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Mar 6, 2020
3/9/20, 4:20 PM
Hope to read soon a deep and complete transformation of Matt (more leather please).
3/9/20, 4:16 PM
So surprised that Nick could resist the mind control
3/9/20, 4:09 PM
This is amazing man, I hope you write more soon.
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:54 PM
This story is an absolute delight. Gets me hard every time!
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:50 PM
Can't wait to see where it goes.
3/9/20, 2:29 PM
I'm glad that this series got a new chapter! Its great that we get to learn more rules about Ad's magic cum. The guy's resistance was so hot, I really love orgasm denial stories. Keep them cumming!
3/9/20, 1:11 PM
so hot! love gaining
Phil
3/9/20, 12:24 PM
This was so hot! I'd really love to see more of this
3/9/20, 10:22 AM
Absolutely, bloody brilliant. This has been hands down the best series on this entire site. It's fantastic, sad to see its been such a long time since your last post but these stories have been tremendous. Thanks for writing.
3/9/20, 10:03 AM
blessings and indeed "prayers" answered it would seem. thanks Gymuscle
Anonymous
3/9/20, 9:25 AM
nice introduction!! it was a great set up ;)
3/9/20, 5:18 AM
solid writing and super hot to read. thanks Gymuscle for all the work you put into this series. eagerly waiting for the next chapter. if this was an e-book. I'd buy it.
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:11 AM
Hot!!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:09 AM
So friggin' hot!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
3/9/20, 1:49 AM
i would like to echo the comments above... do you write on other sites?
3/9/20, 12:48 AM
Another great chapter. Love this series.
Anonymous
3/9/20, 12:45 AM
great to see it's back online!!
3/9/20, 12:31 AM
I can't believe I really liked this and found it very arousing! Rationally I keep thinking the dialogue is "Beverly Hillbillies" but I got into it. It's amazing all the different metaphors authors on this site have for penis and scrotum. I like your "meat and potatoes" - brings a wide grin to my face. :) Well done!
Anonymous
3/8/20, 11:54 PM
This was sexy! Love a boytoy tf!
3/8/20, 11:14 PM
Really enjoying this story especially without the constraints of the game. Looking forward to more kinky TF and incest. :D
Plague
3/8/20, 10:31 PM
Hello Josmith! I saw the site got taken down for a little while and want to make sure you have your stories backed-up somewhere and would like to know if you upload your fiction to other sites.
Anonymous
3/7/20, 12:00 PM
I really loved this power reversal and I hope you will play with it very well...
Anonymous
3/7/20, 10:50 AM
The Relfex App!! It looks like VIC can monitor and control James 24/7, 365 days...
Anonymous
3/7/20, 10:46 AM
Hot!
Anonymous
3/7/20, 10:24 AM
This could easily be part 1.14, it is easier to read than 1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1. Please, use normal numeration, thanks.
Mar 6, 2020
3/7/20, 8:46 AM
OMG! This story is right on topic, so close to my own sort of fantasy of losing control to a powerful hypnotist that it indeed seems like it came straight out of my own head. I think I have only marked one other story on this site as my Favorite. Without any hesitation this is a top favorite of all time of any erotic story site. I have only one complaint and that is that I read this story before you had written a second or third chapter at least. This is going to drive me crazy waiting for another chapter and perhaps another story from you. Thanks for sharing your imagination and story telling skills! So looking forward to more!!
Anonymous
3/7/20, 8:19 AM
You're amazing! I love your stories!
Anonymous
3/7/20, 6:36 AM
amazingly hot! I will get this haircut asap!
3/7/20, 4:37 AM
Nice story. Glad to see Pine on the move.
Anonymous
3/7/20, 2:23 AM
This is some real hot stuff man. I love your work!