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Sam
7/23/23, 10:17 PM
The cum kegs were a genius idea

7/24/23, 7:26 AM
@[Sam](/user/show/2261891) Thank you. Definitely one of my more perverse ones at least
7/24/23, 7:04 AM
Max is nice, but I love the dominance and possessiveness of Brian.
Anonymous
7/24/23, 6:00 AM
I hope Dom gets to top again at some point and coach gets a sex scene
Sam
7/21/23, 2:33 PM
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7/24/23, 5:46 AM
@Sam Rewards for you!
Frank
7/24/23, 4:19 AM
This story is so hot. Looking forward for the next chapter
7/24/23, 4:15 AM
Can't wait for more of this series it's going to be great!
7/24/23, 4:13 AM
Superb!
7/24/23, 3:36 AM
This is hot!
Anonymous
7/23/23, 11:22 PM
I wonder if the draft act might allow the government to override the EDNA etching devices at random in order to keep enlistment numbers level. It's not a mistake, everyone knows there's a small chance of getting drafted with a military name. 🤔
7/23/23, 11:05 PM
Aagh!! I can't believe we get to decide! What to do!? I feel like Peter is waiting for me to decide for him! What a wonderful immersive experience :blush: Yet of course I'm gonna follow both paths in the end and see where they lead. I'm luckier than this pastor since I can traverse through different universes :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: But still, I love the feeling of my choice having an impact. And who would have thought a narrative fork could be so full of sensuality? They're usually just an introduction but this piece is as hot as any of the hottest chapters that precede it! Incredible! Let's see what's behind door #XX!
7/23/23, 10:40 PM
I liked this quite a bit. A very cute idea as well, with the versions of Jack coinciding with the happenings of the story - very creative!
Cockslave
7/23/23, 9:23 PM
Could you expand on this story, please. This scenario would be so fucking hot. Always get hard reading your stories.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/23/23, 9:13 PM
Found myself getting harder each time the story mentioned someone growing fatter. So hot! Maybe it's time I change my eating habits! The pics in the links are also so damned hot!
7/23/23, 9:08 PM
Gets better and better.
mic
7/23/23, 8:15 PM
fucking hot story and ideas, cool written, please more, cant wait whats in the package, women lingerie or chasity , and what they do with him, please more
7/23/23, 7:22 PM
Just loving this:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
7/23/23, 6:55 PM
It was hot. I don't like Joe, seems to me he is really enjoying it, and poor Trevor, it looks like he is the only one that is really being punished, I guess he is going to be turn into a permanent bitch.
Art
7/23/23, 5:41 PM
I am sure that I read more too but unfortunately I only saved the 1st chapter. Please if you are still posting/ writing , post more. A fan begging.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/23/23, 4:23 PM
Damn this is a hot story! I love stories where the slave (or drone as in this case) slowly loses what he thought was his mind. Looking for ward to the full transformation and reprogramming!
Jul 23, 2023
7/23/23, 8:23 AM
Great story, and I'm really looking forward to the next development of this story, such as who this stranger originally is, what 'punishment' he will receive when his mission fails, maybe these professional teams can help him isolate some control, maybe the whole thing is part of a larger conspiracy. Anyway, I feel like the story can go on:grin:

7/23/23, 11:55 AM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Oh the story can definitely go on. But as Hypnothrill said, the chapter ending is so ambiguous, you have to wonder what form will the story take. So when you read it, who were you rooting for?

7/23/23, 4:15 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I'm definitely rooting for the side of evil, and I'm very much looking forward to a bigger conspiracy that will trap everyone:heart_eyes:
7/23/23, 1:31 PM
Cant wait for the finale. Btw , i noticed that you posted this outside of the series that you created for the first two chapters

7/23/23, 4:03 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Hi. Glad you are enjoying it. Yes that error was unintentional. I always screw up that part.😉
Ben
7/23/23, 6:50 AM
Another favorite of mine!! I had forgotten what it was called and finally found it again through your story list!! 🔥 🔥 🔥

7/23/23, 3:29 PM
@[Ben](/user/show/10010133) Glad you liked it. Thank you for being a fan.
Jul 22, 2023
7/23/23, 1:37 PM
A surprisingly sweet story. He gets his identity rewritten, but finding out it was because of his daughter is kind of cute? The fact that he continues to think about and care about his kids really does it for me. The Asher stuff kind of seems like a red herring, but it helps keep his focus on his children, so it works. Good job, and thanks for the story.
7/23/23, 1:37 PM
As if I would need more incentive to masterbate. Look foreword to seeing where this is going.
felix
7/22/23, 6:54 PM
The quality of your writing and the development of these characters / their relationship has been really interesting and well-paced. It's not my usual taste, but the tags kept me coming back, and the shift in this new chapter have really caught my interest. I look forward to see what you do next!

7/23/23, 11:15 AM
@[felix](/user/show/2338654) Thanks mate, I appreciate the compliment. You know you've done well when you can keep people turned on against their normal nature!!
7/22/23, 7:05 PM
Such a great story!

7/23/23, 9:05 AM
@[Island Jock](/user/show/925246) Thank you
7/23/23, 12:49 AM
Thank you very much for continuing. I hope the next chapter will be longer. I hope we see Matt turn the game against Eddie and surprise him (I really want to see them fight). P.S. Is it just me, or does Eddie love Matt deep down but can't admit it to himself, which is why he's so obsessed with him and hates him?

7/23/23, 8:34 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) He does kinda seem to
7/23/23, 8:06 AM
What a tale!
RC_Willy
7/22/23, 8:30 PM
What's the point of pheromones that turn people off? 😕 Can't Bruces have any fun?

7/22/23, 9:30 PM
@[RC_Willy](/user/show/10023548) not people just men if I read correctly. They are the stereotypical boring straight guy.

7/22/23, 11:07 PM
@[RC_Willy](/user/show/10023548) Pheromones that turn MEN off. I guess Bruces are strictly straight. Poor souls.

Martin
7/23/23, 7:28 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Year, for real, I pity them! :satisfied: Where can I get etched to become a Bryce, too? Being a Martin is totally boring, I can tell you!