Recent Comments

8/27/23, 9:29 AM
Thanks for the follow up. This is one of my favorite stories on the site this year so far. I hope the sequel comes out soon and the ending doesn't disappoint.

8/27/23, 11:56 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thank you very much! I hope it’ll meet your expectations.
johnlee88888888@yahoo.com
8/27/23, 9:21 AM
Novel and sexy, loved it!!
Anonymous
8/27/23, 7:55 AM
I live to serve the virus
8/27/23, 6:19 AM
Something occurred to me . Right at the beginning whey Eddie said to Ryan if only Matt Had stood up to me he would be the one here . Could it be that Eddie actually fancied Matt all along but he wants him to get a backbone . Once he at his most confident he will take him ? It’s a hot thought 🥵
Aug 22, 2023
Anonymous
8/27/23, 1:44 AM
Amazing writing!!!

8/27/23, 5:13 AM
@Anonymous Thank you!
Aug 22, 2023
8/27/23, 12:18 AM
I haven't even finished this yet - I'm at the point where they're about to go off on their first run together. Just had to hop down here briefly to say how wonderful I'm finding this. Like dumbmusclehypnojockboy, I've got daddy issues. In spades. So far, this really evokes introspection and strong emotions about my dad, his failings and my own, respect, self-respect, masculinity and mentorship. One of the best wish fulfillment fantasies I've read in quite a while. My dad was very loving, but because of his limitations and his religion's dogma I could never actually be sure of that or be close. I'd give almost anything to have had a dad so worthy of unconditional respect. I'm actually going to set the story aside for a day; I don't want the chapter to end yet.

8/27/23, 5:12 AM
@[meatheadosis](/user/show/9860) Thank you for sharing your reaction with me -- I'd really like to know how the rest of the story strikes you. I'm amazed with what you've already written; it's taken me years and years to even admit that my world revolves around a sort of blank space that has such gravity and such potential beauty but also such emptiness. I hope to hear from you again. Please feel free to message me in the forum. I'd really like to talk with you.
8/27/23, 4:08 AM
Hell yeah man. Love the gradual corruption and changes. I’d love to see more biker themed stories like this. Keep up the great work.
8/27/23, 2:37 AM
Your stories are the best!
8/27/23, 1:36 AM
Hell yeah! 🤠🤠
8/26/23, 11:36 PM
Fuck I need to upset that wizard. All the things o love and the changes I’d love made to me.
8/26/23, 11:24 PM
I hope each choice gets its own equal screentime haha this was so hot
8/26/23, 10:50 PM
I really enjoyed this, looking forward to the next chapter! Sweaty, musky, dom orcs are hot.
8/26/23, 10:08 PM
Do it to the Rich Men North Of Richmond before they do it to you.....
8/26/23, 9:26 PM
I'm now suddenly _very_ interested in reading the rest of your series, well done!
8/26/23, 9:24 PM
so good
8/26/23, 6:29 PM
I love this.
8/26/23, 5:26 PM
Can't wait for Ray and Shift’s next episode.
CH
8/26/23, 5:25 PM
hot!
8/26/23, 5:24 PM
Check back frequently, hoping for more!
8/26/23, 4:08 PM
I liked it a lot. I'd never think it was your first story!
8/26/23, 3:31 PM
WOW! that was just magically fantastic.
8/24/23, 7:18 AM
I don't get it what was wrong with the last chapter that you had to rewrite it? I also ask because I'm writing a similar story although a forced to gay/butler/lover story. Didn't think it was that bad. However boy do I get the kink shaming on this site. Not as much not as I used to back before Martin took over. Now it's just really that is has to be consensual or you have to go into out of the ordinary territory so nonconsensual isn't grounded in reality to be accepted. But I remember back when kinks were being banned left and right. No shit, no piss, no kids (understandable), no childish behavior, no high school setting even with coming of age or nerd/jock stories, no regression, no diapers, incest (not my cup of tea but a lot off writers were posting and the list of stories from the ncmc days had tons of it), no rape, no kidnapping, no pup play, and so forth. A friend of mine was writing a story and it was suppose to end but couldn't write what was needed to get to the point before being censored and rewrote a chastity and then threw out an end chapter when we were suppose to get 4 more chapters at least. Back then it was getting ridiculous as I remember in a month there was a new kink(s) named almost every week. They hide behind the subject matter if illegal in some countries and I'm like you expect everyone to know the laws in all 300+ countries. Where In from age of consent is 15 so an 18 year old in high school was fine. But also the subject matter of homosexual acts are illegal and outside by death in some countries. His replies about it was also kind of shaming in a way. Telling me my kinks were disgusting and he doesn't like reading them. This was about a forced age regression story that was near finished and no way consensual. The guy I was friends with also briefly took his stories down if I recall and was going to find another outlet. He's brought most of them back and helps with the site now. However it was actual a lot worse a few years ago. But I can get the feeling of being kink shamed. But I live by the time of you don't like it stop reading it. You literal have that power and it takes no effort to back out of a story. Hopefully this doesn't damper your writing as I enjoyed it and since we have had so many formal stories leave the site it was refreshing to see some posted again.

Martin
8/24/23, 9:12 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) The offending chapter is no longer visible, and neither are the comments to it. I'm not sure what time before I took over you're talking about. Before me, there was only Hugh, and he was primarily concerned about kids getting attracted to the site, which is why he tried to make sure that search engines wouldn't list GSS stories just because popular characters, like super heroes or famous persons would be mentioned in there. That was the only reason that stories about super hero, well-known franchises and celebrities were banned. I don't think Hugh ever banned any story based on a kink. Or are you talking about a time before Hugh (and therefore before GSS), like the NCMC?

8/26/23, 3:24 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) It was 2017 or 2018 but their was an entire chapter that never got posted as the guy didn't like the subject matter and that happened to have a father and adult age son have sex at the control of a belt. There was also a DL, diaper lover story not related to age regression that was removed from the site after a few days. They removed all their stories and left the site and haven't spoken with them not to long after that. A story I sent to him to proof read that had an adult male that is microchipped into being a man baby boy and he clearly still has an adult mindset and enough to hate the man but I was told I needed to tone down the diaper stuff and get rid of anything that would be related to kids like the crib, clothing, the fact the chip made him talk with a childish lisp and censored his profanity. However he was clearly aware and acting as an adult. When I brought up those points he even stated that he just didn't like that route of subject matter. I ended up deleting the story and only started to rewrite again a couple of years later during the pandemic after working with Swizz for so long. People where also posting on forums about various stories around incest being denied. However the site closed around a week or two after that. There was also another guy who I believe was writing a gay couple's that moved to town only for the mayor to turn one into a sheriff and another into a holding trailer trash only for them to still find each other and thus turn the sheriff into an older man who now has a dad with dementia and the hillbilly into the new sheriff and then their son's got together. If I recall he had some issues with the writer as well but I could be wrong there. I just remember he posted a list of stuff that was banned and shit down the site not to long after and then short while later someone else got it. My point being your much more relaxed for the most part on subject matter and even have a system in place so people can block certain subject matter. The thing that gets to me is that in mind control and bdsm aspects that everything has to be consensual or have they all lived happily ever after is like um what. The idea behind mind control and bdsm in the suffer or taking over someone's will and completely changing them into something they despise. It can be done well as a happy ending or discovering the kink like Happy Ending's current story but again it's a very tricky line without feeling forced. I like writing but I don't think I have it in me to write that way especially when I like Ron Sterling, R.L. Stein, Stephen King and shows like Twilight Zone, Goosebumps, Twisted Metal Story Races, Tales From The Darkside, Friday the 13th the Series, Freddy's Nightmares, Are You Afraid Of The Dark, and Haunting Hour. Stories that don't always have a happy ending. It's being shamed and I do know a few people on discord that I've had chats with that like to talk down about individuals that write those kind of stories. There is a lot of kinks and subject matter that people do kink shame. Maybe not you but they are out their.
Anonymous
8/26/23, 2:43 PM
Bravo! I am DEFINITELY loving this! I can't wait for the next chapter!

8/26/23, 3:18 PM
@Anonymous Thank you, the next chapter should be fun as we came back to Yates's team, push on some boundaries and maybe see more Declyn depending on how the chapter goes
Anonymous
8/26/23, 5:46 AM
When we'll see the end of this epic story? I'm dying to know how these superheroes end up! I'm lost with Sparkshooter, I want to know what happened to him and what will be Gold Force's ending. I hope they all end up sexualized and also a bit ridiculous, it's a perfect ending for superheroes in these stories.

8/26/23, 2:42 PM
@Anonymous The last chapter is just waiting for approval now, so just a little longer! Hope you enjoy!
8/26/23, 12:54 PM
The gradual transformation was incredible, and the sexual payoff was hot as fuck! I really enjoyed this, and the more cum the better.
8/26/23, 8:44 AM
I love the way your wording actually seems as much like an induction for the reader as the Naga's induction for his prey. It certainly feels that way. Not only does the present environment fade away, my imagination is captured and my mind seems to meld with that of the Naga's prey. Normally i think 'vore' would be off-putting for me. i couldn't really imagine how arousing the idea of vore could be, yet by the end of the story i feel blissfully enthralled, aroused, and completely ready to slip down that dark coiled path with Theo. There is definitely something magically hypnotic about your stories. Thanks so much!
4/15/23, 6:42 AM
Great story I'd like to see them eventually take 'Josh' on as their sub boy.

4/15/23, 5:05 PM
@[Trotskisaurus](/user/show/949527) Had an idea similar to that as well, but decided to leave it here and let the imagination run wild with what the future is like for the new Josh

8/26/23, 8:43 AM
@[Trotskisaurus](/user/show/949527) I don't want to spam but, there is a story called "Down of an alpha", basically a slave auction, I like to think that's where Josh ends :3
8/26/23, 6:05 AM
Me encanta por donde va esto, ya quiero ver el momento de quiebre de Rafa 🔥
8/25/23, 10:02 PM
I'm really loving where you are taking this story. And you have given us a lot of nuggets for us to use to feed our own imaginations. This is until the time you get a chance to post the official update.

8/26/23, 5:43 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) thank you. I like leaving ideas open and while I will circle back to some things-like his team leader and CIA guy from part one- other parts like Yates's second visit to the club will likely be left to your imagination which I hope you enjoy.
8/26/23, 5:36 AM
Wow, I'm actually a bit upset that I missed this when it was first uploaded two weeks ago, but I'm glad that I found it now! Very good work - managing to convey a light, almost otherworldly tone, while still grounding it in reality. Looking forward to the rest of Luke's story and his relationship with Clay, keep it up!