Recent Comments

11/29/20, 3:58 PM
One got all frizzled up, then there was one...another surprising twist! Could it be there was never an impostor at all? And of course the lovers are the final pair, with the woman outlasting the man--it's Vera and Philip after all. Now to see if Jen will survive the last ten minutes of the game, or go and hang herself...I cannot wait for the conclusion! But please do not feel rushed. :)
EntrancedGay92
11/29/20, 3:42 PM
Nice work! This is probably the first story I've read featuring pot and hypno that has actually turned me on. I'm a sucker for a subliminal spiral so your decision to include that was appreciated.
Anonymous
11/29/20, 3:36 PM
Honestly one of the hottest stories on this site... but now I really want a sequel. :(
Anonymous
11/29/20, 3:34 PM
Incredible story! Love your style!
11/29/20, 3:34 PM
great story Mal
Juan
11/29/20, 3:28 PM
That was a lot of fun, can't wait for you to continue ! love the little details like the 18 year old son suddenly being drawn to the main character, the changes should be fun
11/29/20, 3:14 PM
please continue
Martin
11/29/20, 2:49 PM
@Bill: > even if it’s only a fantasy, talking advantage of a toddler who cannot give consent is rape. As opposed to what? To hypnotize a straight guy to become a gay sex slut? Which, by your logic, wouldn't be "without consent" and therefor rape?
11/29/20, 1:32 PM
What a hot transformation scene! Enjoying your story as it reaches its conclusion.
11/29/20, 12:36 PM
Great writing, great idea. I love Greek Gods being brought back to the world of male relationships.