Recent Comments

4/16/21, 6:41 AM
This is so good. Thankyou Wesley
4/15/21, 9:29 PM
Holy fuck, dude.

4/16/21, 4:11 AM
@Dace i'm glad you like it! thanks for reading!
4/16/21, 3:15 AM
Fuck, this is hot. I hoped that the trio of friends would come up again after their introduction in the first chapter and I'm excited to see our accursed bottom's development! Great job, and looking forward to more!
4/16/21, 1:01 AM
amazing, can't wait for the next installment
4/16/21, 12:52 AM
Extremely satisfying please continue these.
Apr 11, 2021
4/16/21, 12:00 AM
I love your "take over " stories. This one will not disappoint. I really enjoyed how their dicks communicated and ran the show as they were brainless or asleep. It is one of my frequent go to jerk off fantasies. It was good to see it expressed by someone else. Hot.
4/15/21, 10:07 PM
Phenomenal, love this as a sequel, be awesome to see the pigs riding the streets at some point.
4/15/21, 9:51 PM
when will there be a new chapter? really like this story!
4/15/21, 9:43 PM
I'm in! Terrific transformation -- keep it up.
4/15/21, 7:43 PM
Really liked this one! Curious to see where it goes!
4/15/21, 5:07 PM
Great start! The transformation was great!
Sep 14, 2012
4/15/21, 4:22 PM
cool idea and well written:)
4/15/21, 4:16 PM
I'm waiting for chapter 5.
1/30/19, 5:08 AM
love this story.... would like more too.

4/15/21, 1:29 PM
Thank you I'm actually planning on finally finishing part 4 after all these years.@Titan
12/9/20, 5:44 AM
Its too bad this piece never got finished. It's well written.

Steve
4/15/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you so much for that compliment!@Body Odor
Steve
4/15/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you for those who like my story. I know it's been many years since part 3, but I do plan on finishing it soon. I'm not on AOL anymore, so feel free to email me at bearcub27@icloud.com if you have any suggestions or thoughts you would like to share
4/15/21, 11:28 AM
Sooo... What are we going to d about Saul Bennett?
4/15/21, 9:50 AM
A nice piece of transformation writing.
4/15/21, 9:05 AM
Like the other commenter said, an instant classic. Each chapter has been insanely hot & you've done a great job at balancing mind-bendingly erotic sex with plenty of personality in the writing style to make it feel unique and memorable. I know you've gotten feedback for changes in the comments, but honestly I'd say stick to your guns & stay true to your initial vision, what you've done so far has been fantastic & I can't wait to see how it pans out. My only sadness is it will be 10 chapters not 100!
Jon
4/15/21, 3:46 AM
Please do more it is good.
4/15/21, 3:40 AM
please do continue
Elm
4/13/21, 9:12 PM
It was amazing!

4/15/21, 2:41 AM
@Elm thank you!
Anonymous
4/15/21, 12:10 AM
I was wondering the other day what was gonna happen next in this story. So glad to see it again!
4/15/21, 12:06 AM
would luv to read what happens next but i would like to know the backstory on how the person got mickey in the first place & maybe a lil bit more on the captor...but all in all is quite good, but needs a lil work....i give it a 3/5.
Apr 11, 2021
4/14/21, 10:02 PM
I loved this and can't wait for the next part!!! great job Hypnothrill!
4/14/21, 9:59 PM
very interesting.....would like to know what happens after though....would like u to keep it up. doing great so far w/ this story. keep up the nice work
KKA
4/14/21, 8:44 PM
feels like an instant classic, loving your development of these characters. looking forward to more, this curse will be a marathon for Willem AND you!
4/14/21, 8:29 PM
really enjoyed this one. Love that it's a sequel to your Pig Squad story.
4/14/21, 2:33 PM
So far I am loving this series. it seems to me that mortal is starting to enjoy the changes that are taking place. I know he is linked to the demon, but it seems that the Demon is getting the upper hand, I know what happens to one happens to the other. There maybe less concern for the mortal now. I will look out for more chapters and of course, we have to see what is happening to Dom's earthly dad. All males household I think soon

4/14/21, 8:11 PM
@MalSkin All I can say is that the Demon certainly revels in his power and his creations - but as you say "what happens to one happens to the other".
4/14/21, 8:06 PM
Wish you were gonna post following episodes here. It was a "hard" read.