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9/14/23, 4:08 PM
I followed it fine. He left the flower in the kid's car as he drove off. Then the camera pans back to Ken for his get away. @Rubbersome please continue this story. I'm rereading it now and it has the same effect. Focus on those that are greatful for the orgasms you can bring from your words.
9/14/23, 3:25 PM
2, and maybe 3. Interesting set up.
9/14/23, 12:44 PM
would love to see all but 2&3 sound the most fun
9/14/23, 5:33 AM
Presiento que Rafa se va a quebrar muy pronto, y no hablando de su resistencia
9/14/23, 3:40 AM
Eu ja consegui, gostei da historia, eu gosto mais quando o cara é forçado ou não consegue resistir, mas sempre tentando impedir, mas gostei de qualquer maneira principalmente a parte que ele foi dopado
9/10/23, 3:02 AM
Hot very hot. Slowly going through the details. I can't wait when he make other military men, his devotees. Start with Sanders and then slowly his SEAL team mates. I would love to see how you would conquer the rest of the camp and even the eastern SOF command even into the Pentagon.

9/10/23, 7:46 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Thank you. My plan is to take my time and slowly have Yates walking a tightrope over the abyss and yes things will be happening with Sanders a at least a few members of his Team but as of right now I don't plan on him taking over the military or the like but then the story is still young so...

9/11/23, 3:12 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Sure I think your taking slowly is great! You could also do a spin-off based on different branches to gather more energy.... :D

9/11/23, 4:00 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Having a Ranger make a deal while training at Ranger School would be interesting, or maybe one of the instructors...but I'm slow a writer enough not sure I'd want to add that but we'll see.

9/13/23, 3:57 PM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) No problem. Take your time and make the story that you would love to continue writing; no pressure intended. For those (like me) who loves the military stories, note that there are Special Ops in each of the service arms: - Army: Rangers, Green Berets, Delta (usually from Army) - Marines: Recon/Raiders - Navy: SEALs, SWCC - Airforce: Pararesecue/PJ (see this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_UtM9IAHvoc) - Coast Guards: "A" school (see the movie "The Guardian") Lots of opportunities :D

9/13/23, 11:02 PM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) I do have some other plans for some of the branches. I have an alien drone story planned and partly written for the army so I might just do one story for each, each with a different theme, but making each focus on the Special Ops might be a rather good way to tie them together...
9/12/23, 10:46 PM
did you forget chapter 2 or is it a typo?

9/13/23, 4:37 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Hi billi Thank you for pointing that out. It’s a typo in previously posted chapter since it consisted of a chapter one and chapter two as well.

Martin
9/13/23, 5:24 AM
@[I. Dusk](/user/show/10038753) Did you see the email I've sent you yesterday?

9/13/23, 7:30 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Yes, I got to it just now. I was extremely busy today. Thank you both billi and Martin :)
9/13/23, 5:19 PM
Corrupt this town!
Anonymous
9/13/23, 3:22 PM
Can’t wait for the next part!
9/13/23, 2:11 PM
Better and better
9/11/23, 7:17 PM
The first section is quite long. Breaking up any long sections is a good idea.

9/13/23, 7:04 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Ok
Anonymous
9/13/23, 4:27 AM
Awesome...Verrrry HOTTT!!!!
9/11/23, 7:14 PM
I understand. It's your story. I should have said that it would be interesting to see what happens. It is a wonderful stand alone story.

9/11/23, 9:06 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Typically following my previous comment about not continuing this I have had thoughts about just how to do so. The problem is they are so far outside of my comfort range that I am torn between whether it is wise to write something that I would not necessarily choose to read myself, and whether forcing me to do that would potentially be beneficial to my output in the long run.

9/13/23, 4:25 AM
@[Envious George](/user/show/10012614) Even if you don't want to follow this story further I love the idea of this universe and hope to either see more stories set in it or maybe an overview of this society and some more of the roles in it. The collective feels very deep and fleshed out even from this small window
9/13/23, 1:09 AM
Years from now, there will be a Modern Library edition of "The works of Rubbrsome." This will fall into the "early works" section. :) So far, sooo very good!

Martin
9/13/23, 4:24 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Funny, I had a similar thought!
9/13/23, 4:05 AM
Hell yeah!! 😛😛
9/13/23, 3:38 AM
I need more of this AND Fear Itself!
Mind Bender
9/13/23, 2:56 AM
Wow this was amazing! I love the effects of the first wish, and of course what happens after☺️. This was one of my favorite chapters.
9/8/23, 5:00 AM
I forgot to mention one aspect about this series that I haven't really repeated in my other stories. This aspect is the pack or coven. It's literally called "The Brethren" or "The Brotherhood". In my other stories, the characters become mindless drones. And in addition, all characters usually exist on a similar social hierarchy. But not in my first story. The silver figure is definitely the Master, and the other men are is progeny. Think of them like those vampire movies, cause that's kind of where I was drawing inspiration. If you're implanted with a symbiote, you don't really lose your personality. Instead, you just feel an unquestioning loyalty or allegiance to your Master. Because the symbiote was implanted by him, you become his slave. I'm pointing this out because I don't think I've repeated this group dynamic since. I'm not sure why I haven't. I'm definitely attracted to the drone / group hive mentality. But I also like that the Brethren, while they retain personality and independence, are fiercely loyal to each other and their Master. I just see it as if some kind of chemical is introduced into your body. And no matter how much you fight or try to resist, this chemical forces your mind to imprint on another person. It would be a great form of mind control. There's no visual hypnotic spiral. No subliminal audio messages. Just chemistry. Your brain is altered because another person introduced something into your body, and you suddenly belong to him. I actually find the methodology a bit more insidious. :)

9/13/23, 1:23 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) You must have a very different view of your stories than we, your fans. What about that story (whose title I forget) but where the protagonists are absorbed into a brotherhood - where you have this unforgettable end because you describe them as singing in the same choir. And there's another story where the man and the son get taken in....
9/13/23, 1:04 AM
Loving this story so far! Hoping that Straga gets to keep Ezra.
Sep 10, 2023
9/13/23, 12:34 AM
exactly what i needed, thank you
9/12/23, 4:32 PM
Surprisingly good series. I randomly clicked on 1st part and stayed till here. Good job

9/12/23, 10:42 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I'm glad you are enjoying it!
9/12/23, 8:46 PM
I have to agree with Hypnothrill; that the whole scene of Troy's escape was hot. For me I'm always turned on by the communal aspect of hypnosis and mind control and you were able to do that very well. The whole groupthink of wanting to go back to the spiral and group mastrubation really has been something I strive to put in my writing; to see you do it is a big inspiration for me.
9/12/23, 8:21 PM
I'm still loving this series! The scene with Troy trying to convince them to escape while the narrator and the other boys just want to return to the spiral was incredibly hot.
9/11/23, 8:55 PM
Amazing! I hope this series continues.

9/11/23, 10:39 PM
@[Hypnosubboi92](/user/show/10017257) Well ... there will be one more chapter. But I like to think that The Brethren are still out there ... looking for their next recruit.

9/12/23, 8:20 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Hint for a Sequel hehe? What would his best friend say to his new way of live…?
Sep 10, 2023
9/12/23, 8:15 PM
I really dug the idea of this story and the transformation you wrote. I hope a lot more guys find their destiny as chubby dudes who love other chubby dudes!