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Apr 18, 2010
Anonymous
10/9/19, 8:07 AM
I can't believe this site supports pedophilia, seriously. These stories are not okay.

8/8/23, 12:54 AM
@Anonymous erm....where's the paedophilia? nobody is grooming a child, nobody is having intimate contact with a child. While it varies across the world (from 11 to 21), the age of consent typically falls between 14 and 16 As such 17 would be of legal age.

Martin
8/8/23, 5:20 AM
@[KinkyTwinkie96](/user/show/1237570) There are always some idiots, usually from the US, who call any kind of sex with people under 18 "pedophilia". Which, to me, is awful, because it trivializes the abuse of actual children, which this term is supposed to stand for. Weird US puritan morals don't apply for the rest of the world.
8/6/23, 2:07 PM
Wow. This was an incredibly first chapter. What an interesting idea. Love the romantic aspect from Clay while also the power dynamic and uncovering just what this frat is about and getting his cock locked away. Sweet and also hot and sexy. Eager to see more.

8/8/23, 3:42 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you!
8/6/23, 11:57 AM
Love frat rats! This group is extra special

8/8/23, 3:41 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thank you sm!
Martin
8/6/23, 6:34 AM
That was so amazingly hot and powerful! I was just reading this because I wanted to approve it, and I wasn't prepared to get that hard and leaking... Not at an appropriate time for me. I almost feel like Luke and I wish I'd be in his place. Can't wait to read more about his journey!

8/8/23, 3:41 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Wow thanks!
Anonymous
8/8/23, 3:32 AM
Any chance of this story continuing? I keep rereading every month and it just gets better and better.
Anonymous
8/8/23, 2:18 AM
Hmmm... I'm getting mixed feelings about this. I'm a big fan of CNC but this clearly is not. Then again, I know it's erotic fiction.
Elm
8/8/23, 2:16 AM
Well a proper horror story! It may be a bit too graphic for this site though, seems more fitting for Furaffinity or some site like that rather than this one. Still it's well written! Even If it's not my cup of tea haha.
Apr 18, 2010
8/8/23, 12:56 AM
Hot story! Is 13 years too long to ask for a sequel? :smiling_imp:
Anonymous
8/7/23, 10:49 PM
Love it! Love how you always make the dad's so big and sexy!
8/7/23, 10:40 PM
Oh, that's very cool! :heart_eyes: I think Ryan could have been maybe forceshadowed a bit more? But it feels like there's still a lot of things bound to happen, if this is only the half-way point! HYPED!
Jan 13, 2019
8/7/23, 10:02 PM
Cock hardening
8/7/23, 9:52 PM
I simply love this story so much. The idea is top notch. Hope you keep writing as I was waiting this whole year checking now and then if the new part dropped and it finally did. Best regards
8/7/23, 9:10 PM
Jesus Christ wtf
8/7/23, 8:02 PM
It seems to me that transforming a "straight" guy into a submissive bitch would be more difficult (if not impossible) than it seems in this story. The task would have seemed more plausible if Jason had been a little more confused about his sexuality or at least more open to trying something new to him. Alternatively, or even better, in addition to this more realistic starting point, more detail had been developed about the mind control/training techniques, such as Marcos's pharmaceuticals (e.g. his "vitamins") or his audio. For me, since i am so much inclined to submit and obey and enjoy being used by a gay Alpha, I would have sat between Marcos's legs to watch the gay porn. It all works for me, but more detail would have been good. Suggestions aside, thanks for sharing your hot imagination with the rest of us!
8/7/23, 7:41 PM
Incredibleeeee
8/7/23, 7:10 PM
This was a fabulous story! :heart_eyes: Kind of sad it seems to have finished there after all, but who knows. Sometime, stories get sequels WAY later. I think there was a lot of fun stuff that could have happened next...
8/7/23, 6:12 PM
I am already in love with Marcos and the story. I will admit though i find it mildly frustrating that stories involving transformations all the way from "straight to gay" are quite so common on this site. Given the predominance of that tag, it seems I am in the minority on that preference. Fortunately for me, the story is so hot with kinky gay sex and power exchange it is easy to overlook the "straight to gay" aspects of the story. Also, Jason's backstory and his easy-going personality make him quite a lovable character. Very much looking forward to reading on! Thanks for sharing!
8/7/23, 5:32 PM
Let's go right on time for the new chapter!
8/7/23, 5:23 PM
An amazingly hot chapter!
8/7/23, 5:02 PM
Cant wait to read where this story will go. But i hope it involves Jamals 12 inch and Travis WAP.
EJG
8/1/23, 8:52 PM
Any chance of seeing further chapters?

8/7/23, 4:54 PM
@[EJG](/user/show/1050471) Sorry, but unfortunately not. Ran into writers block and then became too busy with work. I might write other stories if inspiration strikes but I'll probably not update this one. I'll change the title to show its now a one shot.
8/7/23, 4:20 PM
Amazing!
Elm
8/7/23, 3:48 PM
Another classic, daddification is used beautifully.
8/7/23, 3:20 PM
Fantastical story! :star_struck:
8/7/23, 2:39 PM
I like every part of this story except the killing scenes. But still look forward to the next chapter.
8/7/23, 12:31 PM
That’s a great story. Would have been fun to see Kevin wake up with a chastity device

Martin
8/7/23, 1:00 PM
@[Tom Rubber](/user/show/923197) Thanks. If I'd write the story today, I might have added such a little twist in the end :)

8/7/23, 2:33 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Perhaps we might see that in your next story?
8/7/23, 11:49 AM
Nice work! I'm really enjoying it. One question: When Dr. Hall will perform a prostatic massage using his hands? Looking forward to it XD

8/7/23, 2:14 PM
@[Legna](/user/show/10009975) The answer is a spoiler haha but I can say that's sooner than you think! 🤐 Thank u for your comment!! ♥️
Elm
8/7/23, 1:31 PM
Hi there! Thank you for your comment. I will try and answer some of your questions haha. You will definitely get at least a small introduction to Josh and Teddy, so just sit tight! I wasn't aware you guys didn't use it :smiling_face_with_tear: my program didn't correct it (google docs + grammarly) guess I will keep them in, since they help me compartmentalize. There is no connection really, I added it to exemplify just how in a hurry Tom was, and how he is still getting to know himself // doesn't have a hold into all the things he likes (kind of like a teaser for things he is willing/wants to try). For that last one... Hehe :satisfied: just wait and see! I do take suggestions though! Turns out I write better within a stricter set of boundaries. Go figure :man_shrugging:
7/31/23, 5:04 AM
Going through your catalog right now, really enjoying myself. Loved loved loved (!!!) Greek; I think it's always so interesting to see what authors do with women in gay erotica, especially fantasy/magic erotica. Also thankful that at least someone will be reigning in Lewis in the coming magical harem. fantastic work, thanks for sharing!

7/31/23, 1:35 PM
@[whatknife](/user/show/10003454) @[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Now I kinda want an ending where Greek, as the one who has both a working brain and the ability to remember how things where even after they change will rule them all.

8/6/23, 8:15 PM
@[whatknife](/user/show/10003454) Thanks! I wanted to do something with a character who could comment on the mind-control/magic stuff without being part of the erotic action. A sort of Greek chorus, if you will :wink:. Some of my favorite long-format erotica stories have women in roles other than 'jilted lover who curses a horrible straight guy with gayness' or similar tropes I see pop up a lot.

8/6/23, 8:16 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Oh, I have something much more unusual planned for Greek and the boys :smiling_imp:.

8/7/23, 1:12 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Is there a Greek version to "color me curious"?
Anonymous
8/7/23, 9:57 AM
sooo hot!!! amazing transformation descriptions too…