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5/20/22, 10:43 AM
Really hoping to see Carter turn the tables on Rusty, because he seems like a chill dude I'd love to hang with and Rusty is ruining a perfectly hot fantasy with his obnoxious personality. I mean, I get the whole appeal of a mind control kink is changing people and watching them change, but I just have a fundamental visceral aversion to seeing somebody who is THIS much of an asshole get to have things their way.

5/20/22, 11:28 AM
@goodbiforever Amen to this. Eventually I stop being interested in the story because I hate the character so much that it’s no longer fun to read. Granted, it’s a testament to the author’s skill that he can write characters that get such strong reactions! :)

R P
5/20/22, 12:33 PM
@goodbiforever I completely agree! Would love to see Carter confront Rusty and turn him into the exact kind of dumb jock he’s been trying to turn Carter into. If Carter becomes a bit more bi/gay along the way, that’s just gravy :D

5/20/22, 4:04 PM
@goodbiforever Ditto to this entire thread!

5/20/22, 8:19 PM
@R P that would be sweet delicious karma

R P
5/20/22, 10:17 PM
On rereading I just wanted to add that this first chapter has a hot concept, and is super well written, so definitely keen to read more! I’d just like to see Rusty get some comeuppance as well.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 9:31 PM
You write best with non consensual and sometimes cruel transformation - the Tyler chapter of your other work. In my opinion of course! I'd love to see some more noncon changes, perhaps SPH or feminisation (though I don't think you've ever written any to be fair)
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/20/22, 8:57 PM
Perfect ending. I like when the protagonist is kept in his new personality rather than stories which ables him to escape. If he is happy with what he has become, why take all that away from him?

5/20/22, 9:10 PM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com, how could he not be “happy” when he has everything that the Interactive has determined makes people happy… thank you for your kind comments over the past week, I hope you enjoyed the story
Martin
5/20/22, 9:09 PM
Amazing!
5/20/22, 9:08 PM
Keep going. Your daily release is quite satisfying. Looking forward to the next one you pump out.
5/20/22, 7:26 PM
I am really impressed with how fast you are getting these chapters out. At the start of this one, I thought that Gab would take control of James. Now it seems both are bound to be rubber toys. Will one be in charge or will they both maintain their personality?

felix
5/20/22, 9:01 PM
@Marik29 Thanks! Once I get in a mode of writing, everything kinda lays out in my head at the start. So it's really just a matter of transcribing my ideas while also keeping my hand off my dick, lol. And we'll just have to see about that second part... ;)
5/20/22, 8:50 PM
One of my favourite stories on this site. Love the way you stretch out the transformation and describe the “in between” parts. I’m also loving the back and forth between mindlessness and awareness. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
5/20/22, 8:30 PM
Hot! Wish it was drawn out a bit longer... And/or more detailed sex scenes and sexual transformations.
May 19, 2022
Anonymous
5/20/22, 11:19 AM
Why are these protags so easy to drag into signing a contract without having a lawyer review it first? I mean, I get it, deal with the devil and all, but I've always been of the mindset that the best way to beat a devil of detail is to bring a decent lawyer to the game. Oh, now I'm getting ideas for how you can have Peter get buyer's remorse and ask a lawyer for help with finding a loophole or exit clause. Of course, they say that law's one DEVIL of a profession, so why not turn it into spiritual litigation?

5/20/22, 8:10 PM
Hahaha well if they read the contract like a normal person, the story wouldn’t be interesting eh 😜 thanks for the comment! Hope you enjoyed the story <3

Anonymous
5/20/22, 8:16 PM
@Grant Spiral Rest assured, this only means you get to make things interesting for him after the fact! Imagine having Peter ask the company's in-house counsel to help with the contract, only for him to get a lecture on "I represent the company, not you, and if I help you with this I could be disbarred." Then he has to find HIS OWN LAWYER, maybe one of the guys who fucks him on a recurring basis in his new life, and wouldn't ya know it, he just happens to practice employment and labor law and represent employees! Maybe work a bit of "alternative payment methods" in there, and you could set up quite the dramatic confrontation between Peter and Hendrick as they fight over which laws should control his life!
5/20/22, 8:12 PM
Gotta say, this is a thoroughly underappreciated story. I consider this an absolute classic already.
5/20/22, 7:52 PM
This gets better and better. Hoping you have more than one more chapter in you.
5/20/22, 7:11 PM
Awesome. I love it. Can't wait for more!
5/20/22, 5:10 PM
Oh, what a wonderful story. You have some of the best characterizations I’ve ever read. And the kiss was more intimate than a thousand sex scenes. Isn’t that funny?…yes, this is an absolutely amazing tale. I hope you continue it, but the most important thing is that you write what YOU want to write! :)
5/20/22, 4:10 PM
I love a story with a good jock slut soooo against my better judgement, I'm rooting for rusty to continue on. Just let it happen Carter. 🙈
5/20/22, 3:29 PM
Well this is a promising development. :) Thanks again, Rubberfelix!
5/20/22, 3:21 PM
Such a hot chapter! The control is quick and so far, irrevocable , which makes it hotter. I'm loving how he is assigning them roles and fostering their desire for hypnosis. Can't wait to see Sett betray the twins, and eventually, for Jay to find out of the betrayal and futilely try to get away.
5/20/22, 3:04 PM
I'm enjoying this story a lot. Are you interested in posting it on Metabods? Let me know brk@metabods.com
5/20/22, 11:27 AM
I echo all the comments about what a horrible person Rusty is. :p I don’t like stories where jerks like him—who are also internalized homophobes, if we’re fair—have lots of power. I get that that does it for some people, but not me, especially because (as others have also said) Carter is such a nice, interesting guy. And he’s not the classic “I don’t want to bottom because that’s gay” trope—he doesn’t want to bottom because he doesn’t enjoy it, which is totally fair and understandable. A good-natured character not consenting and then being forced to by a jerk is not a fun time for me, but to each their own! Is there a character sheet option to A. Punch Rusty in the face and then B. Pull some of the dick out of his personality? :p

En Vogue
5/20/22, 2:49 PM
@Feed Your Head Eh, I mean, if Carter immediately flips the tables on Rusty, the story pretty much just... ends? At Chapter 2? Carter *is* fun and a great character, but "bad guy gets power and wreaks havoc for the duration of the plot until the good guy is able to overpower him" is just a way more interesting story than "good guy immediately grabs power from bad guy, ends any conflict and drama by chapter 2". So I vote that Carter confront Rusty, but then that things keep getting complicated in unexpected ways as Carter struggles to regain an upper hand!
Hob
5/20/22, 2:44 PM
It's always funny when I fall in love with a story that the author thinks is a mess. Hopefully we get more!
R P
5/20/22, 2:33 PM
This is sweet and so lovely! I hope you do decide to write more about Jeremy and Ryder.
5/20/22, 2:15 PM
@EdIam would love some stealing boyfriends in your stories please... 🙏
5/20/22, 2:13 PM
A NOTE FROM THE APPROVERS TEAM: The text was pasted twice, so I removed the duplicate.
5/20/22, 2:11 PM
This sounds like it’s going to be great fun! I like how from the get-go it’s uncertain whether or not his wish actually came true, or if Ryder, like the MC, wanted to tell MC he loved him. I’m excited to see more.
5/20/22, 2:00 PM
This premise has a lot of potential, and I mean even outside this website, if you address the implications of this wish and how it can reflect on their relationship from now on. I think you should invest in it, I really liked this concept.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 1:43 PM
Confront Rusty (use those wit and manipulation stars while he’s still got ‘em)
5/20/22, 10:56 AM
Love this conclusion! I'd been wondering how Rocco would temporarily break free of his conditioning, and the lightning strike is a great idea. I'm just a little sad that he doesn't move in with Bryce at the end!

5/20/22, 11:33 AM
@Hypnothrill I considered that as an ending, but that kind of dead ended the story for me… I think it’s a better ending that Rocco is about to convert the new neighbor the same way that Bryce converted him, but by bit until he also is part of the Interactive… and don’t worry Rocco and Bryce still have plenty of glossy shiny sex…

5/20/22, 1:27 PM
@Jeep I did really like the story coming full circle with Rocco as the smiling, too-perfect neighbor. Now all I want for Christmas is a sequel showing what happens when the Elysian Interactive App is launched nationwide.

5/20/22, 1:40 PM
@Hypnothrill you may get your wish… I left some Easter eggs to explore, and another reason for the ending to this part is that it leaves open the possibility of more product testing on the new neighbor and others, and it also opens up the possibility of telling a story of what happens as the world comes online with the new app… if you have any thoughts or ideas I’d like to hear them because you are one of the best authors on here!
5/20/22, 1:07 PM
can you continue, please
5/20/22, 11:30 AM
Really enjoy that story!! Personnally I'd love to see Jay resisting a fair bit when Ian tries to subdue him.
5/19/22, 11:35 PM
I guess confront rusty or run seem like the best. This is a cool looking series, I hope you continue the wholesome super villain one!

5/20/22, 1:44 AM
@Botbot Thanks! I have some note scribbled down for that one.

5/20/22, 11:20 AM
@bluesuedewho cool! I'm excited to read more :)
5/20/22, 11:14 AM
The scene where AppleJack and Pokey meet is one of my favorite moments in the book. The "I hate this kid" line cracks me up. This brings up an interesting bit with their names. At first, I considered using names of centaurs from myth (there are easily two or three dozen cited in the ancient texts), but then I thought it would be more fun to use modern-day, goofy horse names for them. Then it became a matter of justifying their names in backstory. (It was my intent to use Pokey's last name "Dakota" when the centaurs achieved their "Bestial" Forms -- see chapter 5 -- in an effort to be more "formal") But Pokey is not to be stopped. Anyway, for "AppleJack" I longed considered "Oatmeal" and (as readers of CENTAUROMACHY can attest:) "Graham Cracker"