Recent Comments

6/22/23, 1:28 PM
Those two boys... they are just so cute! Well written. THANK YOU
6/22/23, 1:18 PM
I love this story. I love pecs too. I cannot wait to follow up! The characters are really interesting. I love the kindness that George shows his roommate. I cant wait to find out how VICTOR gets his due
6/22/23, 8:38 AM
Lol from false alpha to exposed cash fag loser

6/22/23, 10:22 AM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Glad you like it
6/22/23, 6:11 AM
A great start! As a pec lover I enjoy pecs in stories immensely.
Anonymous
6/22/23, 6:01 AM
That's a great start for the story. Is he actually going to have his pups?
6/22/23, 5:21 AM
That was a great start. Hopefully, there’s more to come!
6/22/23, 5:03 AM
Great story, would love to see more!
Vikingforce
6/22/23, 4:05 AM
Thanks for the stories you write, I hope you will continue !
6/22/23, 2:21 AM
This series is just the best!!!
6/21/23, 11:26 PM
If superhero stories were more like this, I'd be so much more into them. This was on fire (and not in the itchy had way), and I loved every minute of it.

6/22/23, 1:38 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Ahhh, thank you so much! I'm not usually a fan of the superhero genre, but I can definitely go for a Magical (adult) Boy or two 😁.
6/12/23, 6:53 AM
Hi Love your stories Edlam i'm a big fan of your work, I hope you can share more of your work soon : ) thnks

Anonymous
6/22/23, 1:04 AM
@[apolo1](/user/show/957117) Yes!
Anonymous
10/22/22, 1:27 AM
Where o where Is Edlam :((

10/22/22, 4:05 PM
@[Hdhshs](/user/show/2696590) I’m still here! I fall in and out of hypno. Still working on this and the story with the other author!! Just gotta be in the right mood so the story stays as hot as possible 😜

Anonymous
10/26/22, 12:53 AM
We understand just loving this story @[EdIam](/user/show/17145)

11/5/22, 3:08 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) :sweat_smile:

1/7/23, 6:53 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) hoping one day you’ll add to this gem

2/17/23, 3:49 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Did you abandon ship on this amazing story :pensive:

Anonymous
5/16/23, 1:33 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Can we get more daddy?

5/24/23, 3:16 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) We desperately need a sequel

Anonymous
6/22/23, 1:03 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Pls
6/21/23, 4:59 AM
The best CTF I have ever read.

6/22/23, 12:25 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thanks! That means a lot.
Anonymous
6/21/23, 11:39 PM
please who was this author
6/21/23, 10:15 PM
Great and hot story mate! Congrats.
Sentier Snovaltica
6/21/23, 8:55 PM
when I say this is hot, I mean it. Genuinely cum inducing plot, details, and characters
6/21/23, 8:37 PM
Hot Story!
Somnus
6/21/23, 7:26 PM
An interesting premise. I look forward to reading what comes next!
NolaGuy
6/21/23, 6:33 PM
One of the best stories I've read on this site! I echo the other commenters who want to see this turn into a series. The world-building in this is super intriguing and it would be cool to read more about what the backstory of the artifacts and Master Tom and what happens next.
6/21/23, 6:32 PM
The further you go the harder it is to go back to the way you were! Stephen will soon learn this lesson all too well! Once you get the scent you will no longer be in control! Embrace your inner wrestler jock and you will be free!
6/21/23, 4:57 PM
AHHHHHH, I'M SO FREAKING EXCITED FOR MORE OF THIS AMAZINGNESS!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍🤤🤤🤤🥰🥰🥰
6/21/23, 3:59 PM
When did this awesome chapter come out. I am glad I saw it and read it. It was amazing, fantastic & completely unexpected. I predict those two will gave a great relationship together.
Anonymous
1/16/22, 12:34 PM
It really is you! I remember reading your story on the mcstories website. It was one of first ones I've read when I realized I had a hypnosis fetish. Will this still be a standalone story?

1/16/22, 6:20 PM
Hi there! I don't know if this will be a standalone or not. I wrote it back in 2004 and never posted a follow up. But I do have some ideas and plotlines to explore. We'll see what happens. No promises, though.

Anonymous
6/21/23, 3:33 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) please consider posting a follow up story. this is so hot
OmegaOni
6/21/23, 2:38 PM
Brava, Brava, we love the dumb, hung and unknowingly ready to pump someone fully of cum.
Anonymous
6/21/23, 1:02 PM
Nice introduction, can’t wait to see how the story continues (really can’t wait to see them using Ethan as their toy xD)
6/21/23, 8:24 AM
Brilliant..perfect company to work for!
URG
6/8/23, 1:37 PM
Great story! Your imagination is so filthy in a very good way. My wish list is for way more Speedo action and for Marcus and Tyler to finally break Hank's cunt and oral cherries asap. That older stud needs bitching as badly as his boy boi-toy son did.

6/21/23, 7:12 AM
@URG Agreed. I would love to see some singlet action. Maybe forcing Hank and his boy to wear them in uncomfortable situations. Hank must feel uncomfortable now after having had gay sex. He needs to be progressively sexed up and convinced that it is the only thing he needs, to serve other machos.
6/21/23, 5:21 AM
I hope you continue this story its great!
6/21/23, 5:00 AM
The thing I love about each of your stories, I mean, aside from the adorable characters and the sex positivity in each one, is how they start off so normal and then get frenetic and wanton every time. It's a heady mix and perfect to me. You're one of my favorite authors on this site, for sure.