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5/17/20, 6:42 PM
And you slowly reveal more and more of what's in store. Great story-telling as always!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 6:15 PM
Great piece, although it feels a little short. Hopefully that’s a sign that there’s more to cum ;) And thanks for going through and doing the proofread people were asking for. I skimmed over it a few hours ago and the mistakes broke the immersion, but with the additional care you’ve now put in the story shines much better :)
Anonymous
5/17/20, 5:39 PM
The buildup in the story is really good, as is seeing the characters slowly transform!
5/17/20, 5:14 PM
Thanks much, guys. I have plans for Lan & Thor! Stand by!
5/17/20, 4:46 PM
Great story! i loved the whole concept and transition, and agree with others' comments above. The only thing i wish could be more detailed and based on reality would be description of how Earl managed the mind control. i expect that's just a pipe dream, but one i would so like to really experience, especially with a hot intelligent guy like Earl!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 4:38 PM
I'm with Mutabear, I sincerely hope that there is more to come and we can find out what happens to Hanson. Keep up the good work and thank you for posting this.
May 17, 2020
5/17/20, 4:12 PM
@FeedYourHead, funny enough, I've never seen "Nightmare on Elm Street," so that wasn't a conscious reference. But I did have a number of influences, including AgainstMyWill's "Boypussy" and this NSFW short film: https://vimeo.com/196620429.
5/17/20, 4:04 PM
Very hot! please post more soon, you need to proof read your stuff or get someone to do it for you.
May 17, 2020
5/17/20, 3:42 PM
The King returns! This was amazingly hot, Hypnothrill. Wooo! (Love the "Nightmare on Elm Street" references, too!)
5/17/20, 3:39 PM
Hey, just thought I'd point out that ' is for feet and " is for inches. I think having a ten foot cock is a little excessive. 😝
5/17/20, 3:30 PM
i'm loving this so much.. super hot
5/17/20, 3:17 PM
HOT!!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 2:40 PM
So hot
5/17/20, 2:29 PM
I bet he will make the whole school gay
May 17, 2020
5/17/20, 1:52 PM
fuck i want to become a slutty man whore as well
5/17/20, 1:42 PM
Of course I like your stories, M. Greene. I don't think there's another author on this site who is so attentive to ethnic and geographic diversity. As in all your stories it adds something to everyone's character. All your jump-cuts remind me: Just the other day I was reading a quote from a famous writer (can't recall whom) who was lamenting that writing is dead. Why? Because the cinema has taken over our perception of writing so that everyone writes as if they're writing a screenplay. Can't wait to see what's going to happen. :)
Anonymous
5/17/20, 1:41 PM
thrilled to see this series continued
May 17, 2020
5/17/20, 1:34 PM
as usual,a great and creative concept written perfectly. I didn't expect anything less
5/17/20, 1:04 PM
oh,that was a nice one! I'm excited to read more from you
5/17/20, 12:54 PM
a program like this would be a dream come true. great chapter
5/17/20, 12:38 PM
I'm so glad daddy Matt is getting his treatment. He deserves it
5/17/20, 12:15 PM
Indeed nycboot [great to hear from you again by the way]. We never really say 'soccer' on the UK - we always say 'football' or 'footie'. American football is more like our 'rugby' [named after the private school where the game was invented]. I thought originally that Americans came up with the word 'soccer' to differentiate it from your football, but I've researched the word and found that it is British and short for 'Association football'. Apparently it was upper-class slang for the game. Glad you are enjoying the story.
5/17/20, 12:02 PM
Just getting to your marvelous story now. It has all all your wonderfully unique tell-tale signs, especially how particular you are with setting. Btw, when you say "football" - for us Americans, that's soccer, yes?
5/17/20, 11:45 AM
Will fix it!
Dec 9, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/20, 11:40 AM
I just want to be a Daddy's little cub and let him pump me full of cum
May 17, 2020
5/17/20, 10:35 AM
As always, you didn't disappoint. Great story.
5/17/20, 10:27 AM
Damn, this is such a hot story! But you need to have more respect for your own writing--proofread and spellcheck before submitting your stories. Some of the errors here are just atrocious and completely took me out of the story ("a google screech relived"; "I live to severe Master!"; etc.)
5/17/20, 7:10 AM
It's getting better with each chapter, loving the confusion about the "lost" day and how there change is progressing
Anonymous
5/17/20, 6:08 AM
next chapter please !! :Q been a while since we've had an amazing oblivious mind control author in here :D
5/17/20, 5:26 AM
Please continue this!