Recent Comments

10/21/23, 8:00 PM
I’m enjoying this and very excited for the next chapter!

10/25/23, 10:39 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Thanks! Appreciate the appreciation ;) Next chapter coming over the next day or two.
10/21/23, 6:32 AM
I am now so happy you did this chapter from Matt's perspective! I was totally mistaken in my last comment. This was probably the best chapter yet. Really great work!

10/25/23, 10:38 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Ah so glad you liked it! I was quietly confident the Matt chapter would be different to what you thought, but couldn't know for sure. Thanks so much for sticking with me and i hope you enjoy the next chapter.
10/25/23, 10:36 PM
each of your stories are super hot! please keep writing
10/25/23, 7:56 PM
This felt super rushed. Would love to see more detail and build up.
10/25/23, 1:50 AM
Aww, I was hoping to read that wiccan got put under the handlers control and secretly the paddle forces them under Too

10/25/23, 1:50 AM
@[Joseph22](/user/show/10010520) Great chapter either way, love how important wiccan is

10/25/23, 7:07 PM
@[Joseph22](/user/show/10010520) That would have been truly devious. To escape a spanking villain's clutches, only to be spanked by the one they turned to for help and end up under his control anyway. I'm not sure any hero would have escaped that!
Jun 4, 2022
10/19/23, 9:19 AM
I've been lookin for a new job..maybe I should apply?

10/19/23, 10:50 AM
@[cigar_muscle](/user/show/17400) Mmmm looking fot 1 hot cigar smoking dad in leather is there 1 in the list😈😋🔥🔥

10/25/23, 4:48 PM
@[Leatherjohn](/user/show/10043300) right here man!
Lulu
10/25/23, 4:21 PM
Finally a story from a non-first person perspective, awesome.
mic
10/25/23, 4:05 PM
great work, please more, own him, you should know who he is, film him, blackmail him, sell his ass to others, and take 2 of his 4 paychecks every month, and dont let him know who you are so you can smile everytime you see him
Jun 28, 2007
mic
10/25/23, 3:57 PM
so fucking hot, where can i read the original 10 papers? please more tricking and playing doctor, please write more, love your ideas style
10/25/23, 3:16 PM
Ooh thinga are getting interesting. Love the build up for his discovery/acceptance. And i find it interesting how fast his thought of converting his entourage and friends to be a part of his harem. Lol he works fast.
Apr 28, 2022
Anonymous
10/25/23, 2:42 PM
Amazing story!
10/25/23, 11:20 AM
🔥💦
10/25/23, 12:29 AM
I keep cuming back to this story. I have loved Tom and his men ever since I was a young closeted muscle queer and discovered back issues of Physique Pictorial in a decrepit used book store in a Raymond Chandletesque part of Los Angeles. His G-rated but very suggestive inages of happy young muscle lads doing masculine things and lusting for each other with joy and no shame were a revelation! Water to this parched scared fat boy in the grim days of early AIDS fear and hate! Thank you! 😀

10/25/23, 10:12 AM
@[Bjort](/user/show/10002297) I can never give this story enough love — it’s one of my personal favorites. I’m glad to read of our similar experience coming of age in the 80’s at the height of the AIDS epidemic. ToF was an important respite for me, too. Thank you for your comments!!!!
10/25/23, 1:27 AM
Awesome story! So hot :hot_face:

Nova
10/25/23, 7:14 AM
@[Keliborn](/user/show/10029493) Thanks! I’m hoping more people feel the same way. It really encourages me to write more :hand_over_mouth:
10/25/23, 6:37 AM
I hope Bryan gets a chance to fight back. Please, give him some wishes too!
10/25/23, 4:40 AM
Deliciously wicked predicament. I almost felt sorry for Alex at the end. Well, almost. Again, I look forward to future developments in this series! Great work!
JJJK
10/21/23, 10:20 AM
New Chapter this weekend?

10/22/23, 4:18 AM
@JJJK Negative. I'm pretty busy at the moment. I'll try first week next month, but as usual, no promises.

X
10/25/23, 2:55 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Love the new images you added to the old chapters, are you gonna add anymore? Really want to see what Cody look like!

10/25/23, 2:58 AM
@X Thanks for pointing this out. I thought I added pics for everyone. I'll add him later on Ch.7.
10/25/23, 2:30 AM
i love this.
10/22/23, 8:05 AM
This is soooo horny and hilarious at the same time. I don’t know how you pull it off, but it’s a wonder. It must be mad science, methinks. Particular love this sentence: “He rubbed one like a trackpoint on a laptop, making a little floating cursor of pleasure swirl through my bright thoughts.” Thanks for sharing this gem with us. Can’t wait for more.

10/25/23, 12:57 AM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Hey thanks, I appreciate the comment! Feedback is what keeps me going, and this story hasn't been as popular with readers as far as I can tell.
10/24/23, 4:09 PM
I saw the title and I just had to read it. And it turned out to be way hotter than I was expecting. Outstanding work, honestly.

10/25/23, 12:22 AM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) I can see why! We'll chalk it up to coincidence! :wink: Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
10/24/23, 11:58 PM
Any thoughts on when another chapter might drop? Please!
10/24/23, 9:52 PM
So nice to see that Martin got what he wanted in the end and that the men were all erased and turned into drones. Nothing better than irrevocable permanence, after all!
10/24/23, 7:07 PM
A promising debut. Well done.
louise faggot
10/24/23, 2:45 PM
love the contol uoyou have Dad
Oct 21, 2023
10/24/23, 2:31 PM
The story is enjoyable but i advise you to paragraph more. It is very hard to read when it's just one giant block of text.
10/23/23, 8:20 PM
👍👍👍👍👍

10/24/23, 1:24 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) :+1::+1::+1::+1::+1:
10/24/23, 1:18 PM
I agree with Cutlerfan, a little unfair to the innocents but a nice story of balding. I would have liked a slowing down of the physical transformations as the pace was pretty rapid but that was just me. Look forward to more of your work.
10/24/23, 8:55 AM
So intriguing!
10/24/23, 6:38 AM
Gradual changes, muscle growth, and romantic to boot! Derek, you are a master.

10/24/23, 6:56 AM
Thanks @[Max Ryon](/user/show/19159), I was just thinking I needed a dopamine hit ;) I don’t think I’ve read this story since I posted it… maybe 12 years ago? I might have to give it another look.
Jan 4, 2007
10/24/23, 6:23 AM
Great story, I find myself coming back to it repeatedly!