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1/16/23, 8:46 AM
I would love to live in a world controlled by Master Jake, being in Rubber 24/7 and growing up rubbered
Dylan
1/16/23, 7:17 AM
Nice twist, but is he Daddy or Nocturne?
1/16/23, 6:16 AM
Part 2 ?
1/15/23, 11:32 PM
Thanks everyone! Trust me it just keeps heating up from here... ;)
1/15/23, 10:56 PM
Please give us some more <3
1/15/23, 7:11 PM
Nice, this would be good story for my bf Nick to read, wonder if that why Martin suggested it😏

Martin
1/15/23, 8:21 PM
@[AdamTheBasketballTwink](/user/show/10032774) Who knows? :innocent:
1/15/23, 8:05 PM
So hot that Nate’s fathers are to become drones like James’s fathers. Does James even remember what happened to his fathers and his brother? Can’t wait for act 3.
Sebastián Apollo
1/10/23, 3:43 AM
Lucky Beck! Lucky Talley! Lucky Arik! _Lucky readers too..._ I think a lot of your worldbuilding has really shone through in this particular chapter - the overwhelming power of a Firecracker's Rut, a Siren's linking, naiads, and kinky sexual risks. I can only imagine what you've cooked up for the boys on the rooftop of the lounge and on Nate's lower back... Looking forward to more sex, fun, and frat shenanigans, which I know you'll deliver in spades! 😉

1/15/23, 8:04 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) This chapter has been one of my favourites to write just for all the worldbuilding I got to do! I felt like Arik's character shone through more, too, and I got to write Talley as that mischievous, borderline-demonic little fucker he is for the first time in a while. Looking forward to getting out more!
1/15/23, 7:42 PM
Will thos one be finished someday?
Anonymous
1/15/23, 6:51 PM
love it!
Dylan
1/15/23, 5:40 PM
And now a cool cliffhanger again… 😎👍
1/15/23, 5:20 PM
Well I can't wait to read the next chapter! Hope you can post the next one up soon.
Ben
1/15/23, 5:18 PM
Fuck this was 🔥 loved it!!
1/15/23, 5:14 PM
Great story idea! 2 arch enemies fucking is very hot. Awesome story...
Dylan
1/15/23, 5:08 PM
Hot 2. part!
1/15/23, 4:54 PM
"I turned so I could kiss him, and the said" *he* said., and just underneath, you've wrote "most" instead of "must. :sweat_smile: Really cool series, probably could be cross-posted on gay cupid. Tho, I must say the definition Brian gave of "consent" a few chapters ago is sketchy. :satisfied:
Dylan
1/15/23, 4:47 PM
Hot story i just found today, love it. I know i will read all parts pretty quick!
1/15/23, 4:42 PM
I must be half asleep because I didn't see where this was going until the very last few paragraphs. And the theme is in the title! To my defense I'll say that I saw your avatar, read "Prologue" and hit the link right away :wink: Anyways, I love the direction and the parallelisms with the original, as well as the adaption to a modern times Hypno story. Altogether very clever. So good job! I'll love to read what comes next. :grin:
1/15/23, 4:29 PM
THis is already just FANTASTIC! I am so excited about the next chapter!
1/15/23, 4:28 PM
Nice story, dude! Made me wet & hard. My frat was never this much fun. On to your next chapter.
1/15/23, 4:21 PM
Kind of weird that the amni POV started in 3rd person but finished in 1st, but super-cool! Man, I bet Mani forgot a command to masturbate :smirk: Mani expected brian to be into Musk. :satisfied: Love to see their dynamic. Pretty unnusual but really enjoyable.
1/15/23, 4:11 PM
I skipped this story for some reason, didn't realize you were the same person who wrote "unexpected gift". Man, this is such a good start!!!:heart_eyes:
1/15/23, 5:04 AM
Oh my, a rare slowburn story in this site - and a pheromone one about a shy twink and a dom big guy. automatic favorite/bookmark for me

1/15/23, 3:58 PM
@[Curious53](/user/show/983604) Thanks buddy! Much appreciated!
Gingcub
1/13/23, 2:46 AM
Thank you! So worth the wait :D and I gotta say….booker is one lucky piss slave

1/15/23, 12:10 AM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) A fitting end for the villain?

Gingcub
1/15/23, 1:30 PM
Yes! And also what I want for me 🤣 so a happy ending for anyone @[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535)
1/15/23, 1:23 PM
YUMMY!!!! :yum:
1/15/23, 12:43 PM
As soon as you wrote that Colton wasn't able to move much or unbuckle himself my first thought was automatically "challenge accepted!". Not to run away, just to see if it's possible. Good thing I'm not in his place otherwise I would have a very sensitive behind. (My second thought was, by the way, "but what if he gets itchy?". Obviously, I concentrate on the important parts of the story)

1/15/23, 1:03 PM
@Reader He can move in the car seat! It's not a full immobilization, especially without the wrist straps. But it's impossible to reach down to the belt release. And the shape of it doesn't give anywhere to move to, so while you could shift around some, you're going to be funneled into the seat. So it's like comfy cozy bondage. As for getting an itch, that's fine. It's not real bondage until you want out. :smiling_imp:
1/15/23, 12:23 PM
Thinking often about that story. are there any plans for a sequel? :worried:
1/14/23, 11:17 PM
So much enjoyment here. Every time I think I know where this is going you throw me a curve. So much fun. I look forward to every new chapter. Fascinating.

1/15/23, 10:26 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you so much. Beaner. Your positive feedback is very motivating.
1/15/23, 10:13 AM
Interesting story, still unclear where it will all leads, but fun to read ;)
Adam The Basketball Twink
1/14/23, 10:41 PM
Wow, I was turned on and turned off, then turned on again. Writing is amazing, but some wow I knew by the title Martin would be used. This part that turned me off being that my first gay sex experience I also was used. Besides that and the ending wow!

Martin
1/15/23, 9:58 AM
@Adam The Basketball Twink I'm really glad you liked it - I totally understand why the middle part turned you off, I wanted to stress the point of how cruel this society is and what that entails. That can arouse people, but it also can turn them off like it did you. But I'm really happy that you kept reading and that the story turned around for you. And I'm especially happy that the end connected with you. That means a lot. I'd be happy if you'd check out other stories of mine ... :)