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3/17/22, 5:05 PM
Loving everything so far. Thonged muscle fags are such a huge turn on. Getting me inspired to write again haha.

3/17/22, 9:39 PM
that's awesome @Insignia, write me some muscle thong erotica!!
3/17/22, 8:40 PM
Love the idea of the time skip! This story is excellent, always come back to it.
bimarguy
3/17/22, 6:07 PM
nothing hotter then a good musk/manscent story , i do hope theres a chapter 2
3/17/22, 11:20 AM
Another fantastic chapter. I'm curious to see what this box contains, but you won't keep us in suspence too long hopefully. Can't wait to see where they end up.

3/17/22, 11:25 AM
Thx @Timet I have literally just started Ch4. I've been pumping them out quite quickly so I don't think you'll have long to wait.

3/17/22, 11:28 AM
@GoonNoob Good to hear that. I've also enjoyed how you've been really interactive with the commenters on the chapters, and the idea of a Q&A wrap up is a fantastic

3/17/22, 11:41 AM
@Timet hopefully you stick around till the end and enjoy the climax enough to take part.

3/17/22, 11:42 AM
@GoonNoob I'm sure I will, I'll be there with a thong on

3/17/22, 11:45 AM
@Timet Awesome! You'll have to give details. Currently wearing a bright blue thong with a long, shaped pouch so I can stroke while I work... its actually amazing how fast I write considering 😆

3/17/22, 5:38 PM
@GoonNoob my favorite one is a black hustler thong. I also have a few pairs of posing briefs with ruching, so its thong adjacent
3/17/22, 3:35 PM
Can't wait for the chapter 4. I hope Jack gets used by Joe's
Anonymous
3/17/22, 12:51 PM
Another hot chapter. You're a very good writer. If I'm being critical, it still feels like Jason and Brock are really similar in personality though, even if they look a little different. I'd love to get the feeling that they've got a genuine dynamic between the two of them. Like, who is the more dominant, or who is the more willing to experiment? Like, other than needing to blend in with the crowd, why did Brock do the snatching and Jason ride the bike? Would also be good to learn what their (former?) life of crime means for their future.

3/17/22, 1:11 PM
thanks @, appreciate the compliments and valid criticism. It's easy, when the characters and their personalities are vivid in the author's mind that not everything gets translated to the page. Will try and work on differentiating between the two, even as they both become anal addicted thong fags. As for their life of crime, ch4 will see them trying to get back into the game but not everything goes as planned.

Anonymous
3/17/22, 2:58 PM
Sounds awesome @GoonNoob Thanks for taking the suggestions so positively - I wouldn't critique if i didnt think you were already a top writer ;)
Anonymous
11/15/21, 3:50 AM
HHHOWWWW do i read all of that and still want more loll I'm sorry, but you're writing is SUPERB! I can't get enough from it...

11/15/21, 4:22 AM
Wow, thanks! More to come! @

Semtex
3/17/22, 2:50 PM
@bluesuedewho it's been a while, when is the next chapter coming out ? this stuff is really good yknow :D.
Mar 31, 2019
3/17/22, 2:04 PM
I think it’s very clever putting the story from the bully’s perspective when he doesn’t comprehend that he’s the bully—yeah, Tailang asked some unreasonable things at first, perhaps, but it becomes quickly clear that the POV is an absolute bitch. I can appreciate his comeuppance without feeling so bad for him.
Anonymous
8/12/17, 9:08 PM
Brb grabbing a flight to Kiev to find the Yellow Room and live there forever.

PromethiumJPM
3/17/22, 12:43 PM
Brother, take me with you!@
3/17/22, 10:40 AM
Love the dramatic changes.
3/16/22, 7:30 PM
Fun first story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

3/17/22, 10:04 AM
@Derek Williams oh you will get to see where the boys take it ;)
11/10/21, 9:02 PM
Love seeing daddy and son turning other men into gay bears. Hope to see more of them changing others. maybe change a coach into a gay bear?

Anonymous
3/17/22, 8:56 AM
@Redcoma100
Ben
3/10/22, 1:40 AM
I like this story but in this chapter it repeats like 3 times, very confusing

3/17/22, 8:53 AM
@Ben The repeating scenes are a motif of the story, the exact same thing happens in chapter 2. That's how the story works.
Apr 22, 2019
PromethiumJPM
3/17/22, 8:11 AM
Oh My fucking Gourd! A DP so early on, gourds bless this sin! Im all in!
Martin
3/17/22, 8:06 AM
Thank you for this meta story! I've only scanned it so far, but I'm really looking forward to read and enjoy it fully later tonight :)
3/17/22, 8:02 AM
awwww, I love the dynamic between those 3. So sexy. Jack is doing a great job protecting and serving
3/17/22, 7:39 AM
ooooooh,that's a nice twist in the power dynamics. I like that,good chapter
PromethiumJPM
3/17/22, 2:38 AM
Goddamn, this story is hotness + Sexy as F
3/16/22, 11:46 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed this, particularly bringing him back to awareness. Well done!
3/15/22, 7:13 PM
Loved seeing a nonbinary character in this story! Very curious about what's going on with Ercole's new powers!

3/16/22, 10:18 PM
@time.to.occur Always happy to represent less commonly seen minorities in my stories. But... Ercole has no powers? He was hypnotized by the stranger to use the machine without realizing it and to happily uses it to tweak Anstice's personality. I know i write a lot of magic & powers stories, but this is pure science-fiction.

3/16/22, 11:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish On my first reading, it wasn't completely clear to me how that had operated and what exactly he had passed onto him! thanks for clarifying.
3/15/22, 3:21 AM
I really enjoyed this, there was some grammar funkiness in the latter half but I appreciate more NB characters on this stories. I actually would wanna know where it goes next but I feel like it might be a closed ending. Also, do you know who the models are? like their names?

3/16/22, 10:22 PM
@TheSatanScully Didn't notice problems, besides me not knowing what term to use to describe a non-binary. I try to get variety in my stories. I am interested in what you though was weird. Having a NB was an idea I just didn't really knew where to put, and I realized it fit really well for this as i wrote it. And yes, it was planned as a one-off. Maybe I'll come back to it if i have an idea. But it's far from the only story I would just describe couple stuff if I wrote more, and I have a glaring lack of experience in that domain. And for the models... No, sorry. Pictures found on the net. The images I used for Ercole did have a name, though. Toni Mahfud. No idea for the other two, unfortunately.
Jonanator
3/14/22, 8:18 PM
loved it.

3/16/22, 10:16 PM
@Jonanator Oh thanks! I'm working on many stuff slowly at the same time, so happy to see that they are still people who are waiting for my stories =)
3/16/22, 4:51 PM
Love these 2 characters. I enjoyed reading about Connor and Donny, and so really like the 2 ex-robins even more so. Please keep them the center of this story. It is fucking sexy and hell.
Anonymous
3/16/22, 9:19 AM
Would love to see some competition between the lads - perhaps Zeus wants to have a little fun. Like comparing their bodies more, or seeing who cums first, who is stronger, more dominant, how big the size difference is INSIDE their thongs. ;)

3/16/22, 3:28 PM
@ i was actually thinking of something like that for ch4 but you've given me some very good idea. thanks!

Anonymous
3/16/22, 3:38 PM
Happy to help! @GoonNoob
Anonymous
3/16/22, 5:43 AM
I love this series so much! Keep going! This is so sexy love the thongs so much and the humiliation. Can't wait to read more!

3/16/22, 3:24 PM
@ i hope you a being a thong fag at home reading the story. I am writing them.
3/16/22, 12:38 AM
Another incredible chapter! Ordinarily I skip sex scenes, but you write them so well that I couldn't resist reading them all. I have a suspicion that the mysterious umbrella-carrying man is the original owner of the briefcase keeping an eye on his prey... ;p My favorite has been the gold and silver! Shiny metallic sounds interesting. :)

3/16/22, 3:23 PM
@Feed Your Head shiny thongs are my favorite. As for the other thing... spoilers ;)
3/15/22, 3:52 AM
What a great story! It has taken a dark turn at the moment, but I appreciate your skilled world-building throughout the series and the resolution to the mystery in this chapter. If Brett and Liam get back together, they may be happier on more equal status with them both being breeders. I have enjoyed the journey you have taken us on thus far and look forward to where you take us next.

3/16/22, 1:39 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thanks glad you are enjoying the story.
3/14/22, 7:31 PM
God, this was hot! I think I'm in love with the Russo's. Their dynamics seem to be the warmest of them all, and I guess that makes the corruption of its male members even hotter. Seeing how the big patriarch can't keep himself from swearing in a hardly repressed sexual frenzy was such a turn on. So it was Tony's confession to being a slut while looking at his *daddy* in the eye, or Gino's arousal from the dirty talk used towards his brother. I'll love to see how this continues whenever it continues. Also, I get such a kick out of Tanner making people believe his fragrant lies. I had to suppress my laughter when he insisted that it was Tony's birthday and they all politely denied it, and then he insisted and suddenly everyone felt like fools for forgetting. Priceless! I also love the way he subtly twists people's perception and principles with the most innocent sounding suggestions, or how he uses what he finds on people's minds so he can play them into doing what he fancies. The way he's written makes him one of my most favorite characters ever! I've loved him from chapter zero and I wish that he comes back with more perverse adventures after he finishes playing with this community. Even if it's in the distant future and after a long rest from writing him, I know I'd always be thrilled to witness his depraved ways. Thank you so much S. Q. Neemie for continuing this story!

3/14/22, 7:49 PM
@Piko Thanks, man! Your enthusiasm really means a lot. I'm grateful you're patient but I'm gonna try to be a little more regular in posting, if life slows down just a bit. And I have a few ideas about Tanner for the future. The thought of him stealing a guidance counselor's position for his next adventure has potential...

3/16/22, 1:18 PM
@S. Q. Neemie, just knowing that you already have some ideas for Tanner's future made my day! :D Thanks!
3/16/22, 9:45 AM
It's kinda been said ad nauseum in the comments already but I was not emotionally ready for this chapter! After spending so long with the characters and getting to know them it feels kinda painful to see them suffer like this. If jonas gives Brett his voice and tits and Liam gets cunted I feel like I'm gonna go full Annie Wilkes lol - jokes aside I do trust and respect your vision, and will be awaiting the next installments - though I'm almost scared to read on

3/16/22, 12:39 PM
@silverstat LOL ;- ) SLIPPED AWAY! SLIPPED AWAY? HIS DICK DIDN'T JUST SLIP AWAY! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT TO MY LIAM!