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Anonymous
10/23/23, 8:37 AM
This is great looking forward to the next part!
10/23/23, 3:26 AM
An interesting story. I liked most of the transformations of those who deserved them but it was extremely unfair to the one guy plucked and transformed at random.
10/23/23, 3:06 AM
Wonderful Ending!
Anonymous
10/23/23, 1:48 AM
This was great!! I’d love to see the next part. When he goes home and pulls his hunky father aside to help him with something upstairs in his room. His mom asks if he’s alright concerned but he just looks down at his daddies fat bulge and his hole twitches excitedly at the knowledge of it being stretched and fucked hard by his father’s fat cock. He leans in to kiss his mom’s cheek as his hand reaches down and grabs his daddies package and grasps it softly. His dad jumps back a little but lets his boys hand stay there
Anonymous
10/23/23, 1:22 AM
Awesome story and I love that potential sequel hook!
10/23/23, 12:40 AM
I loved this very good hope you continue with the family reunion also what other monsters are out there
Anonymous
10/22/23, 11:48 PM
Phenomenal
Anonymous
10/22/23, 11:43 PM
Excellent work
Oct 14, 2023
10/15/23, 8:53 PM
I think I've gotten used to a certain tone in MC stories where the controller is either all-powerful or extremely smart and strategic so that the chance of his plans failing is very low. And even when those plans fail, it's due to a twist or a takeover and that becomes the main focus of the narrative. In here there's a controller who's not completely sure that he's going to get it his way. He's probably done this enough times to know the steps, but he's still aware of how thin is the line between fucking some hot ass and getting punched in the face by some shocked patron. Jeremy felt human thanks to this and it was very fresh, specially since he is not the main character. Now, Charles is the main character. Seeing the scenes through him was very interesting and hot- It got specially nice once they were back to his hotel room. He's almost just a dummy, being handled and directed by the waiter's expert hands. His extreme focus on the spiral and then his need to have his hole filled was a great combination. That these somehow were kept, was a great gift to him and to us readers ;) Thanks for this interesting MC bite! It was surely delicious.

10/22/23, 11:06 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thank you for the detailed review and analysis. I should have sent all my drafts to you for comment prior to posting.
Martin
10/22/23, 8:12 PM
Why don't you embed the images directly in the story? The image icon (the third icon from the right in the editor) allows you to embed your images directly to the story. Let me know if you need help doing that!

Nova
10/22/23, 10:36 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I actually found the images to be formatted weirdly. At least on mobile that is. I felt like the wrap around text and photos looked weird and broke the flow of visuals. Plus I felt like the image quality was downgraded
10/22/23, 10:13 PM
Great start! I look forward to reading more!
Oct 21, 2023
10/22/23, 7:25 PM
Thank you for this. I love Wererats and hope you write loads more stories about them.
Ab3
10/22/23, 12:42 PM
Wowww that's hot man... Need few more installments in this

10/22/23, 6:52 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) Don't think I could pump out more in this before Halloween but I did leave it somewhat open since eventually I wouldn't mind expanding on who the ghost is and actually having someone win the game. Maybe next year!
10/22/23, 12:04 AM
What an amazing Halloween story! I must confess at some points I thought "I wouldn't mind being Mason for a while" :grin: But I guess there would be no fun for Lewis if I didn't at least feel a certain degree of humiliation, so he'd probably make things worse from me. This story has the name of Princec's written all over: Charismatic main characters, inventive situations, and lots of sexy action. A 10/10 without a doubt! Oh! And it also has a literal **cum fountain** :satisfied:! You can't imagine how much that made me giggle. I had a lot of fun and I did enjoy this a lot! Nice to see this is centered in the same universe as Strange Happenings. I wonder how should we call it "The Princecverse?" ;) I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more of Lewis, Amir, or any other new mythical creatures' adventures :heart:

10/22/23, 6:19 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) So glad you enjoyed! I dunno about "The PrinceCverse" but yes, I'm slowly building out a silly & supernatural corner of my writing. Maybe they'll interact, maybe they won't. But definitely have some inklings of ideas haha
10/21/23, 6:27 PM
This was hilarious and very hot, which is a tough combo to make work! Using Lewis was inspired.

10/22/23, 6:09 PM
@[Spencer](/user/show/1315273) Thank you! I always feel like my style of ridiculousness + smut doesn't exactly come across well, but glad you thought so! Lol Honestly, I've had this idea on the back burner for so long but didn't know how to crack it. Then I came across Lewis and everything just clicked into place
10/22/23, 5:08 PM
Man I wish you would have continued this!
10/22/23, 3:21 PM
Thank you for the new chapter. It would be interesting to read the chapter also from the side of people whom Chester controls, it seems to me that it would be especially sexy that they are all conscious somewhere in the depths of their thoughts, but they cannot control themselves and their bodies fulfilling Chester’s wishes. It would also be interesting to know how you represent the heroes of your story through a neural network (pictures)
10/22/23, 3:15 PM
Always the best
Anonymous
10/22/23, 10:08 AM
Is this erroneously tagged gay to straight? None of the other chapters are. Just wondering whether I should read it or not.

10/22/23, 1:44 PM
@Anonymous Definitely a mistake. No one’s gonna be turned straight in my stories 😜
10/22/23, 11:37 AM
Awesome Job!!! So happy to see the story continue. Cant wait to see what’s next (:
Ab3
10/22/23, 10:30 AM
Need more well written story dude.. whre is sex.. wanted Peter part to be more active in sex and syalov converting more n more
Ab3
10/22/23, 7:00 AM
It's going good.. will love to see Bryan slowly getting converted in the same horny office guys and having fun for a while but coming to reality after sometime. Jason needs to get fucked by everyone and all str8 begging each other to get fucked. Bryan also
10/22/23, 6:46 AM
A hot tail of playing the game where the house always wins. The changes and candies compounding. Does the ghost _really_ want a worthy opponent and for them to win?
10/22/23, 6:04 AM
Thanks for posting. Great to see the climax of the series and all the boys happily at home in the L dimension as eager playthings!
mic
10/22/23, 5:41 AM
wow so fucking hot, please more, hope the skater uses humilate him more, and he gets stuffed in school with dildo and penis in all holes all day, please more
10/22/23, 5:34 AM
oh fuck, I love how Chester humiliates Luke! I especially like how you draw contrast between them, the fat ugly older underling and his younger handsome, powerful CEO who is a ladiesman and father. The reversal of power and the difference between them, between someone who is so privileged and powerful, made into nothing by Chester is so hot! That taboo of someone who is so powerful and dominant and straight made to serve and degraded at his expense, stripped of pride and dignity! The only thing hotter would be if Chester is feeling particularly sadistic, is restoring Luke's mind so he can recognize whats happening but still helpless to disobey, and fuck with him while Luke is conscious and miserable. Making two personas, Dumbfuck and Luke, and Turning off his mind off and on whenever he wants to fuck Dumbfuck or Luke whenever he wants! Any chance of that? Maybe a concious Luke can join the similar Bryan and the two can contemplate the horror and absolute degradation of their situation. Of course, I'm also hoping not only Chester but also Bryan and maybe some of Luke's other employees can humiliate and dominate Luke as well...
10/21/23, 11:53 PM
Now we are entering into the deranged territory! I love what Chester is doing with Jason and what he did with Luke, the moment of the CEO with Bryan is short, but very hot! I had forgotten that poor Bryan gets soft unless he touch himself, poor boy! Happy Halloween in advance :jack_o_lantern:, and good luck with your party, I hope you have fun. :jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern::jack_o_lantern:

10/22/23, 4:20 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Thank you!! 🥰🥰🥰👻👻👻
10/22/23, 4:06 AM
So want to hear more please
10/22/23, 3:36 AM
Amazing writing. But was so excited foot worship was included in this chapter as well as the humiliation fetish for Luke!
mic
10/22/23, 2:50 AM
Fuck what a great idea and work and story, please more , can’t wait , more sink meetings , humilatikn , more gag reflex testing , hope he sucks a lot of cocks , and the students fuck his throat with giant dildos and he gets a Devil big perv new toothpaste and bigger brush , please write more