Recent Comments

3/30/24, 2:10 PM
Fantastic - I have cum to this chapter ("Daddy!") more times than I can count. There should be one more chapter where Warren surrenders his virgin ass.. Amazing!
3/30/24, 5:29 AM
Keep up this amazing story premis. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes
3/30/24, 5:18 AM
Right to the point. Loved it!
3/30/24, 2:41 AM
Take a little longer. Your writing is good. People will appreciate longer chapters! Hot story!

3/30/24, 4:10 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you, I will take time to write longer chapters for you guys, and I will try to sync the other websites I post this on (except patreon who'll read it the minute I'm done writing) so online publishes might get delayed from time to time. I will try to make it fair for everybody tho and in the end all The Fates canon chapters will be out and public. Thanks again for the support <3
3/29/24, 4:54 PM
I tend to be a bit romantic so I like a happy or sweet ending. But that also depends on your definition of dark. Either way this story is my new favorite. Hope we have some chapters to go before the conclusion.

3/29/24, 10:41 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) 2 more chapters until the branching finale (so 4 more chapters to read: 6, 7, and 8a/8b). The real question is: Do I post 8a and 8b on the same day? Or space them out?

3/30/24, 3:33 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I think I’ve written and deleted my reply about four times already. I can’t come up with an answer. Maybe if you planned two endings all along then both at once? Otherwise go with your original ending first? Gaaaa!
3/29/24, 7:17 AM
well written storyline. the description of darkness fighting what was to come. trying his best to break free. in the end the corrupting darkness won out.

3/29/24, 10:09 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thank you for reading my story, I published the second chapter, now from Galakor's point of view, I hope you like it too.
3/29/24, 9:09 PM
This is funny and hot and so well written! Thank you for sharing this here <3
3/29/24, 8:49 PM
Nice to see a story with a happy ending
Feb 15, 2024
3/29/24, 8:01 PM
I enjoy what you did with this, I'd love to read more of it if you ever feel inspired to continue it!
3/29/24, 7:08 PM
pleaseeeee can you continue this series plsss it’s literally my favorite
3/29/24, 5:57 PM
Loved the work so far. Pity you dropped it
3/29/24, 5:38 PM
I LOVE your writing style. THANK YOU
Anonymous
3/29/24, 5:38 PM
Addmore parts of this story sir
3/28/24, 1:43 AM
I think it would of been hot if Cam was reluctant or did not want his bf to be taken over. Still excited to see where it goes

3/29/24, 4:09 PM
@[Hypnoguy12](/user/show/907890) Thank you for the read! It would be interesting to show that Cam was still uneasy with Al being controlled but they’ve already come to terms with having Andrew. In hindsight, some more resistance would’ve been good. Might rewrite some sections some day
3/29/24, 3:54 PM
This is great will it continue i really want to see what happens to them
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:20 PM
Man, that training dildo really fucked Brad in more ways than one, huh This is such a great series and I eagerly await each chapter. You have the perfect blend of hot scenes and great plot! Really want to see where this ends. Do you know or will the characters surprise even you, Naedre?

3/28/24, 12:03 AM
@Anonymous The endings are written and being edited. There is a sweet ending and a dark ending I planned from the beginning. The characters did surprise me a bit, especially in the dark ending. It’s still dark, but I expected someone to end up being evil when they were just human. Only human, yet all the dark stuff happened anyway. I don’t know if that makes it more or less dark.

3/29/24, 3:25 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I'm personally more excited for the bad ending lol. Thanks for another great chapter!
3/29/24, 2:47 PM
Great story u can go anywhere with it, turn them in sex objects
3/29/24, 5:39 AM
Thank you! Very glad you didn’t tease out the Senator too much 😮‍💨

3/29/24, 12:00 PM
@[Big Fan](/user/show/10000420) I know, right? As I've mentioned before, if this were a novel... Seriously, I intended to tease it out a little, of course, but then I realized I was done with plot points -- I've pretty much played out all the events I planned to happen at the Ranch and I had nothing left for the remaining characters to do while I strung it out. So here we are, at the climax...
Anonymous
3/29/24, 10:52 AM
I guess the author has given up and abandoned this story. It's a shame, really.
3/29/24, 8:37 AM
One question: Why do you add the tag #German? I understand that this story takes place in Germany, but the tag is meant to indicate that the story is *written* in German. I assume that some people don't even click it just because they can't read German...

3/29/24, 8:43 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) You're right. My fault. As we startet to write, i Set all Tags and hadn't in mind,that er publish here the translation Thanks for the hint, Arcturus

3/29/24, 10:09 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Sorry fpr the mistake. We will improve this asap.
3/29/24, 8:32 AM
Eine sehr geile Geschichte - der Gedanke, selber von diesem großen geilen Kerl zu seiner Hypnosau gemacht zu werden, lässt mich direkt abspritzen!
ClamJeff46
3/28/24, 5:07 AM
idk if i'm comfortable with there being mention of a minor being sexually assaulted in a porn story. Especially when the main character who is barely of legal age is essentially explaining how's he's been groomed. Super uncomfortable.

3/28/24, 8:56 PM
@ClamJeff46 Hey, speaking as an approver here who noticed this comment--thanks for raising a concern over something that made you uncomfortable. Our approvers work very hard to make sure that every story we approve adheres to the [rules](https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/rules-for-stories-posted-on-gayspiralstories/1214), but we always want to hear if there's something that we may have missed. I've taken the moment to review this story and made the decision that it fits the rules we've established. If you have concerns in the future, please feel free to reach out to me by DM.

ClamJeff46
3/29/24, 6:03 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) ????????????? the second rule is literally "No sex or manipulation/hypnosis of children or pre-pubescent teens." and the 18 year old in this story literally says > “How long had he been fucking you? When did he start?” > > “We were in middle school, summer before our last year there. He fucked me all that summer, all the last year of middle school, then that summer, and all through high school.” how is that not a depiction of a minor being manipulated into sex???? Not only that but the adult character then asks this barely legal kid to then describe the sex he had while he was in middle school. Nothing in the story indicates this isn't supposed to be seen as sexual and there is no #teen tag on this story. This is honestly inexcusable.

3/29/24, 7:26 AM
@ClamJeff46 I want to clarify that the character in question is explaining how he’s previously had frequent, consensual sex with his high school fuckbuddy, who is the same age as him. This is not remotely “a minor being manipulated into sex”. You also keep describing the character as a “barely legal kid”. Yes, he is eighteen. He is an adult. I understand this story isn’t for you. But this conversation doesn’t feel like it can be productive if we keep having it in the comments section. Neemie or I would be happy to chat about this more in DMs, and maybe there is a tag that could be used to help you avoid stories like this in the future (‘teen’ is not the appropriate tag in this case, but maybe ‘older dom younger sub’ could be?). I just don’t feel that an author’s comments section is the right place for this conversation.
11/16/20, 8:41 PM
> They were all dressed in comfortable travel-wear, but the brunette was wearing a fleece onesie that had animal ears on the hood – he looked like that kid from the “Wild Things” book except grown up and muscular. He looked maybe like a wrestler. That was *way* too specific. Is there an image that inspired this, and if so, can I please have it? > “Stop!” Snake yelled. “Arrêtez!” If my French is right, and it usually isn't, you used the formal 'you' conjugation here, while Rugby Boy addresses Snake with the informal. I suspect it's just that you used Google Translate for this, but did you make Snake bad at his conjugations on purpose? (Or does someone who speaks better French want to fill me in?) > I confess a certain weakness for French-Canadian men, that dark-haired, creamy skin thing just kills me. I find them sexy as all get-out. I went to college in Quebec. This is basically why.

3/29/24, 3:17 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Rereading this story and came across your post. The image of the onsie reminds me of [Rick and Griff](https://www.twokingsunlimited.com/product/preorder-only-two-kings-unlimited-thk-brand-dark-grey-hooded-onesie/).

3/29/24, 5:22 AM
Thanks for the share @[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223). Hot AF.
3/29/24, 4:30 AM
❤️❤️🖤🖤❤️❤️
PupBama
3/29/24, 4:24 AM
Keep going! While a familiar trope, these series are always great!!
3/29/24, 3:10 AM
Hey Man. I read the story with interest. Got me hard. That's always a good thing. Maybe you'd like these stories I wrote about kind of similar transformations. - "Missionary Boy" (https://www.gaycollarstories.com/story/show/10001267 & sequal https://www.gaycollarstories.com/story/show/10001295) plus "Mandrasat II: priest slave" (https://www.gaycollarstories.com/series/show/10002678). If you read them, I hope you feel a response at times in the nether region - like I did reading yours.
3/29/24, 1:36 AM
I can only say Wow!
3/29/24, 1:14 AM
I really enjoy tickling stories, and I think Kyle was my favorite character. I don't know why, but I have a thing for tall, dark, and pale guys. My only critique is that Captain Laughing Gas could've spoken in a little more formal tone. For example, instead of saying, "You are way too uptight," you could've have him say, "You are much too uptight." But otherwise, it was very well written, and very erotic. I really enjoy your stories. Keep up the good work! :grin:
Anonymous
3/28/24, 10:12 PM
Any chances of this story getting another update? It’s so hot!!
3/28/24, 2:51 PM
Your style and heart in this was exceptional. Thank you for writing this. Shouldn’t this also be in Cupid?

Thank you for the kind words. I did not consider a different genre at the time, but it also a love story.
3/28/24, 8:57 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278)