Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/11/23, 2:31 PM
I like the direction of where the story is going, just not sure about the wives(ex-wives) also being present in the scenes….. but other than that, really can’t wait for Part 3….
Martin
8/11/23, 1:45 PM
I've assigned your first story to your account (you had submitted it without using an account originally), and I've fixed the author name of the other two stories, I hope that's ok with you.
8/11/23, 12:38 PM
This has been a tremendous tale. The twists and turns are great. I have read this several times, and each time I pick up another clue. Thanks
spiralthiago
8/11/23, 11:14 AM
Exelent!!! Super hot twins
8/11/23, 10:10 AM
A great series by two great authors. The world has lost a real talent. Much love and support to all who knew him <3

8/11/23, 10:58 AM
@[Hypno_boy](/user/show/497726) Thanks we did lose a great guy and a better friend.
TGF
8/11/23, 10:12 AM
sexiest story of the site ! thanks for this one, hope to read more like that soon !
8/9/23, 9:26 PM
If the parents have only been married for 15 years and the son came after the wedding, that makes Drew 14, 15 at most. Which makes things a bit icky.

Anonymous
8/10/23, 5:21 AM
@[ex-top](/user/show/932298) The math is off yeah, but he's in college so I think we're suppose to assume that he's at least 18. Sometimes people are careless about that. Dates are easy enough to be an oversight.

Martin
8/10/23, 6:06 AM
@ex-top Also, why do you care? The age is not an issue in this story. It's not like he's written as being a child. The fixation of some people on the age and whether something might be 'underage' (that term being very subjective as it is) is already unhealthy initself. If a story would be about a child or pre-puberty teen, we'd see it right away and deny its publishment.

8/10/23, 6:39 AM
@[ex-top](/user/show/932298) Yeah I was thinking something similar. I don’t think the implication is he’s underage but perhaps we could get an edit with some maths updates the confirm?

8/10/23, 6:57 AM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Yes, all that is needed is the change of a digit from “5” to an “8”. But as the owner of this site bluntly asks “Why do you care?” it’s obviously time for me to steer well clear of here.

Martin
8/10/23, 7:54 AM
@[ex-top](/user/show/932298) Good idea!

8/11/23, 2:01 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Excuse me, but this whole interaction is very rude. Even if the character isn't being "written as a child," he's still, in the context of the story, underage (and not 17, but 14/15), and people are well within their rights to question and dislike that. "Underage" is not a subjective term--it means, at least in the United States, "under 18," and Romeo and Juliet laws aside, full-grown adults having sex with anyone under the age of 18 is illegal. Yes, I know it's a fantasy website that crosses FAR more taboos than that, but the issue of sex with minors is one that people are right to be passionate about--ESPECIALLY at a time when the biggest cudgel being waged against the LGBTQIA+ community is accusations of grooming and pedophilia. Look, I know I personally come to this site to get away from all of the seriousness of the world, and I bet others do, too. Politics are frustrating, especially when you're trying to get off, and I don't like thinking about that kind of thing when I'm going at it. But ex-top was right to point out the underage nature of the story and raise concerns. And I think that the owner of the site--who is responsible for its content--might be a little more sensitive to the issue than rudely dismissing someone with "Good idea." Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Thank you for reading!

Martin
8/11/23, 9:11 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) This discussion is coming up like once a year. But a story's comment section is simply not the appropriate place to discuss it. However, since it's important to many people, obviously, and because you took the time to write a calm, sincere posting, I wanted to explain my reasons once again. Check out the forum posting: https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/another-underage-discussion/5749 Also please use that thread to voice your (dis)agreement with my position. In this comment section, I will delete any further comment about the matter, though. It just doesn't belong here.
8/11/23, 8:22 AM
Soooo incredibly hot, I can't wait to see what tye captain will make him do next
Anonymous
8/7/23, 2:12 PM
This story is really hot! I liked Travis' puppy personality and if someone like Jamal would've let his cock nonchalantly caress my cheeks I would just die of embarrassment, confusion and arosement. However, despite it being stated, Jamal doesn't look like a nice guy. I mean, Travis did absolutely nothing wrong, and probably could've been manipulated in a more positive way. That's not to say that this is a bad story, because it's not, I just feel bad for Travis. That in itself is some great writing as I didn't expect to sympathize with the white himbo who never faced a challenge. I hope Travis' spirit will be lifted soon, especially if it involves being lifted over Jamal's dick.

8/11/23, 6:45 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for the reply. And aargh... I tweaked the story a little to add in a bit more of Travis questioning himself, and Jamal getting a thrill by teasing and slightly humiliating Travis. But don't worry, they settle down quite nicely soon... but maybe not how people will expect
8/11/23, 5:26 AM
This was great. Look forward to part 2.
8/11/23, 5:20 AM
this is the 10,000,000th story!
8/11/23, 3:03 AM
I was gonna leave a comment on PLEASE write a part 2... And reading that there is one made me really happy.
ann
8/11/23, 1:05 AM
Love this! Please continue.
8/10/23, 10:04 AM
Superb! What a glorious chapter. The cunning ways of instilling envy in each of the two to-be-victims. Delicious. I loved the use of edging to 'torture' Blake into lust and wanting to get off, envious of gooner Gabe getting to shoot as much as he wanted. Jerking off in his own soul at his boyfriend's corruption is mightily hot too. I really enjoyed the way they were led to contribute to sullying themselves to be ready for the next demon. Gabe's already so far gone, it's only a matter of time. So excited for the next chapter!

8/10/23, 5:05 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks! I had a bit of writers block before the connection between envy and edging occurred to me. Glad it landed!

8/11/23, 12:38 AM
@[BateSeeker](/user/show/235651) Writers' block sucks but you nailed it with the solution. I never would have considered this and it is truly perfect. Both hot, because edging and that need growing really feeds into the corruption element. But tying in someone unrestricted able to enjoy orgasm after orgasm and cover themselves in jizz right in front of their tormented friend to elicit envy. Chef's kiss.
8/2/23, 6:54 PM
Oh, I was hoping you had the address. :yum:

8/10/23, 2:17 PM
@[Mike Davis](/user/show/10020988) It's on Sea Street, close to the beach. I highly recommend it.

8/10/23, 9:55 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) :grin:
8/10/23, 8:55 PM
I wish Carolyn could have been a man that ends up serving master Milton in a sexual way too (maybe a threesome with the fiancé and dad?)
8/10/23, 7:24 PM
This was so hot!!!
Leo
8/10/23, 7:09 PM
Such a great start! You should make a chapter where we see the dad fall under his son’s control and the hot roleplay scene that happened in the bedroom! Also, please send the mom away. She’s not important. Have dad steal her ring and propose to his master, this will make their romantic relationship official.
8/10/23, 6:01 PM
This is great. Love a twink transformation. Would love to see a sequel where you transform other actors into young twinks
8/10/23, 5:59 PM
Hoping this is continued! Awesome premise and writing!
8/10/23, 5:37 PM
Really loved this story and the tie-ins to fairy tales, though hoo boy the racial slurs were hard to get through.
Apr 12, 2023
NY
8/10/23, 5:37 PM
Can you write one of the chapters where he body swaps into a girl and then has a threesome with two inexperienced straight guys who are best friends? I want her to totally control everything that happens. She tells them that she won't do any sexual act with them unless they're also willing to do that thing to each other *first*. She makes them kiss each other before she kisses each of them. If one guy licks his friend's nipple, then she'll lick his nipple. If he grabs his friend's dick, then she'll grab his dick, etc... A good setting for this might be on a cruise ship, and these are two random guys by the pool.
Jax
8/10/23, 5:33 PM
100% agree. This just left me wanting more
8/9/23, 1:20 PM
Another masterpiece! I love seeing how debauched these men become.

8/10/23, 5:05 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thank you!!
Gingcub
8/10/23, 3:47 PM
Love stories about guys being made into helpless gooners. Would love to see more of this
8/10/23, 12:09 PM
Gimp Gary sound like he was a low life but Tom wasn't. So at a certain point I expect Dylan, H and the others might get their due. As you Slaveboy good luck in your studies & don't stress out too much.

8/10/23, 3:36 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thank you, mate!!
7/23/23, 7:26 PM
And at last, the prophecy has been fulfilled. Even though the title was a warning of Adam's demise, I had a small bit of me hoping there'd be a twist at some point where the lawyer could somehow become victorious. Yet nonetheless this was a great ending! I love this realistic approach of what happens after the prey has been haunted. I wonder how all these successful recruitment must be affecting Gabriel since, ironically, having everything you want can sometimes become a curse in itself. How long until nothing is interesting enough? How long until everything feels dull and colourless? He sure shall find his own downfall at some point in the line. I must say I don't agree with Adam in one thing. We'll never know, but I feel like Gabriel would have never stopped at trying to add Adam to his collection. If the honest lawyer had followed his wife's advice and stayed with her, I'm confident Gabriel would have grown obsessed to the point of finding one way or another to make the man his. In the end, Adam was the victim of a nefarious and gifted man. All of this was Gabriel's fault, and not Adam's natural and human flaws. Also, as a side note, I looooved the suggestion of listening to Rigoletto, and I think it helped building the atmosphere. Very original thing to do, addressing the reader and even adding a link :heart: Thank you so much for this series! It was really well written, original, and fascinating. One story that will have a space in my mind for sure :)

7/23/23, 7:56 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) I agree about the never ending hunt. Or at least I did until we were told otherwise by this story (even if by an unreliable narrator). I think it comes down to two questions: 1. For how long could Adam avoid Gabriel; and 2. What is Gabriel's patience limit/boredom limit. I am surprised that Adam never tried to work with the journalist. This would have been the first thing I would do in his shoes.

7/31/23, 12:20 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) It was originally planned like that, but the journalist was useless, his lawyer already converted. Also since Adam's firm was representing Gabriel, it would have been a no no, Adam is still a lawyer at heart, he's careful with these things. As for Gabriel's hunt, it's clear that we only have Adam's opinion on the matter. And he doesn't have a good track record for figuring Gabriel out.

7/31/23, 12:25 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Adam is struggling to find agency in this whole thing. Thinking he could have prevented it helps him do that. His natural human flaws only made Gabriel's job easier, but of course he remains the victim in the whole situation.

8/5/23, 7:50 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) I thought he would try to contact him after he had quit representing Gabriel, but I can see why even though he wanted revenge that was a line he wouldn't cross. Now I am really curious. As the author, can you tell us if Gabriel would've left Adam alone had he listened to his wife and let it go?

8/10/23, 2:26 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Adam's firm still represented Gabriel even if Adam no longer did. So there still remained a conflict of interest. Maybe Gabriel would have pursued Adam all the way no matter what Adam did. But Gabriel is flighty and dominates dozens of people a week. He cruises through life. He did not work for his gifts, he was naturally talented. So too much effort to put into something might bore him, especially if some new shiny thing appears around the corner. He was amused by not getting Adam right away, but even succeeding at making Adam hide from him means he had influenced his life anyway. Still, we'll never know.
7/22/23, 9:05 AM
Wow, this story was something else! The writing was excellent and the plot was captivating. I liked the opera theme a lot (though admittedly I didn't always recognize the connection to Rigoletto). As for the ending, I am torn. On the one hand, I always love a happy ending, this ending is more fitting to the story, especially when considering that the original Rigoletto is a tragedy. I really hope your name will be revealed soon because I can't wait to read other stories you wrote (also, I have a small hunch about who you are but I'll just have to wait and see)

7/31/23, 12:36 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I hope you're not disappointed that it's me behind the story. Weirdly, I had not planned this story around Rigoletto at all. I was just looking for an opera that Gabriel would be in. Then it started to fit the story, and eventually dictated its shape loosely. At the end of Rigoletto, the Duke escapes justice and continues his life of debauchery. But even before Rigoletto, it was planned that Adam would fall.

8/5/23, 7:45 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Not disappointed at all! I loved this story and it was one of my favorites for this challenge. Even if it wasn't planned I think it suits Gabriel well and the part where he addresses the reader and recommends listening to La Donna é Mobile was a great touch. May I ask why it doesn't take part in it anymore?

8/10/23, 2:20 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) The competitiveness, as well as ratings in general, gave me too much unneeded anxiety.
8/5/23, 1:50 AM
I absolutely love day-in-the-life stories about hypnotists, the casual relaxed way he orders the men around like it’s nothing, making them his playthings, leaving them changed in hot but lifechanging ways as a lark, extremely hot!

8/10/23, 2:19 PM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) Thanks a lot! Yeah, Gabriel remains an artist even in the way he uses his power.
8/3/23, 11:23 AM
Travelling [with a hot statuesque tower of a man like Florian] can change your life! :grin: The essence of the scenes is really good. The humiliation, the dependency, and the growing submission of Ian marinate specially well. Reading it from the the vloger's point of view adds to the mix. His shortlived feeling of being back in control was a wonderful touch.

8/10/23, 2:18 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thanks Piko. Florian can give you the urge to be controlled.