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10/21/23, 6:36 PM
This story is amazing!

10/30/23, 12:26 PM
@[Transformation Sovereign](/user/show/10043554) Thank you.
10/29/23, 4:53 PM
Ahhhhh!!! I need Ryan eager for dad/bro time!! :P

10/29/23, 5:04 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Next chapter 😈

10/29/23, 6:23 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) YEEES. No shade to Andrew, but I think Daddy and Ryan deserve all the love. Especially now that we know Ryan is even thicker than Dad...he'll need extra attention hehehe

10/30/23, 11:59 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Personally I think the way he put caring for ari and support for aris relationships at the top makes me think things will progress
10/29/23, 5:40 PM
Man...hate that the uploads stopped on such a major cliffhanger.

10/30/23, 8:44 AM
@[thesaxcat](/user/show/10005285) Don't worry it will be here before you know it. He is an awesome writer maybe he is just wanting to make it perfect

10/30/23, 11:53 AM
@[thesaxcat](/user/show/10005285) Hey y’all! Sorry for the delay! Unfortunately I got covid last week and am feeling rather miserable - but I promise to get you the next chapter this week! Sorry to leave you hanging!
10/30/23, 10:49 AM
Man there’s no moreee 😩
10/30/23, 10:48 AM
Still one of my favourite stories. Love the slow burn
10/29/23, 7:25 PM
The more I read the more invested I am with these three brothers :heart: The first part, with Aaron and Matt in the bed, was so very sweet! Hot too, specially with Matt being so hesitant about his lust over his little brother, and then helping him feel good. I felt sorry for Jack in the second part. I have been feeling that way all through the story. While Matt and Aaron had a healthy development getting closer, Jack got the worst parts of the bargain. I'm not sure how the humiliation kink will help lol but at least he won't have to suffer that much while he's with his family ;) Matt becoming a sub for Aaron is something I'll have to see too. So far, the big muscled stud's attitude looks promising. And, did I read a hint of future Father / Son action? :grin: It only makes sense though, being that they've been told to go deep in the incest route.

10/30/23, 10:19 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) I'm really enjoying writing the Matt and Aaron scenes i must admit. To come clean, when i was mapping out this story i hadn't quite intended the current levels of teenage-esque romantic fumbling the two are going through, but it seemed to flow naturally as i wrote (and oftentimes rewrote) their scenes. Yes Jack certainly has had a bit of a rough time. Middle child syndrome eh? ;) Let's see if things turn around for him in the next chapter. Sorry what? Hint of some father/son action? I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about. *nonchalant whistling* :lying_face:
10/28/23, 7:10 PM
SO GOOD! Each chapter keeps getting better and better. I love Jack's new love for humiliation. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this is heading.

10/30/23, 10:10 AM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Ha, it seems our kinks are relatively compatible ;) I was unsure how Jack and Matt's changes in this chapter would be received (i was of course confident Aaron's changes would be liked!), but considering this chapter got far higher ratings than the last i apparently needn't have been so concerned. Thanks for the positive feedback and really hope the story will continue to hold your interest!
10/26/23, 11:23 AM
So far my most favorite chapter. Matt's transition from selfish prankster to loving big bro is both hot and lovely to watch. His confusion, lust, and love are very endearing. So is the way he justifies all of his actions as nothing related to what he's truly feeling. Aaron being more open to replacing his intense study sessions for intense jerking-off sessions is a great move forward to him too! Also, I can picture him going around the house in just his skimpy jockstrap, with his cute twink body displayed for all to see. What a great view that must be! He's got some lucky brothers. And the way it ended: nice! It was a really great day for these two, now let's see how their night goes! ;) P.S. Pace, structure and dialogues were good. I was able to fully focus on the story, so congrats on that too! :heart:

10/30/23, 10:05 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thank you again Piko for your kind words and for your feedback. I started writing this on a whim, and despite being on this site for more time than i care to admit i've shamefully never visited the comment sections of the series, either to leave comments or read them. So it was an extremely welcome surprise when user-comment emails began popping up in my inbox. I'm really glad you and others are enjoying the pacing. I was worried that it was too much of a slow burn for the site but happy to see that people such as yourself are enjoying it. I really hope the story continues to titillate as it progresses!
Bitchboy
10/30/23, 9:40 AM
Man these is incredible I love it so much my mind races and I drool at the thought of this so much. I wish I was callum or one of those boys🤤🤭
Anonymous
10/27/23, 7:59 AM
One of the best stories on this website ever

10/30/23, 7:41 AM
@Anonymous Thank you so much!!!
10/30/23, 6:42 AM
Someone need to lower Ari's morality more so that he won't hesitate to corrupt his family... But I guess it wouldn't be fun :p Excellent writing as always! I'm REALLY looking forward for the next chapter
10/30/23, 4:34 AM
😍😍
10/30/23, 3:53 AM
A simple but exquisite story! Looking forward to reading more。
10/30/23, 3:45 AM
YEEEESSS ITS BACK
10/29/23, 11:46 PM
Would love a follow up on this
10/29/23, 10:53 PM
Yes yes yes. Ryan, Ari and Dad. I mean we could add Andrew, but i feel like the same with Ari, he could go. But yeah looking forward for the orgy.
10/29/23, 10:09 PM
Great continuation! I'm wondering if Chad will use his demonic powers on the athletes that he was eyeing before...
10/29/23, 10:00 PM
Living for this! Ryan is so sweet and I cant wait for him to join the action. I think hes my new fave!
10/29/23, 9:46 PM
This is so hot and your ref pics are fine af I’m looking forward to more and hopefully some tasty mental corruption into a sweaty hung dumb jock
10/29/23, 7:56 AM
Dumb jock vampire :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I love the campfire vibe this series has.

10/29/23, 9:40 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I thought you would love it. I really liked the idea of a vampire being a dumb bro rather than a suave aristocrat. :hand_over_mouth: Yeah, I am surprised there aren't many stories on either this contest or the previous ones who went for an anthology aspect. You tell me horror, and stuff like *Goosebumps*, *Are you afraid of the dark?* or *Tales from the Crypt* are definitively up there, but it's mostly halloween parties and trick-or-treating. :confused: Sure, those are peak Halloween, but there isn't a lot of other stuff.
10/29/23, 8:48 PM
The transformation where realy nice...
Enchanting-Sorcerer-Boy
10/29/23, 7:56 PM
This is great! Can’t wait to read more
10/29/23, 1:32 PM
This is a really great story. If I could make a suggestion, if you make a sequel, explain why the dad is distant? Is he normally attracted to his son? Did he set this all up? I would love to read more about Ben and his exploits with his dad.

10/29/23, 7:19 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Thanks! I admit I didn't expand on some details since this was conceptualized as a one-shot story. But there are certainly enough loose ends that I might add to this in the future!
Ben
10/29/23, 6:27 PM
Great story!! I love pikmin too!!
Ab3
10/29/23, 5:57 PM
Waiting for father, bf and brother orgy in the woods.. please make it possible soon
10/29/23, 5:14 PM
A lot of fun and very hot. Great job!

10/29/23, 5:50 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/29/23, 4:32 AM
Outstanding story. I have to admit, I settled in for a fun read and wasn't expecting to end up being so incredibly hot given the tongue-in-cheek meta nature of it. But, scorching it ended up being. Well done. Great little twists on tropes and a traditional potential continuation option at the end. Fantastic work.

10/29/23, 5:49 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Oh, thank you for this comment! I'll admit one of my goals with this story was "I want readers to laugh hard *and* orgasm hard!" So hearing that it worked so well for you on this level (and even surprised you in the process 😁) is really great to hear. Thank you!
10/29/23, 5:45 PM
So in love with this story. Can’t wait to see it get out of hand 🥵
10/28/23, 10:39 PM
You simply MUST continue, October, November, contest or no. I could not care less. Your work is incredible and fun and sexy and charming and funny and SEXY and brainmelty and of course **SEXY**.

10/29/23, 5:18 PM
@[brium](/user/show/10011305) Hahaha thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And who knows, maybe it will continue... 😉 🎃 👻 No promises, though!
Anonymous
10/29/23, 5:04 PM
Part 9???