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10/9/20, 2:36 PM
This was delightful! Loved the mystery aspect, the humor, and even the famous Sympathy for the Devil. ;) Plus guys slowly transforming into non-humans is a secret weakness of mine, so the ending reveal that both Eli and Jake are not just getting buffer, but also more demonic, was a fantastic twist. And finally, I have to ask: were the names deliberate? Eli and Jacob, both Biblical figures, and would-be savior Gloria as "Gloria Hosanna." So clever!
10/9/20, 2:09 PM
hot!
10/9/20, 1:55 PM
Would have preferred to see Andy get a taste of his own medicine at the end; I felt like the story was a little too insistent that Andy had done nothing wrong, and that rubbed me the wrong way. But up until that ending section, this story was extremely hot, and I loved watching Peter's gradual transformation and rationalizations.
10/9/20, 1:54 PM
it was great.thank you
10/9/20, 1:50 PM
Very hot and sexy story!
10/9/20, 1:24 PM
Love this turn of events! Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/9/20, 1:07 PM
hi, i had a great time reading your story once again. I had already enjoyed reading The Collector, which to me is one of the best series about superheroes. Your work is fantastic and I was wondering when there would be a sequel. but being able to read the prequel is great. And to be honest, I would dream of a series where it would end really badly for the superheroes and where the supervillain would be the big and final winner.
10/9/20, 12:59 PM
when an update?
Anonymous
10/9/20, 12:48 PM
Great story liked the detail
10/9/20, 12:41 PM
Awesome story! Wonderful blend of humor and sex.