Recent Comments

3/6/24, 9:05 AM
is there will be a new chapter??? the story is so good
Anonymous
3/6/24, 6:55 AM
Was there any follow up to this? Would really love to see where the story was heading!
Anonymous
6/28/20, 4:25 AM
Is it still okay to call guys without a prominent booty "assless chaps"?

Anonymous
3/6/24, 6:32 AM
@Anonymous **:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:**
Anonymous
3/6/24, 5:52 AM
mmm… parasitic goo!!!
Anonymous
3/6/24, 5:50 AM
hot concept and writing!!!
3/6/24, 5:27 AM
My first ever story! Thanks to a very special dad out there that encouraged me to post this. I hope everyone enjoys it as much as I did making this :)
3/6/24, 4:08 AM
Are we getting a Coach Brown/JoJo spinoff? Haha
Controlme
3/6/24, 12:21 AM
First thing I'd like to say is terrific beginning. You started off strong introducing Grayson and establishing his motives. Then you brought us to his problem: he's hot, but not hot enough to get women at the big college campus. Next, we are told of the solution: ARI (along with some hot pics of guys). Then, we reach the critical decision point of the story: Grayson picks out his new super hot body and agrees to the terms and conditions without so much as a glance (like we all do). He comes out of his trance uber hot (again, nice pic), and then the story completely unravels as you finish it in a few paragraphs that could basically be summed up in the statement, "and then gay sex happened." You did a great job bringing us to what should have been an amazingly hot sex scene, but it was just a quick glossover. You need to amend the story, ending it right after they all get their messages from ARI telling them to go to a party. Then, write chapter 2, a detailed account of what happens at the party. Grayson's revelation that he is compelled to do what these businessmen tell him to do. Grayson sucking his first cock. Grayson losing his anal virginity. Grayson, Julian, and Kendall putting on a gay sex show for the businessmen while the businessmen recover from round one. Grayson discovering new things about his body--his lack of a gag reflex and ability to deep throat, his auto lubricating hole that can instantly adjust to any size cock, his super sensitive prostate that causes him to experience constant anal orgasms, his newly sensitized nipples that put him into a sexual frenzy when they are played with. There is so much to work with here as Grayson slowly uncovers what was all in that user agreement (like that he is now the property of an AI that is renting him out to raise revenue).

Anonymous Contributor
3/6/24, 3:18 AM
@Controlme Food for thought! Thanks
3/6/24, 2:29 AM
I really liked this. It carried a very personable, informal style that suited the purpose of the story well, and the himbo/jockificaiton of James was done well. I especially liked the idea that you tread the line between magic and reality, kind of keeping it up to the reader of whether or not there was something supernatural going on or it was simply James blending and fitting into his environment. Very well done!
3/6/24, 2:26 AM
Humm 🤤❤️
blankbot
3/6/24, 1:57 AM
Great writing.
K
3/6/24, 12:48 AM
Great!
3/5/24, 11:28 PM
It took me like a week to get through this because I kept cumming every few pages lol thanks for another awesome story!!
3/5/24, 3:44 AM
nice start. looking forward to more toys getting created

Willie Cici
3/5/24, 2:05 PM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) That's why I love reader's comments. I never thought of this story as more than a "one chapter". Your comment made me think about possible extra chapters. Thanks.

3/5/24, 10:46 PM
@Willie Cici Maybe a GI Joe Toy next or He-Man? ;)
3/5/24, 8:09 PM
Good interesting start! Looking forward to more of it.
3/5/24, 7:54 PM
Interesting concept. It'd be interesting to know how the Kens (like Greg) were sourced, how they came about to become Kens waiting to be bought.
Jun 17, 2023
3/5/24, 6:58 PM
Love this story! It got me in all the feels! Can't wait to read more!
3/5/24, 5:52 PM
Love it. Would love to read it from the perspective of someone who doesn’t quite understand what’s happening to them. Like a frat house party even.
2/20/24, 5:49 PM
Very hot and it's super-well written!!!😍

2/20/24, 6:41 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Wow... thank you. anything in particular you liked in it?

3/5/24, 4:44 PM
@[midwest_hypnosis](/user/show/925698) Sorry, I had missed the mail that told me you answered. :sweat_smile: I really liked the "accident" part. But overall, I just though you have a very nice writing style, it's descriptive but very pleasant to read. good build-up for the mental influence and how the character's feel their opinion changes.
Mar 5, 2024
3/5/24, 4:17 PM
Great start! Love the concept, can’t wait to read more!
Jonanator
3/5/24, 3:07 PM
Can't wait for more
3/5/24, 2:22 PM
Hot Hot hot ! I want to see more of Monty grabbing that huge ass.
3/5/24, 1:53 PM
i like Sammy. I love your character development. He was so thoughtful and kind at the airport counter. and, then, when dealing iwth his issues, his complexity reveals. LOVE your writing.
3/5/24, 1:40 PM
I hope in the end Rodney become a total cumslut himbo as a payback to what he had done. And maybe Lance and Phil can be his owner. Heck, lets even add TJ.
3/5/24, 1:16 PM
I’m glad I read this. Fantastic idea.
Anonymous
3/5/24, 3:49 AM
brilliant chapter… love all the different interactions developing…

3/5/24, 12:25 PM
@Anonymous Yeah, it's pretty much time for it to start to come together, isn't it? I just realized I don't have a lot of story left, so I'd better start wrapping it up.
Jonanator
3/5/24, 9:43 AM
I don't think Lance or Rodeny will ever be friends again
2/7/24, 9:21 PM
This story is one of the hottest stories I have ever read, I love how you describe the scenes, how powerless and humiliated the are although they more athletic than them. I can't wait to see these two cops get used to their new life, especially Blondie.

Anonymous
3/2/24, 12:42 AM
@[Angel 😇](/user/show/10027188) Kens new name is Bitched Blondie, a new Ken Doll sans Barbie. Born to take young black gang cock.

3/5/24, 7:41 AM
@Anonymous Actually not a bad idea for a future spinoff story "I'm Just Ken." Checking everyday for Chapter 6. Addicted to this story, need a live action version.
3/5/24, 6:34 AM
A quick, minor correction: the word is “scoop(ed),” not “spoof(ed).” Had it happen to a friend of mine in grad school.