Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/30/19, 7:17 PM
Another masterpiece from that deviant swine of a writer. Roll on springtime hogs.
1/30/19, 2:25 PM
i really enjoyed reading this chapter, it was good to see an update on Dave and i like the way that Dave is acting....part of me would like to see John getting drawn in...sort of a back fire
Anonymous
1/30/19, 9:56 AM
Great new part - thanks for writing and posting it. I must admit that I enjoyed the first two more - but that's just personal taste I think and it's still a great sequel. How about if there was another new story line around Steve? Like another person was already manipulating him into changing like he was in this part and made him start to work as security guard. Implying that either the barber or another third person/or institution/... behind it. And then we could see how the transformation continues with John playing around with him. Perhaps something goes wrong? Can it be saved? :)
Flattop Bear
1/30/19, 9:46 AM
This story and the first story is such a turn on for me. I like storyline very much and hope to read more.
Flattop Bear
1/30/19, 9:46 AM
This story and the first story is such a turn on for me. I like storyline very much and hope to read more.
Jan 13, 2019
Anonymous
1/30/19, 9:44 AM
great story Boss
Anonymous
1/30/19, 7:27 AM
the incest is best
UchihaDEMS
1/30/19, 6:22 AM
Know that if the tables were turned, I would show Wolf no mercy~
Martin
1/30/19, 6:04 AM
Willie, if you delete a stories's series, it will always fall back to it's title. So two stories with the same title will always end up as a series. Only way to resolve this is to use different titles or a manual series name.
Anonymous
1/30/19, 5:46 AM
Hot!! Great story.
ND1
1/30/19, 5:17 AM
Lol, it's not meant to be me, guys. I just like writing from the sub perspective because I like seeing the world change. Not saying the other guy *isn't* me though. ;-)
1/30/19, 4:49 AM
this is a great series and I hope it continues.
firesix
1/30/19, 3:17 AM
There was even a girl! Imagine my shock! :P
Anonymous
1/30/19, 2:24 AM
100% agree with the above comments!
1/30/19, 12:51 AM
The discord chat is legit real, but I don't see ND1 getting taken quite so easy.
1/30/19, 12:50 AM
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
1/30/19, 12:46 AM
I like how you brought a mind control story not to a made up scene, but to our scene. What better place for a Master to start getting his slaves than here?
Anonymous
1/30/19, 12:09 AM
Apparently I need to find this discord chat!
1/29/19, 11:49 PM
As short as this was, I really liked it. I liked that you kinda broke the fourth wall and what you did with it after. Good job. :)
Marktree6
1/29/19, 11:18 PM
Apart from the brothers sex - i love this series. & looking forward to seeing where it goes in the coffee shop
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 11:15 PM
Great humor: "Despite his confused feelings, Otto could not help but smile at this remark. Klaus patted the handsome young peasant’s hand. “That’s better, darling. You have a very pretty face when you smile… Don’t spoil your lovely looks by being an old sulky pants…” Otto laughed."
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 11:07 PM
I love the grimly humorous comments on the action: Otto looked down at the bureaucrat’s crumpled body and whistled appreciatively. “Now that’s what I call seriously ‘fucked up’…”
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 10:57 PM
Igor's back story is very interesting! It is a great lead up to the trip to Europe and to our vampire buddy, Vlad Tepes! I'll admit I did not see that coming! Great writing and build up! The description of the end of the "silly old priest of Osiris who converted Lord Tadese is humorous: as well as appropriately chilling: “Egypt was occupied by the Romans at the time and the silly old thing got caught feeding on a centurion one evening and was immediately arrested. They crucified him that night and, as soon as the sun rose, his body burst into flames and burnt to ashes…”
Anonymous
1/29/19, 10:45 PM
I loved the vampire humor! (Not being able to see your reflection being such a nuisance...) I also love the political commentary on the state of the times during the revolutionary year of 1848: “Europe really has become a complete bore. In peacetime we are plagued by bureaucracy and in wartime we are threatened with destruction. All this recent unrest and revolution is jarring my already beleaguered nerves. We need to travel to somewhere less modern, more uncivilized, more anarchic, where regulation and the rule of law hardly touch the lives of those who live there…” Spoken like a true aristocrat! I can't wait to see what happens next ......Look out, Mark Twain and also the Vampire Lestat! Someone from "the old country" is coming for a visit!
Anonymous
1/29/19, 8:53 PM
!!!
absman420
1/29/19, 6:09 PM
MORE, SIR!
Anonymous
1/29/19, 5:47 PM
damn thats hot
Aug 1, 2016
absman420
1/29/19, 5:29 PM
This is a good story, SIR. I like the character waking up to a complete new reality. Worked well.
ForgottenCradle
1/29/19, 4:23 PM
certainly not enough comments. this is a hidden gem. I love the concept and hope it will be continued
Anonymous
1/29/19, 3:58 PM
I remember reading this when it was posted, and hoped that follow up chapters were coming. But they never came. ENCORE, author! MORE, PLEASE. It's a great story. There's a whole office of men to seduce. Get to it.