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toy #4
11/5/16, 1:12 AM
who is this Tom guy you mentioned early in the story?
Nov 1, 2013
Anonymous
11/5/16, 12:53 AM
I remember way back when, this was the first thing I ever read on the site. I had just clicked on the link. To be concise, this is what started my frequent patronage of the site. But, like many good things, I lost it, and I looked. By god I looked on every fucking literotica site there was. It was a happy day when I was rereading some of my favorite Rubbrsome and spotted it! Definitely in my top favorites folder!
Anonymous
11/4/16, 11:09 PM
Great cliff hanger
Anonymous
11/4/16, 5:23 PM
When the part 2 will be ready?
Anonymous
11/4/16, 5:19 PM
Love how the couple has their distinct disabilities without it consuming the character
Jockmorphr
11/4/16, 4:04 PM
I really like this storyline and think your writing is great. So happy that you overcame the anxiety around publishing a story! I can't help thinking about other scenarios...but my favorite would be a really smart str8 hunk triggered in himbo mode. It'd be hot if that mode allowed some awareness and the ability for the transformation to happen over time. That way the client could enjoy watching the brainy hot guy slowly getting dumber and more giggly as they fool around. Imagine the str8 guy trying to hold a conversation and having it get more and more difficult as his intelligence drains away and his desire for cock magnifies!
Anonymous
11/4/16, 12:20 PM
Maybe have the father who is a well respected upright righteous pastor to join in the fun and have a threesome with his sons would be amazing
11/4/16, 10:30 AM
Wow. Where you come up with this stuff is just amazing. Thank you! (Is there another chapter?)
11/4/16, 8:18 AM
Tantalizing beginning.
11/4/16, 5:48 AM
Wow. Thanks so much, EdIam. Your two series are among my all time favorites. I reread them often!
Anonymous
11/4/16, 5:34 AM
I love happy endings! This series was awesome
EdIam
11/4/16, 2:25 AM
VERY nice work!! I enjoyed it thoroughly...on to the next chapter!!
Anonymous
11/4/16, 1:44 AM
Hot. Too many prissy people in the comments though. Love stink and raunch, thanks for the read.
Cubwriter28
11/4/16, 1:41 AM
Thanks everyone for the encouraging comments! :-) can't wait to write more for you guys to enjoy!
cutlerfan
11/4/16, 12:29 AM
I look forward to hearing more about the Change! It just got even more exciting.
TrevorTist
11/3/16, 11:38 PM
Thanks guys. I couldn't decide if the error thing was cheesy. Maybe I should have left it out. Working on the next chapter. I have a few more in mind.
Master C's slave
11/3/16, 11:19 PM
agree with Brody, dont get greedy in your revenege
Anonymous
11/3/16, 10:22 PM
Terrific story!!
Oct 25, 2016
dickshit
11/3/16, 10:01 PM
all cockslut fuckpigs inferiors should be compelled to serve the ord Angelo di Zolfofuoco in sucj ways!!! rkglum@gmail.com
StoryLove321
11/3/16, 8:06 PM
Me again! Totally love this chapter as well! In fact more than the last one!!! :D Keep it up! and thank you for taking our suggestions into considerations!! Please keep this series going! I love the concept AND Your writing!!
11/3/16, 5:13 PM
Interesting ending... moral of the story, don't get greedy in your revenge lol
11/3/16, 12:54 PM
I laughed at the "ERROR" scene. Nice done! No matter what's next are welcomed !
Anonymous
11/3/16, 10:36 AM
Nice addition! But would like read more about Alex's adventures. Maybe even a better have another handsome powerful CEO or high flying professional be a plaything for men. Either married or a womanizer ladies man would be a great treat. Anyhow thanks so much for writing a new chapter so quickly. Your efforts are very much appreciated. Keep going. Much anticipated for your next chapter!
Vannie
11/3/16, 10:30 AM
id also love to be a himringyo. id love to be a dumb always high skater twink
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
11/3/16, 8:54 AM
I do need to get those trainingfiles........
Anonymous
11/3/16, 6:47 AM
Damn this was hot!!!!
Anonymous
11/3/16, 2:04 AM
Loved part two. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
bimarguycnj
11/3/16, 1:19 AM
Your not the only one master c's slave
11/3/16, 12:24 AM
Thanks guys. I appreciate the kind words. Very nerve wracking submitting a story. I'm working on the next chapter and have ideas for a few more. I like your ideas, and I'll try to work them in as I can.
Anonymous
11/2/16, 10:12 PM
I need to get those trainginfiles 😀