Recent Comments

Jake
1/18/19, 10:53 AM
Great! loved the sci fi and exploration angle. It built up really nicely, and felt so good to join as a brood father, giving my male body and cum to the service of the community and its king.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/18/19, 6:15 AM
Getting better and better. Excellent story of how to break a boy!
Dec 31, 2018
ForgottenCradle
1/18/19, 5:44 AM
so,now I hope the movie lives up to the parody
1/18/19, 4:08 AM
Thank you everyone for your awesome words. <3. This definitely blew up more than I was expecting. I have to admit I didn't really think it was going to get much attention since I was, really, just writing something that was oozing with self-indulgence. But I am so glad you all enjoyed the story. I may revisit the universe at some point in the future, but I can't promise anything! But there will definitely be more hot insect action if I do so. :P.
1/18/19, 3:51 AM
This is so bizarre and so hot. I'm not one to like insects...and yet, the seduction capture and rendering of Chris is so amazing. The sequence of being impregnated and birthing is so hot and crazy!
Anonymous
1/18/19, 1:28 AM
Loved this, but the end was so abrupt! It felt like it was just getting started and all of a sudden it was over :(
Jb
1/18/19, 12:39 AM
makes me wonder if Tomas truly felt that way about prisoners or if peter made him feel that way then wormed the hypnosis in after implanting a rape
LeadPb
1/18/19, 12:16 AM
I’m in on this with David S and Razz TFs, don’t usually think about ants in any sexual way, but the wonderfully written gradual mind-control just makes me… SCHWING! Perhaps a short sequel containing other males (and females) with various personalities and backgrounds, and the subsequent corruption of their morals would be mind numbingly hot. :)
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
1/17/19, 11:01 PM
Love open humiliation going on, wish that was me there.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 10:53 PM
thats how mafia works.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 10:35 PM
Das Doktor ! When do we start ? :)
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 9:57 PM
I love the gradual mind transformation - interesting with lots of teases!
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 9:51 PM
Hmmm.....those staticky TV screens...is there something there? Like mind control messages, perhaps? Good start! I just wish it had muscle growth as well, but that may be coming later.....?
Absman420
1/17/19, 9:43 PM
I LOVE THIS!!! well done -- keep going please!
Dec 27, 2016
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 9:11 PM
I LOVED this! The idea for revenge "as a benefit", growing huge muscles and hair - and sexy!! Very well done revenge story - the warlock pushed every button Aaron had in the course of getting his revenge - muscle, huge size and strength, hair and looking like Aaron's own family! Zing! I'd like to meet the narrator and talk about a little "revenge" for myself! Great job, Garrix!
Dec 8, 2018
1/17/19, 8:53 PM
You're absolutely right, Mdlftr. It's the repeated exposure to the subliminal messages in the music playing on the gym's soundsystem that brainwashes the narrator. And of course the same hypnotic music was playing on the workout files Dave sent to the narrator.
Dec 8, 2018
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 8:46 PM
You are very good with both the muscle descriptions and the descriptions of the growing mind control. One question I had with this story - was the narrator changed by the music blasting over the PA system? He only heard the message on his friend's player for a few minutes. Was that intended to be enough to change him? He started to change BEFORE he ever got the shirt or the player or spoke to Master Wayne. I love the muscle growth associated with mind control stories - please keep writing them!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 8:36 PM
Totally serious story, right? I mean, no sarcasm or nothing, right?! Bro!! Thumbs up for an unusual take on a familiar story. DUDE!
1/17/19, 6:42 PM
Nice work, keep it up
Anonymous
1/17/19, 6:22 PM
What's happening in the next installment? I find the story super hot and would love to see it being continued !
Anonymous
1/17/19, 5:58 PM
I want to see him refuse his new condition till he ends up with balls the size of grapefruits (at least) and he and his friend fucks. damn im getting hard just thinking about it xD
Anonymous
1/17/19, 4:30 PM
please continue this
Anonymous
1/17/19, 4:04 PM
Das war wundervoll. I can't wait to see how life changes.
jemsea13
1/17/19, 6:56 AM
Loved it. I sure hope there's more to come!!!!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 5:39 AM
damn this was hot. you write so well!
1/17/19, 4:26 AM
I'm not even into all of these kinks, but I couldn't *not* read this. Amazing writing on all points, but especially worldbuilding!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 3:46 AM
i wish you wouldve focus on the hypnosis more. its a good story though, would love to see u continue
Anonymous
1/17/19, 3:28 AM
Nope, don't get the whole degradation and humiliation thing. Was hoping the story was going to reveal itself to be a break down and rebuild better story, but it's gone lower than I care to follow.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 3:27 AM
An interesting SciFi story with an unforeseen outcome.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 2:15 AM
more please