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Nov 3, 2019
Anonymous
11/9/19, 10:32 AM
i was really hoping for a Brad ending haha, i liked getting dominated and humiliated by
Anonymous
11/9/19, 9:18 AM
You write the hottest stories ever. This was amazing. A black dominant musky man completely obliterating a white musclechub's mind and turning him into a hole. FANTASTIC!
Anonymous
11/9/19, 9:07 AM
this is a fantastic transformation story. Well done, and thank you!
11/9/19, 8:41 AM
I get that the vignettes are suppose to be one-shots, but I really, really like this one. Please do a sequel!
Its me..
11/9/19, 7:19 AM
This is just getting more and more interesting than ever. I'm more curious what happens after.
Anonymous
11/9/19, 5:50 AM
craving that peter parker shit
Ng5hvlo4
11/9/19, 2:15 AM
This is a gemstone of a story. I love how hypnosis started this couple together and that they ended up happy together. It is an inspiration that warms my heart and makes me hope for that special someone through mutual love of hypnosis. Thank you again for such a wonderful story!
mystrangetfs@gmail.com
11/9/19, 12:12 AM
Great story! Looking forward to more.
FAN
11/8/19, 10:42 PM
Well, Bravo again........so fucking good....thank you for the journey and adventure you are taking all of us on!!!!! Can't wait for the next installment....if all the build up is this fucking good, I can only imagine the hot sex orgy scenes that hopefully are on thier way........... KEEP IT RAW……Love the dirt and musk and how you are slowly breaking Mark of his “Poshness” lol…….Now that mind has been brocken….looking forward to physical changes as he is turned into a “Real Man”……. Can’t wait for boy to be trained to be a smoker…..maybe start with 2 packs of reds as he builds to a manly cigar…….thankyou for the smoking inhaling scene please add more if it works with your story……….I will be watching for the next chapter Wow, Lord Master, you sure do deliver…….what a great erotic story and a great idea that you are sharing with the readers……please keep it going Crew and boy need to bond in dirty sex scenes please……no holds barred you are a masterful writer and the idea is awesome FUCKING AMAZING……..came twice and from what I can tell, we haven’t even gotten to the orgies yet….one of my favorite stories ever I just love this story….yet another erotic chapter as you build this little masterpiece…….so incredably hot…please keep it going because you have fans for sure
Corinthian
11/8/19, 10:16 PM
Strong writing, and uplifting too - many thanks.
Corinthian
11/8/19, 9:40 PM
Many thanks - such a good story! Very creative and subtle.
Anonymous
11/8/19, 8:49 PM
I would love to see spider man chapter after thor's
Anthony
11/8/19, 8:40 PM
im not crying. youre crying. 10/10
11/8/19, 8:25 PM
What's the problem? I like constructive criticism, so do explain what is too much present, so I can put less in the next chapter(s).
Anonymous
11/8/19, 8:07 PM
You try to read Hypno-Tales stories or mafisto and then we talk about the size or the info dumps.
Anonymous
11/8/19, 5:39 PM
to much in one story
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/8/19, 4:41 PM
ouch, that sucks, I hope you recover the computer soon
malskin
11/8/19, 4:31 PM
thanks for this chapter from the pervious chapter Bill the Boss has worked hard on Mark to get him to the point where more direct action was needed. got a sticky keyboard here. i am liking how Mark AKAA Marky was more than happy to dress in dirty jeans and wifebeater - the new Mark seems to have a evil streak in him, (“*You want this, don’t you boy?” He asked, a cruel smile creeping over his face.)* making me wonder what else Bill has got in store for Marky. i also liked how Marky went back to work as if he now part of the work gang.
11/8/19, 4:07 PM
Yes * /// * but right now someone in mu house stole my computer and I'm waiting to get it back :(
11/8/19, 4:07 PM
> why blue ball us to the big event! Trust me, I'm blue balled too. I wasn't planning a multiple part story but it is growing like that. just lie back and take the edging, I'll drain those balls... eventually!
11/8/19, 4:02 PM
This chapter has been great. Can't wait for the next one :D
11/8/19, 4:02 PM
Do you plan to continue your Will takeover story? Because both stories are really cool and I can't wait to see what happens!
Anonymous
11/8/19, 1:22 PM
It would be nice to see more of an internal conflict with the patent. to draw that out more. But a great start.
11/8/19, 12:52 PM
> is it possible we might see Loki being “adopted” by Thanos as well. Problem is that Thanos and Loki might be too similar. Both seductive and power hungry with daddie issues and Loki may have powerful enough magic to resist Thanos’ power however would love to see Loki being turned into the Hulk’s bottom bitch. I must confess to not having planned to do Loki. *Looks left and right to see who is about before whispering*: Tom Hiddleston doesnt do it for me, I only have eyes for the hunks of the MCU. Having said that you have given me an idea for Loki but it might be a while before I get to it, stay tuned...
11/8/19, 12:50 PM
Honestly I see a lot of attention on Leo and how perfect he look. Given the fact that in the novels he come from, his main personalities trait were builder and insecure, I think he will need more confidence thanks to the amulet to be in a stable relation. And if you want a submissive Sam for people to identify with, don't worry, others writer will cover for you.
Nov 8, 2019
Anonymous
11/8/19, 8:47 AM
the narrative spun wildly out of my understanding
Feb 21, 2018
11/8/19, 4:57 AM
Fucking love it.
This guy
11/8/19, 3:51 AM
OMG. This is getting good why blue ball us to the big event! Thor is getting affected by Thanos' presence. Please do others after Thor, Hawkeye would be nice and Black widow but transformed into a guy with the pussy still intact. Also, The semen of Thanos and his men are having effect on men. Might as well have men be addicted by Thanos' semen. please update faster, its really getting good.
Anonymous
11/8/19, 3:42 AM
Love it but I wish we could get as many chapters for "Stacy's Dad".
sergio10andrade@gmail.com
11/8/19, 12:13 AM
Enjoying your series and after reading about Thor is it possible we might see Loki being "adopted" by Thanos as well. Problem is that Thanos and Loki might be too similar. Both seductive and power hungry with daddie issues and Loki may have powerful enough magic to resist Thanos' power however would love to see Loki being turned into the Hulk's bottom bitch.