Recent Comments

10/19/23, 10:53 AM
Wouldn't be nice to have the living latex becomes sentient as he merges with Liam and they evolve their program to self-replicate into others and control their changes too !
10/19/23, 7:27 AM
Yes make him femme please x
10/19/23, 6:58 AM
Always love the Eden oil showing guys how fantastic the natural need of dominance and submitting can be. I was really caught off guard by the blackmail and theft. That Tommy and Trevor were either Eden rejects with access to the oil or active students but taking the wrong lessons and abusing their status and gifts. Curious to see more and dig deeper into what's going on there in Vegas. Will future stories follow the dealing with what happened with John and Daniel or explain just who Tommy and Trevor are and what they're doing. Can't wait to find out.
7/26/23, 7:37 PM
I still hope Harvey and Wash become some kind of lovers; whatever Wash's size is.

10/19/23, 6:42 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) We'll see. Whatever happens, hopefully it'll be fun.
7/26/23, 11:15 PM
Or he gets so small that the only way to keep him safe is for Harvey to push wash down his urethra.

10/19/23, 6:42 AM
@[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) That may be fun, but I'm not sure if that would be "safe"
10/19/23, 6:12 AM
I would love to see how Liam gets free and does with Steve whatever the new Bull wants to
10/19/23, 5:30 AM
Can't wait for second part, will Liam become rubber shut drone?
Throne
10/19/23, 3:22 AM
Thank you all for your responses. Cuckolding and forced gay are two themes I love to play with.
10/19/23, 2:39 AM
Love the shrinking! Was hoping he'd get a second zap from the shrink ray!

Throne
10/19/23, 3:20 AM
@[Wildheart](/user/show/556362) Ha, ha. A repeat zap WOULD have been fun. Maybe combined with a shot from the notorious rump-growth beam. Instant bubble butt!
10/19/23, 3:10 AM
I'm so glad to see you're back with another chapter just as hot as the last, can't wait for part 2! I'd love to see Liam become his daddy's domineering breeding bull son.
10/19/23, 3:06 AM
Really well done!
10/19/23, 2:57 AM
More please!!
10/19/23, 2:42 AM
Delightful
10/19/23, 1:52 AM
Please continue this! I need to know what happens next!
10/19/23, 1:28 AM
I can’t wait for Daddy Fenton to get fucked!! Please come out with more of these!
10/19/23, 1:22 AM
This is so hot!!! Please make the next one
10/19/23, 12:54 AM
This is so hot!! More please!
10/19/23, 12:41 AM
This was so hot!!! Please make more!
10/19/23, 12:40 AM
Man, I was expecting this to be an Eden academy recruiting story, but the twisted theft + corruption story is even hotter.
10/19/23, 12:22 AM
If i had a nickel for each time someone on this site wrote an eritic gay story (this year) based on that particular Goosebumps book, I'd have two nickels; which isn't a lot, but its still weird its happened twice. As a fan of said book, i loved this. The way they see the transformations in the mirror before they happen, how the light triggers it, and the ambiguity of how much of their minds/ personalities its actually changing are all really well done. In the original book, and the other story on this site, there are people in the mirror who are trying to get out. They use the invisibility/ wishes to change places with their victims. This story doesn't have that; we don't know what the goal of the mirror and mirror figures is, but they don't seem to change places or get out of the mirror. Which i think adds to the story. Since we don't know what the goal is, we don't know what is actually changing. The story isn't actually labeled "dumbing" and Ben claims he's still himself, just bigger and hornier, so we don't know if Gabe it's actually right about his personally and intelligence changing. While Ben does most of the changes to Gabe, Gabe is the one who makes the final change. The mirror had been making them feel good, plus seems to have given them dreams, but we never saw it explicitly control their actions. All of which to say the ambiguity adds a lot to the story and improves on an already interesting concept. Great job. Definitely saving this for later and coming back to it.
10/18/23, 11:35 PM
Baralai, I am always amazed at how inventive your stories are -- and so amazingly hot! Never in a million years would I have imagined a halfway house for troubled young men, led by a female version of Dame Edna, would keep me going from start to finish, but here we are. You deserve to know how great your stuff is. Just...find an editor ;-)
10/18/23, 11:15 PM
We really need more himbo DILFs in the world, thank you for your service!
10/18/23, 10:38 PM
Fantastic job! That book embedded itself deep in my brain too. I love that Gabe's the one who took the final step. I gotta explore more creepy houses.
10/18/23, 10:13 PM
I don't remember the original Goosebumps tale but this stands so well on its own. Well done! The trick to get him back and the way the mirror defended itself. The muscle growth and the price of it was a hot dynamic.
10/18/23, 9:20 PM
Terrific muscle growth story -- really got into the head of the protagonist. Well written.
10/18/23, 9:13 PM
The writing could be a bit less jokey/tongue in cheek, but I really liked the idea and concept for this one!
10/18/23, 9:11 PM
什么乱七八糟的一大堆东西?男人有阴道吗?还有怀孕?
Kip
10/18/23, 8:31 PM
I love how in your establishing shot you make sure the reader knows how much Excalibur sucks. 😁
10/18/23, 8:12 PM
Mmmmmm hope there come's more start is damn hot
10/18/23, 7:52 PM
Really great take on this genre of story. Really liked how the protagonist fought against the corrupting influence and basically stayed an innocent. I was actually worried for him until the very end so it was a great resolution.