed heroes, but I wish I had more of a lengthier conversion for the heroes. Granted the scenes were pretty clear and I think I made a pretty clear picture of things as the story was told so that was kinda cool too.
Anonymous
2/21/21, 7:32 PM
I'm intrigued.
2/21/21, 6:10 PM
I definitely enjoyed the elements with the hero being corrupted and then infecting his comrades with the malware so they would serve Dr. Wily as well. But because I'm not very familiar with the Mega Man franchise, I had difficulty following parts of the story.
2/21/21, 4:42 PM
I love it. It's so well written and described, it's pretty cool, the change of mind is great. Also, I'm a long time Mega Man fan, so this hit me straight in the nostalgia. Great story!
Anonymous
2/21/21, 4:22 PM
Please, write a sequel
IvorySilk
2/21/21, 4:11 PM
Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback again! I'm really glad you all enjoyed this story. It sat on computer for a solid year before I pulled myself together to finishing it, and I'm happy I did now. ^^
Anonymous
2/21/21, 4:05 PM
I don't think I have ever read a real life story on here before. I'm fascinated to see where this goes.
Author
2/21/21, 4:02 PM
@goodbiforever - I'm really grateful for you catching that massive plot hole. I've fixed it now. To save you re-reading it (although you can) basically Brad wishes that he can start and stop time and then starts commanding time to start and stop. I hope I'm allowed to fix the issue in my submission and I'm grateful for you in picking it up. I was so caught up in the writing of this, that I missed it! Thanks bro (I'm posting annonymously in case people don't want to know who I am, even with the link to the previous parts at the top)
2/21/21, 3:06 PM
Thanks for the comments! I hope the story fleshes out more as the chapters go on. They start shorter...so I hope they become more to your liking!
2/21/21, 2:05 PM
I am enjoying the themes you are exploring in this hot tale of world transformation. Thanks for continuing the story.
Anonymous
2/21/21, 11:52 AM
Miss naya's blurry on ao3 is SO GOOD and can see how it inspired this story. You did a great job
2/21/21, 11:22 AM
I need to hear what happens next! What did the text message say? How did the Sunday at church go? Please continue this story!
2/21/21, 11:07 AM
This was great! I really enjoyed the slow burn of the reveal - and how Mike's now trapped... so good. Excellent work.
2/21/21, 11:06 AM
This was so, so, so enjoyable. Captivating from start to finish, beautifully thought out and fun! Sad it's over - happy I got to read it! Thanks.
2/21/21, 11:01 AM
I absolutely love this series! I want more! Please write more! Get more of their friends involved from the first night at the bar and send them all the hypno link! I DARE you!
2/21/21, 10:21 AM
Will we see an epilogue?
Jonanator
2/21/21, 10:08 AM
please do more to this, it;s sooo hot. hope there is more.
2/21/21, 9:59 AM
I am IN LOVE with this story. Thank you for a new chapter. i cannot wait for the world leader meeting, there are indeed some hotties in there