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8/31/23, 3:55 AM
please do!
Enchanting-Sorcerer-Boy
8/31/23, 3:31 AM
FANTASTIC. Pure sex, bravo.
8/31/23, 3:28 AM
SIGN ME UP PLSSSS :3333 aaa I don't see cradling a lot in many romantic stories, and this omg, I want to be Chris so badly being cradled and tenderly & affectionately cared for by Jason
8/31/23, 2:20 AM
I am really, really loving this.

8/31/23, 2:28 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Oh thank you! This is one of those stories where I thought pretty much nobody would like it.
8/31/23, 1:22 AM
Very well done!
8/31/23, 1:18 AM
thank you for one more part, let's see in what Asher will be turned into
Anonymous
8/31/23, 1:17 AM
Phenomenal!!!
Anonymous
8/29/23, 12:29 AM
cant tell if praxis or not

Anonymous
8/29/23, 4:41 AM
@Anonymous Excuse my lack of knowledge, English is not my first language; what you you mean by praxis in this context?

Anonymous
8/31/23, 12:07 AM
@Anonymous Uncritical support to Ahmed in his crusade against the issraeli state 🫡
8/31/23, 12:07 AM
You are amazing one of my favorite writers
8/30/23, 11:48 PM
I enjoyed reading every chapter of this hot story. I was disappointed to see it is one of those terrific tales with no ending, but I can imagine Collin taking the entire town and completely enslaving the male population. I'm sure Ravi's birthday party would be off the charts! Firefighters, policemen and the mayor in attendance in very minimal amount of clothing would make it very erotic! Even without ending, it's a great storyline. T
8/29/23, 5:17 AM
You're very good at describing the psychological effects of the app in flowery poetic language. However, for me that technique lost its impact when _every_ part of the story was told using this same flowery language, even the rare bits of dialogue between Matt and Alex. I'd love to see you experimenting with different registers; a few more prosaic descriptions of Matt and Alex's original personalities would make their transformations into app-induced bliss seem more special.

8/29/23, 1:42 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I completely agree with you. I had the same thoughts as well

8/30/23, 7:18 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) It's not my native language so I rely at times on similar patterns, I agree. Could you give me an indication of what could be better ?

8/30/23, 11:09 PM
@[Rubberizer92](/user/show/1146099) I echo Hypnothrill’s reply: the language is very elevated and flowery, and it makes it hard to read because all of the ornate descriptions flow together. Here’s a particular example: “Each inaudible sound that emanated from the app seemed to weave itself into his desires, a constant reminder of his connection to the symphony.” The exact opposite would probably be something like “The whispers made him horny.” :p But there’s a middle ground…let’s see…how about: “Each inaudible sound that came from the app seemed to make him more aroused, which in turn made his connection to the Voice even stronger.” It captures what’s happening, but it removes the super-poetic language (my writing professors called it “thesaurus language” because it felt like you looked up synonyms for words). I hope that helps! :)
8/30/23, 7:40 PM
Very fun and hot!
8/30/23, 7:23 PM
Bentornato e grazie per i nuovi capitoli! Questa puntata, se posso chiamarla così, ha funzionato benissimo come passaggio verso la conclusione drammatica della serie. Mi è piaciuto molto la sensazione di esserci con Sam sotto il letto, incerto quando e come a scappare via dalla casa di Jacob. Il fatto che Nico sognava del simbolo mu preannuncia qualcosa di interessante!
8/30/23, 7:15 PM
That was fast, thank you for the update, I wonder in what the last two woll he turned into
8/16/23, 8:11 AM
Love seeing an Outlands story here. Well done! An intriguing ending with a mystery to solve. Dangerous to go out there. Sure hope they know what they're doing. What is the Brother's Brigade?

8/30/23, 6:22 PM
I guess we're going to have to find out when Andre joins, won't we?
Anonymous
8/30/23, 5:36 PM
This was very hot I kinda hope for a part 2
Anonymous
8/30/23, 5:13 PM
Great opening! Really interested to see what you’ve got planned next :)
8/30/23, 5:05 PM
i love this. I am very very interested in israeli men. THey are so incredibly handsome and sexy.
Anonymous
8/30/23, 3:56 PM
Excellent!!
8/30/23, 3:41 PM
Nice happy ending!
Anonymous
8/30/23, 2:23 PM
Terrific!!
Aug 30, 2023
8/30/23, 2:14 PM
Hot!! Loved it, funny and sexy at the same time
8/30/23, 12:42 PM
Are there any IT guys that can make the Voice into an app?
8/30/23, 3:37 AM
I absolutely loved the idea and way Rob's corruption went, even if it was a bit brief. Hu'nah's was a fun return to the taming of the wild and the mental link pushing down on him. And while Cliff's isn't the most for myself, I could tell you were really having fun with it, and I loved the idea of taking his clothing options and using it to change the texture of the clay.

8/30/23, 11:52 AM
@[Sabinmoon](/user/show/2093511) Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. And, yes; I really enjoyed writing that part in particular, but also this whole series!
8/30/23, 11:50 AM
What's he doing to the three straight boys? Will they become slaves too, or just get turned gay? The latter could be fun because it would attract more people to the club to be turned now that being gay is trendy, but the natural gays should still be superior to the converts.
Anonymous
8/30/23, 10:26 AM
Real curious to know what happened between kim and chloe’s dads
8/30/23, 9:48 AM
Keep going please
8/30/23, 7:12 AM
Wow, that was great! I'm not normally into fantasy but this pushed my buttons big time! Hope there's more to come soon...
shoejock
8/30/23, 4:50 AM
Fuck this was hot, i want to hear more details about the sucking and mindlessness
8/30/23, 12:41 AM
Amazing chapter! Really love the insane number of fetishes you explored even if the animal fucking was not my favourite after a certain point. I would really love mpreg to come into this properly - Dan and Greg both seem like they'd have loved to get pregnant in this chapter and the plants impregnating everyone was super hot.