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11/19/20, 1:18 PM
Great work, Derek! Very creative.
Anonymous
11/19/20, 12:08 PM
Whoa, this was a surprised indeed. I have a few ideas that might be approached. Like Thanos used his snaps to make Clint realize his true love for Pietro, using Pietro to seduce Clint to have him willingly join the Thanos' avengers, or maybe have Pietro escort Clint on what he could have done and made him proud in SHIELD. After his suppoused conversion, Thanos plans to use Clint as a Medium to spy in SHIELD while using their cocktail of mind controlling semen on all men in SHIELD. Even having Tony uses his resources to make all male superheroes submit to Thanos. Whoops, a bit too much there. But hope this helps.
Anonymous
11/19/20, 12:05 PM
Bob was done before Robert? It seems like you could alter the timing with a (nick)name change. A nit: the plural if Aaron is Aarons, not Aaron's. Ditto the other names. "New Years" should be "New Year's" as it owns the implied period of time.
11/19/20, 11:34 AM
That made me very, very happy. Thank you for the laugh and for the clever satire. Brilliant. Well done. Sadly, my name begins with "T" -- unless we go by oennames!!!
11/19/20, 9:50 AM
What a clever, hot story! Great going. :)
Anonymous
11/19/20, 9:44 AM
Awesome
11/19/20, 8:24 AM
Brilliant twist on a familiar motif! I'm guessing that February 20 is the day when all the Dereks get affected, huh?
11/19/20, 8:15 AM
Another great one, man! I always get excited when you have a new story out. A unique idea, and I like how you explore some of the societal ramifications.
11/19/20, 7:46 AM
I love it. there's always a bit of darkness to your stories that makes them so interesting. I love the details about them smiling and drooling as they're hypnotized.
Lusty Stallion
11/19/20, 6:59 AM
Thanks man, what a great story. It was great fun seeing a cocky frat house turned into a gay porno