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Oct 10, 2022
10/11/22, 1:56 AM
Masterpiece ! Build , characterization, execution and originality. Hot as hell and written like a pro. Instant classic. Hats off.
10/11/22, 1:54 AM
I come back to this again and again. you've painted such an impressive world... you must continue this.
10/11/22, 1:07 AM
Every day I look to see if there is a continuation :):star_struck:
10/11/22, 12:39 AM
Loved the whole series. Definitely all possible.
boy Jason
10/11/22, 12:26 AM
I want to be a policeboy under Daddy Davis.
Oct 10, 2022
10/10/22, 11:22 PM
So hot. Love seeing a straight smart guy turn into a gay slut with little going on in their heads expect sex and fellowers.
10/10/22, 4:34 PM
Just because Luke did not cast the spell with Scott present doesn't mean he didn't cast it back at the ROTC barracks, without Scott being aware. That would tie up loose ends for Luke and also keep Scott from seeking (and, possibly, finding) help before he found himself inescapably in Luke's thrall. A couple more chapters showing us that someone who screws up is not the only one to suffer consequences would be a very military style lesson for Luke to teach Alex and Scott. Also, it would be even hotter if Scott was straight to begin with, not just transforming into a complete slave, but transforming from straight to gay at the same time. Perhaps, halfway through the change or so, he becomes aware of what is happening to him, but is too far along to do anything about his transformation. Just some thoughts about how this very hot story could be longer and hotter.

10/10/22, 11:02 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) And that was the threat Luke made when he held up a piece of Scott's clothing. But As Luke said he wants those who want to be broken and molded so it wouldn't really fit for him to do it. But yes that would be a way to add more.
10/10/22, 4:07 PM
Wow, what a fun, arousing twist! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› I sure hope you'll share more with us from your kinky imagination! ๐Ÿ˜

10/10/22, 10:59 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you, glad you enjoyed it and you will see more. It will take time but I'll have more
Oct 10, 2022
CMC
10/10/22, 10:00 PM
I love this so much! Great use of 'influencer' culture. And I love how their followers try to look and act just like them in the end.
10/10/22, 8:43 PM
SO fantastic so far, and I really appreciated this chapter! Now I'm looking forward to reading the rest. ๐Ÿ˜
Oct 10, 2022
10/10/22, 8:28 PM
Fantastic story! It's grounded just enough in real-life addictive behavior to make the story feel terrifyingly plausible. I wasn't sure about the body change elements at first, because they broke that feeling of realism, but I thought the physical changes to "Jake and Jack" ultimately had a great payoff.
10/10/22, 8:10 PM
Great story!
Oct 10, 2022
10/10/22, 4:58 PM
Damn. This is so well written. I never thought i'd see a psychological horror shift so naturally into erotica, but you pulled it off. God_damn_.
10/10/22, 3:38 AM
Great work!! Love how the characters progressed! You write excellent tf content ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿ’•.

10/10/22, 4:54 PM
@[drewfy](/user/show/10021368) Thanks Bud! Getting folks excited about TF makes it all worthwhile!
Andrew
9/28/22, 6:05 PM
I loved the chapter by the way you did not answer the question about what if you would like to be controlled?

9/28/22, 11:30 PM
@Andrew I would much rather be the controller then the controlled. I'm mostly dom, but can switch to sub for the right person.

Andrew
10/3/22, 4:54 AM
@Cargo Cub I understand great and what would you make someone you are controlling do?

10/10/22, 4:04 PM
@Andrew That's what I'm exploring in this story. What would I do if I had the app and could control people?
10/10/22, 3:06 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
caged1
10/9/22, 8:31 PM
A remarkable piece of writing. Excellent character development. A thick air of anticipation and anxiety coupled with tension and desperation at the right times. It will be interesting to hear what his friend Entowa and his nemesis Ni'Cha have to say and what they will do when they find that the Prince is now Gayllar. And what will his brother Naatu think of him? I look forward to much more and seeing where the author takes us on this incredible journey he is guiding us on. Excellent writing.

10/10/22, 2:00 AM
@[F150SATX](/user/show/923367) Thank you so much! Without spoiling, we'll be going on a rollercoaster to the bleakest of moments to the hightest of euphoria but I think I'm a better writer now than when I did the original series so keep reading!

10/10/22, 12:38 PM
@[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535) In that case I might wait until all the chapters come out. I worry for my poor heart.
10/10/22, 12:07 PM
Fucking Booker. What was the gd point of that??

10/10/22, 12:36 PM
@[Gay Chaste](/user/show/931453) If I had to guess, it would either be his hatred towards the tribe - taking down their future king. Another option is that he wanted to give another target to the booty flowers though if I remember the lore correctly it will only upset them. A third option is that Booker is just an evil maniac who deserves to die.
Gingcub
10/10/22, 12:23 PM
So Fucking hot! I loved both the stories this comes afterโ€”canโ€™t wait for more!
Oct 10, 2022
Anonymous
10/10/22, 9:25 AM
Spectacular work!!!!!
easdf
10/9/22, 3:44 PM
I know this story takes place before another, but at this point someone should really just shoot Booker dead. He is too evil and too dangerous.

10/10/22, 1:54 AM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) Actually, this takes place after the events of **Two Tops Make a Bottom** so that's still a possibility XD

easdf
10/10/22, 7:43 AM
@[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535) Oh, in that case, **OFF WITH HIS HEAD!**
10/10/22, 6:52 AM
You show great talent. The challenge for you is to now create an ongoing series. My preference is a Master a weak straight teen bullied by a group of jocks who he turns into effeminate smooth bottoms. But this is my idea and what ever you choose to write I will support you
10/10/22, 6:34 AM
This chapter is a testament to your writing. I actually had to stop reading at one point because it was so frustrated. Great work as always! This is truly the game of thrones of smut lol
10/10/22, 6:01 AM
I really enjoyed this one! I like how all the men have been reduced to being the creatureโ€™s sustenance and how they slowly accepted their fates. I gave it a 5/5 and hopefully you do well in the competiton!
Oct 10, 2022
10/10/22, 5:51 AM
Iโ€™m so happy about Peter. ;) I would have been disappointed otherwise. Hot story.
Anonymous
10/10/22, 1:00 AM
One of my favorites that you've done

10/10/22, 4:22 AM
then you'll be real excited when i fix, the ending didn't realize i forgot part of it.
10/9/22, 7:55 AM
As always I do hope there will be a good ending. Especially since Kamay doesn't have the option to even speak and tell the rest of Booker's intervention. Now I'm sad. WHY DOES A SMUT STORY MAKES ME SAD?!

10/9/22, 12:29 PM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) Your comment definitely encompasses all my thoughts. I wanna be horny and happy not horny and sad :( #justiceforkamay

easdf
10/9/22, 3:43 PM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) EXACTLY. The hashtag is amazing BTW.

10/10/22, 2:01 AM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) #JusticeForKamay

10/10/22, 3:56 AM
@[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535) #JUSTICEFORKAMAY!!!!!!!!
Evan
10/10/22, 3:20 AM
Fucking Booker. This is an amazing first chapter. I feel so, so bad for the Prince and I hope he is eventually able to convey the situation and be believed. More importantly, before Booker can do too much damage to the tribe or harm the king. How many will recognise him, I wonder and how he will manage to avoid punishment for the theft of so long ago. As conflicted as the bad feelings for our central character and sense of injustice are compared with the hotness of the events and lore of the tribe and jungle. I just LOVE your work. Can't wait for more.