Recent Comments

Daniel
8/16/18, 4:15 AM
A terrific sequel to part one, same feeling as before, a Gay version of the 60s SyFyTv show THE INVADERS...dude you really should write more I.J.S.
Daniel
8/16/18, 3:49 AM
Dude, this was so freakin' hot ! Loved the corruption of cops, the subversive sexuality ( and pulling ove the 2 dudes and drugging themwas fyyyyne ) Reminded me of a Gay episode of the old tv series THE INVADERS...I.J.S.
8/16/18, 3:41 AM
Wow, for someone who was concerned about writing about sex, you kept me hard through the entire sex scene and transformation. You wrote this so well, I was concentrating on "LIBERTY" but the sex distracted me from that completely. Only when he tried to remember LIBERTY would I think, "Oh yeah, he has to remember LIBERTY. I enjoyed as he gave up and the cum shot making it complete and final.
Mutabear
8/16/18, 3:21 AM
Very hot story. I am definitely interested in hearing what happens when he returns to his buddies.
Daniel
8/16/18, 3:16 AM
Truly enjoyable, please keep writing- don't be afraid to get creatively 'down and dirty' solid job dude...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/16/18, 3:00 AM
Nice work, you hit all of the right buttons. LOVE hypno, corruption, straight to gay ( but with struggle and some effort ) Now get some other teachers, cops, authority figures...I.J.S.
Anonymous
8/16/18, 1:48 AM
This was a pleasant surprise. I didnt know what to expect at first but it turned out to be a really hot, compelling story. I hope the other people with Scott at the camp will fall prey to the daddy bear as well
Anonymous
8/15/18, 11:42 PM
If this some how continues I would love for more of his teammates to become touchdown boys. Like the Latino guy on the team or maybe the black guy
8/15/18, 11:34 PM
You have to continue this! Amazing!
Anonymous
8/15/18, 10:38 PM
Ah, so wonderful! More cubwriter stories please!
Martin
8/15/18, 8:49 PM
Just a note: I've added the other two stories of this series to your new account, too. So you can see the statistics on them now, too.
Aug 12, 2018
Anonymous
8/15/18, 5:50 PM
We need more like this!! This is my favorite story right now! You are a very talented author, the details are amazing and gets me off everytime!!
Max
8/15/18, 3:43 PM
Count me as wanting to see Anthony completely defeated, and him and Cameron transformed into dim witted muscle sluts eagerly serving as PR and PA boys. That said, I wouldn't mind some twists along the way. I think there is still so much that can be done with this concept, with Bulges having infiltrated so many places, and so easily able to not just transform men into Bulges Boys but also less obviously brainwash men like Eddie, Kevin and Jorge into loyal bosses. The conversion process seemed to work a lot quicker for Eddie too. Is there any limit to Bulges reach? Is there anything they haven't thought of that Anthony might have? That's the fun of this story. And however you end the next chapter, I kind of hope you leave an ending that's open for future variations on this concept. ;-)
Anonymous
8/15/18, 3:33 PM
Great story !!
8/15/18, 2:29 PM
I should also add, and I'm not sure why I didn't, that many scebes in the story were super sexy to read through.
Anonymous
8/15/18, 1:44 PM
Fantastic story. I love how his mind is manipulated and switched off.
Shinjo_sho
8/15/18, 11:28 AM
Dear friend, Thank you for support and comment. Actually every comment is fine. I can understand the point of view form one who read and feel that is bad English. ^^; (I know my English is not as good as used to) I'm also enjoy that ppl who endure it and have a fun with it. I will try to do better next time. XD
Anonymous
8/15/18, 11:06 AM
This certainly does not deserve the first two comments. You're in need of some editting and a bit of work on some of the idioms, both of which is perfectly understandable. Tbh, I've seen far worse from people who are native english speakers. I hope the first two comments didn't scare you away, I'm hoping you'll writing a part 2 for this.
8/15/18, 8:39 AM
Thank you for the comments. I understand that trans isn't for everyone and it was a big risk to go down that path. Still, thank you for reading all the way up to the end, and I hope that you will read my future stories which I promise won't be such drastic changes to as many characters. I look forward to seeing your opinions on my work as I continue to strive for improvement of skill.
Anonymous
8/15/18, 6:55 AM
Great story, didn’t read te orinal one but will do now; this one is a great series I’m looking forward for the conclusion!
IvorySilk
8/15/18, 5:10 AM
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback everyone! I really appreciate and all of your inputs. So, just in response to the last two comments, I will state that while I will not be extending this particular story, you will see Ty again in future installments. Just like how you will see the Dr. from “No Escape” again. ;)
Anonymous
8/15/18, 4:42 AM
Great story! Wish it was longer!
Anonymous
8/15/18, 12:11 AM
Wish we could see Anthony loses but his failsafe helped both in the end. At least, hope to see a smart investigative journalist become a Buldges Boy, working for a great evil. After his failsafe worked, great to see whether each of them would see their victory truely victorious or miss intense pleasures : )
8/14/18, 10:09 PM
Im not a fan at all of the feminization. In fact it sort of ruined things.
Anonymous
8/14/18, 8:55 PM
I didn't enjoy the ending either. The over feminization killed it.
Anonymous
8/14/18, 8:43 PM
More like this, please
8/14/18, 8:05 PM
Simple idea wonderfully done. And very arousing. Thank you!
Anonymous
8/14/18, 4:49 PM
I am sorry, but the feminization killed it for me.
MalSkin
8/14/18, 4:37 PM
if I am honest I was not sure about this series to start with, but have stuck with it and each chapter is getting better and better - Thanks
Anonymous
8/14/18, 3:36 PM
I’m always concerned that these amazing stories will just stop, like that superhero hit from last month. To the author please keep going. It’s a great premise with realistic characters that’s is t about turning a hot guy ugly it some of the other less than ideal (to me) plots.